Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Now Arnav is playing Ranjha.. that's great..

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

lol all the Raizadas are against Khushi heheeh nice update

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Amazing update...thanks for the PM

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

amazing parts...

arnav pacifying khushi...

flowers for khushi...

but she won't melt easily...

wow! now arnav will play ranjha...

update soon...

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: IPKlover
I am loving it!!!! What a wonderful turn of events!! Can't wait for their act!!! 😳

😆

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Awesome parts Smita!!

Loved the way Arnav was trying to pacify Khushi. But it won't be that easy. Khushi is stubborn and moreover, he said things that are completely inappropriate.

NK's intentional changes to the Hindi was hilarious. I loved that part! 😆

Looking forward to the upcoming parts! Arnav as Ranjha
They may not be needing any scripted dialogues for this! 😛

Loved it!

Thanks for the email Rashmi! :) x

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

vahh kya bat he...! asi family sabko mile! Awsm updates!

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Oh noo...Khushi's going to face the lion, but a playful one though now. I'm excited for the next. 😃

The turn of the story while reaching the end of the 15th section is really awesome. ASR did caught correctly about what his family is expecting from him. The REAL Khushi, after all 😉

Well now I'm curious to know how Khushi is going to be facing Arnav when he is all playful around her and doing the role of Ranjhana while she will be the Heer of him. 😆

This OS as long it is, it can be. I'm really loving this one so much! When is the next parts going to come??? 😳

Will be waiting

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Hilarious Enacting by Nk to make arnav ranjhaa!!

I was rolling with laughter🤣

Loved all the parts totally!! have done justice to each and every line!

Please cont soon! u didnt mention when is the next update this time

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: deepa.e
Hilarious Enacting by Nk to make arnav ranjhaa!!
I was rolling with laughter🤣
Loved all the parts totally!! have done justice to each and every line!
Please cont soon! u didnt mention when is the next update this time

Likh rahi hoon. No idea when I will finish!!!😆