new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new

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Pamalo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

i want to say it was very cute romantic and funny everything was blended 2gether beautifully wat can i say of madhav he is the best gosh how much he teases both paarth & subhi nxt draupadi & subhi has such a sweet bond like soul sisters hehehe then bheem so sad of arjun bhim turnes against him in the last moment & wat cn i say about their romance wow arjun certainly knows how to woo his lady love 😉 i mean his wife that mosquito bite was hilarious😆 plz do continue soon waiting for the nxt turn of events and next time plz do pm me dear😃

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

enjoy the preview until next update which can be very soon😊

she tries to move but he hold her hand and bring it around his neck and place it around his neck and puts his hand under her waist and other hand below her knees and lift her scooping up in air.. she felt his hot breath on her body parts leaving her getting shivers spreading all over her body

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anshikashaheer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

aww kitna beautifully likha h meri pyaari sis!!!!!🤗😳just loved the ArSu naughty romance😳☺️hayye m blushing😳😳sooo amazing...😉and my love ParAv were sooo cute!aww they hug☺️☺️and nakul ko kuch aur laga kya😆*😳❤️madhav is sooo naughty..☺️.poor paarth😆loved it...lovely update sis😃

Edited by anshikashaheer - 10 years ago

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

From now my story will be in fan fiction section and I will post here

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

stay tuned for updates 😊😊

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
well done

thank u😊 thanks for commenting😊

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Quite a cute & naughty update dear 😊.
Poor Subhi, Madhav really tested her patience along with Paarth to tell the truth 😆
And what to say about Paarth & Subhi's romance, both playing pranks with each other. 😉
And the reply of mosquito bites to cover up the wound of Paarth was really funny 🤣
Hhmm... the new cook is definitely Subhi... isn't it 😉
Post ur next update soon 😊

thank u dear some more on the way😉

hehe madhav is very naughty right😆

romantic pranks 😆

hehe kalyug ho ya dwaparyug har yug mein mosquito hota hain so as mosquito bite romances😆

u will get answer in next part

thanks for the wonderful comments it made me feel so good😊😊😊

thanks for commenting

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav
Awesome superb part
loved it
loved Arjun- Subhadra moments
their hide n seek teasing romance
all r teasing them n sply Arjun
loved it
continue soon

thank u

more arjun subhi moments are going to come

arjun is caught in web of teasers😆

thanks for commenting😊

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: Pamalo
i want to say it was very cute romantic and funny everything was blended 2gether beautifully wat can i say of madhav he is the best gosh how much he teases both paarth & subhi nxt draupadi & subhi has such a sweet bond like soul sisters hehehe then bheem so sad of arjun bhim turnes against him in the last moment & wat cn i say about their romance wow arjun certainly knows how to woo his lady love 😉 i mean his wife that mosquito bite was hilarious😆 plz do continue soon waiting for the nxt turn of events and next time plz do pm me dear😃

thank u soo much.

madhav loves to do that spl with his loved one when it spl paarth and subhi 😆

yes i showed that angle also

bheem loves his younger siblings so much that it looks like

he does arjun hain hi aise😉

what to do in all yug mosquito bites were available to help the people😆 to hide such things😆

next part very soon sorry for keeping u all wait surely will pm u 😊😊😊

thanks for commenting 😊

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shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: anshikashaheer
aww kitna beautifully likha h meri pyaari sis!!!!!🤗😳just loved the ArSu naughty romance😳☺️hayye m blushing😳😳sooo amazing...😉and my love ParAv were sooo cute!aww they hug☺️☺️and nakul ko kuch aur laga kya😆*😳❤️madhav is sooo naughty..☺️.poor paarth😆loved it...lovely update sis😃

hehe sab aapki mehbaarn who told me to proceed with me writings😳

arsu ka more naughty romance ayega😉

parav is always cutie pies😳hehe no no nakul was confused in other matter😆

thanks for loving it and commenting😉 meri sis