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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow thnk god u r bk waiting fr sooo long
loved the concet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice start
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
awesome concept
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plz continue ariya stories too😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar loved the concept. waiting for update. i read

WHEN DREAMS BECOME NIGHTMARES 1 ,but no epilogue in written here, if you have updated in your blog will you give access to read please.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awesome update
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waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey, this sounds so good ...
i like this concept and would love to read more ...
plz do pm me when you update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg a very interesting concept..looking forward to how the story will unfold
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Can't wait for it to begin!
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CHAPTER ONE

"Please please..dont do this to me!" a man standing in the corner of a dark and big room pleaded to the one holding a gun on his head. "this wont happen again! I promise." He said and cried as the thought of his family came into his mind. What will happen to them, how will they live?

"please think of my family." He said hoping to get a reaction from the man other than the gun twirling around his hand. "I am sorry, ASR. This wont happen again! I wont even step out of my house, forget talking to the cops ever again!" he said and dropped on the floor, "I have a family ASR.." the man was pleading and he was pleading to, ASR- Arnav Singh Raizada. While he was smiling at his condition.

He finally got up from the chair and went to him, "you want me to forgive you?" he looked at him with so much hatred that the man looked away. "because of you my four men have been killed! What about their family?!" he shouted and the man started to plead again.

But ASR had no mercy, "NO! just because you were selfish for yourself, my four men are dead, you have two choices. One, get killed, and two, get killed very painfully." He said and smirked.

The man was sure that ASR will kill him for his betrayal. He was arrested and then to save himself he leaked some info about ASR's farm house to the cops. They came to check out the place and in the shootout ASR's 4 men were killed.

"okay!" the man who was pleading to him said, "you want to kill me, then do it, don't forget one thing. If you kill me, you will never ever see her again." He said and buried his hand deep in his pocket, the men behind him drew their guns ready to kill him if he takes out a weapon.

"relax." He said. "its just a paper." He said and took out the photo. He gave it to him and this time ASR's eyes were wide in shock.

"this," the man indicated to the photo. "..is a girl I found when I went to India for a meeting. I recalled her seeing somewhere, and then I remembered, her photo is everywhere in your house, I have seen her in Raizada mansion! She is Anjali Singh Raizada." He said and suddenly the pleading face had a cunning smile. "if you kill me, you will never see her alive again."

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"Khushi!" a woman in her late 40s shouted, "Khushi!!" she shouted again and a man in his 50s came out. "what happened Garima? Why are you shouting?" he said and Garima looked at him keenly.

"this girl!" She indicated to the upper floor where the room of the girl she was shouting at was, "she was supposed to give me the designs of the new salwar kameez. And now she is throwing tantrums!" Garima said and the man, Shashi laughed.

Slowly the faint noise of an anklet was heard and a girl in white came down, "amma, why are you lying?!" she said showing utter shock on her face.

Garima held the girl's ear and said, "I am lying! You asked me for a bribe, and I am lying?" she said and Shashi smiled internally.

"Haw! Bribe! Never!" Khushi said and went to her dad, "I will never ask for bribe, right babuji!" she said and Shashi nodded a yes but then Garima glared at him and he too said, "Khushi, its not good to ask bribes, now give your designs to Garima."

Khushi looked at him and mouthed, "traitor." And Shashi just nodded at her knowingly. Khushi stomped her foot and went to her room and bought the designs. As soon as she handed over the designs to Garima, Shashi bought something from the kitchen, it was plate full of jalebis!

Khushi saw her jalebis and squealed, "MY BRIBE!" and clapped her hands like a 2 year olds and gobbled one full jalebi in her mouth. Shashi and Garima smiled at her antics and Garima rushed out to the designers who waited for her.

Soon Payal came in adjusting her big glasses on the nose and tried to take a jalebi from the plate. Khushi quickly dodged and saved her plate from getting robbed and showed her a thumbs down. "too bad jiji, you cannot take my jalebis!" she said hugging her plate but soon a hand grabbed her plate and Khushi huffed, as she moved away, Udayveer stood behind her with the plate and one jalebi in his mouth. Soon Payal ran to him and he shared some with her as if the plate was his.

Khushi looked at them and then at Shashi but he too showed her his hands as giving up and said, "I have no intention to sleep on the couch, your fights get me to pay the price, deal with it yourself." He said and Khushi stared at him open mouthed.

"this is so not fair!" she said as she saw Shashi leaving the house. Then she went to Uv and Payal, "don't you guys have any shame!"

Uv gulped the jalebi and said as he handed the plate to Payal, "last I checked eating jalebi was not a crime, so why be ashamed." he said and Khushi tried to snatch the plate away from Payal. But this time Payal dodged and took it away. "give it to me!" Khushi whined, "its illegal to keep me away from my jalebis!" she said almost crying,

"and which law and who said that!" asked Payal.

"miss KKG law!" Uv said and they both laughed while Khushi stood there pouting. Soon she stomped to her room again and laid down looking at her ceiling, angry at both of them.

After few moments later she saw a jalebi floating attached to a stick and looked away, soon she saw two. She then could not hold it and grabbed it. She ate and Uv-Payal came out from the back of the bed and sat with the plate on the middle of the bed. They laughed and shared the jalebis together.

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The man thought he had an upper hand on ASR while he talked about Anjali like that but soon ASR lost his mind and signaled someone to bring someone.

Soon a man bought a woman and an other man.

"this is your wife, and this is your brother." ASR said pointing each with his gun. Soon the man who thought he had upper hand gulped and ASR smirked again.

"no!" the man shouted again. Same fear of death ringed in the room again.

"now, you were saying something about having my sister alive. I am sorry, I didn't listen correctly." He said and shot the wife, she fell down and the man screamed, "Lia!"

" Don't do this! Do not harm my brother. I will tell you everything!." The man said, again pleading.

"oh I have no doubt of that. That I will know." He said and played with his gun. "now I really need to know HOW you know about that girl and that she is my sister." ASR then sat on the chair in front of him and looked at him like he will eat him if he doesn't say the truth.

"when I went to India a year ago, I saw her in a shop." He said shaking in fear, "I firstly didn't know who she was, she just appeared familiar.."

"spare me the details! Come to the main part, WHERE did you find her!" he said and the man shook more.

"I knew she was your sister as I had a photo of you with her picture in the background. I followed and saw that she lived with a family. They kept her like a maid. She worked and earned money for the living." He told and every word stung ASR like needles. Here he had this whole empire, property worth billions, and his every legal business in her name and there she was living a nightmare. The owner of Multi national Company- Anjali industries, was living a life of maid! And that drew him mad.

"Address. Now!" he said getting up and gave him a pen and paper. The man wrote the address in shaky handwriting and gave back.

"now let my brother go." He said and ASR smiled.

"sure." He said and turned to the man holding his brother, "let him go." And soon the man too stood up to go, "where are YOU going?" ASR asked.

"we had a deal, I told you where your sister was." he said as he saw the gun pointing at him again.

"right, and I let your brother go, that was the deal." He loaded his gun, "as far as you are concerned, you withheld this information from me for a year, and that time that I craved for my sister, the sadness I felt, is on you! And you made me suffer so you don't deserve to live." He said and was about to pull the trigger when he said, "what if it's the wrong address." He said trying last time to gain an upper hand. "you need to keep me alive, what if it's the wrong address!"

"is it? So I guess I will make your brother meet you in hell soon too." He smirked and pulled the trigger, killing the man.

ASR then took the small paper in his hand and said to himself as he closed the buttons of his coat, "I am coming to get you, sister. To bring you back to the place you really belong."

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PRECAP

ASR was ready to kill the people who kept his sister as a maid, but then he saw something. The people really cared for her, kept her like a family. But they also had her doing all the house chores.

What will ASR do? Kill them to make Anjali do the maid work or forgive them to keep her safe. But then again, was ASR capable of forgiving?

What if Khushi, somehow, spills her coffee on ASR's sister and ruins her favorite dress? What will he do? Will he forgive Khushi Or punish her?

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OH MY GODDD!!!

Eight pages of replies!!! I am sooo happiiiyyy! Yay!!

Thanks guys..you are the best!

Thanks to all of you who replied to me, even after this much time.

Love you all...

I know you guys wanted arhi to meet in this chapter but I promise, their meet will be rocking! As you would have guessed, I saved it for the next chapter! Please read and reply..

As of for my other works, I am writing next chap for the fading butterfly and I will post it soonnn..

Looking forward to the comments. Fingers crossed.

Love,

MUSKAAN

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
sorry for not commenting for part 1
loved the both update
continue soon
and also pls continue pm me

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