.....JUST YOU AND ME... (part 20 updatED)THREAD 2 epilogue updated - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rekha85

sammy...Seriusly...I took the most time to read of all the parts i have read!

First of all i cant stop laughing!!!!!!
Randhir and sanyu's convo the day before!!!!
The moments...after reading i found out ...hey why am i sweating a lot! Its was damn hot!
The update was sooo awesome! The ending is sooo memorablee!
Just loved it!!!!!
Keep Writing!
With Love Rekha!


thanks a lot dear... m so glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meenu1613

awsm 😛

i luvd d conversation b/n rd & sanyu😆😆😆
keep up d good work😊


thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reet21

The end was hot as well as funny

actually snayu behaved totally like a child...😆
but you explained in quite detail...
overall loved the story
keep writing...

P.S... i have stopped Pming you about my SS as i know you are busy with your own work...


thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: myrahh

samridhi first of all I want to thank you for writing such ab awesome story nd sharing it with us
its been a pleasure readng ur work
dis part like alqayscwas super good
Kaustuki is really naughty nd sanyu soo shy
finally they became one
thnx 4 pm


thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

EPILOGUE

Another sunrise meant another day into this blissful life with his lovely wife, yes Sandhir's married life was just perfect, of course they had their ups and downs like any other loving couple but with Sanyukta every minute of his life was a journey that he wished never ended. Randhir was not one among those who ever believed in the rationales of marriage, but ever since Sanyukta had become a part of his life, life could have never been so perfect.

He looked at his beautiful wife lying beside him. Sanyu was not one of those who slept till late ,she was always an early bird and 5years into married life never brought a change in that habit, but 2day was something different. And this was something Randhir could never let go without taking advantage of, more sleep for Sanyukta meant that Randhir could stick more time with Sanyukta on bed and more time in bed always meant more *ahem* ahem* for Randhir.

Now as Sanyukta stirred in sleep Randhir nuzzled into the hollow of her neck, biting his way into her delicate ear lobes

S: umm...sone do na randhir, kal raat bhi tumm...

R: madam subha ho gai hai, I need something from you..

S: nahi... pehle sone do mujhe ( with that she buried her face in the pillows)

Randhir snaked his hands on her bare waist and leaned over to her, turning her to face him he moved closer, Sanyu wide awake, any trace of sleep long gone, their lips were now inches apart, a kiss on its way to land on sanyu's seductive lips and just then

"Paappa...pa.." and a small boy of three years barged into their room

R: lo aagaya mere life ka sabse bada kabab mein haddi...aargh!!, sanyu giggled.

Standing in the doorway to their bedroom was a chubby little three year old boy, the kabab mein haddi to Randhir's love life and his wife's bodyguard, their son ARMAAN.

A: paappa.. what were you doing to my mumma??

Both sandhir now startled and stammering

Sandhir: v..vo..vh.oo

A: what vho..vho..? what were you doing to my mumma?

A: mumma, paapa ne aapko kucch kiya kya, you tell me mumma.. I will tell nana and maamu

R: ooye!! Agar meine teri mumma ko kuch "KIYA" nai hota na toh tu aaj paida hi nai hota..

S: Randhir.. idiot kya bole jaa rahe ho tum, kuch to sharam karo..

A: wt the.. kya kiya aapne mumma ko? aur mumma .. aap blanket se cover ho kar kyon soo rahe ho, aapko fever hai? Chalo aap uto ( with that he tries to remove the blanket)

S: ran..dh..irr!!

R: oh.. mere baap, tu kya kar raha hai?, tu chal yaha se

A: no! mumma is not feeling well haina mumma

S: Randhir.. dammit aagar tumne jaldi kuch kiya nai toh mein tumhara sar phod dungi.. DO SOMETHING DAMNIT..

R: abhi karu? Iske samne? ..Sanyu.. ttum

S: o, Randhir for god's sake mein uss "karne" ki baat nahi kar rahi.. ( she gave out a fierce whisper)

R: h-ha.. samaj gaya ruKo wait, Armaan chalo, tumhe kuch dikhana hai

A: chee .. paapa why are you wearing only your boxers? Where are your pants...? Mumma aap aankhe band karo...don't see paapa (covers sanyu's eyes)

S: RANDHIR DAMNIT, tum pant nai pehen sakte the kyaa?

R: aarey tumne hi toh kal nikala tha..

S:Randhir, Armaan just GET OUTT, NOW!!

Both randhir and armaan run for their life seeing Sanyukta's angry wala mode.

Sanyukta slowly picked upon the corners of the blanket, covering herself she moved over to the washroom,a smile playing on her lips. Typical was all she could think,what with these two wonderful men in her life, life could never be more perfect.

No sooner did she open the shower, she found two familiar hands snaking its way on to her bare waist

"Mrs. Shekhawat, aren't you forgetting something?" with that he pulled her flush over to his body and greedily claimed her mouth.

"Thank you sanyukta ,thank you for making my life perfect".

And once again he drilled his way into sanyu's mouth, sealing their life long contract with LOVE.

AUTHOR'S NOTE

(WRITER OF PART 1 TO 20)

Hey people I just wana thank you all from the deepest bottom of my heart... what a journey it was with you all... m so happy today... I wanna tell u all one thing... when I started JUST YOU AND ME... I thought to make an os... then I decided to convert it into a two shots... then three shots... and rest is history... I had never expected this immense love and affection for my ffs and me.. that u all were ready to fight with mods... this journey of just one and a half month with this ff and with you all... I will always remember and will always cherish those moments for the rest of my life... I have received so many comments/compliments for this ff... that I don't have words to say thanks to u... yesterday only I made a new fb and twitter a/c... and they are flooding with frnd req. and follow req. ... I mean I am feeling top of this world rightnow... I haven't received so much appreciation in my entire life... I really feel like hugging you all...

I know all of u like A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE more but I personally like this ff more... Coz this is my first write up...i have received some very good feedbacks both on fb and on forums... some say that :

we can connect with your story"

I am just like sanyukta of ur ff'

" this ff is sooo cute"

I have made an a/c on if just for ur ff'

"this is the best ff... and it is so decent"

" if sandhir were married they wud be like this only"

And last but not the least

"ur ff brought smile on my face and I feel very happy to read it"

I mean for such feedback I can die...it means a lot for an amateur like me... I mean I know my presentation is pathetic... Many a times u must have found out that there are spelling mistakes and grammatical errors... my language was so simple... I never edit my chapters coz I become lazy... I post them raw... But still u guys never complained ... so I have decided that I will continue writing... But not on indiaforums... But I will be finishing all my pending ffS... Ppl I have make a/cs for my writings specially for u all on facebooks, twitter and on wattpad... Facebook and twitter links I have posted but for wattpad links just pm me... also ppl who are on fb and twitter with me can take the wattpad link from my timeline...

Also I will miss these days a lot when many of my silent readers used to give me feedback in my pm box(chupke se)... I wud appreciate u all if u guys open up with ppl... All are very nyc here...

Last but not the least... for this epilogue don't leave ur feedbacks for me... My very good friend on indiaforums GUL aka mastgudia has written this... plz plz plz leave ur comments and feedback for her... she deserves it... I think Gul u shud write more... I wud love to read them... Also everyone plz say thanks to her coz she took out so much time for this epilogue... despite of the fact that she had her exams also she is not feeling well... so gul I love u dear...

p.s. I love u all... keep encouraging me and Gul to write more... hugs and kisses...

SAMRIDHI...

Edited by mastgudia93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow !!!!!!!!! wat a ending yaar dat 2 humorous ... just loved it😳...I m not satisfied reading it once ... i m gonna raed it again ...specially d epiloge...THNK U SO VERY MUCH SAMRIDHI😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
no wrds for this ff dear i cant search wrds to tell u yar
thats y no comment i loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ending was just hialrious n funny n romantic too..
arman na bilkul... kya bolu no words.. but he is cute ofcouse
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsmm epilouge...
do write more dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
A perfect ending to... a beautiful FF...
but samridhi the link u provided of ur fb acc is not working... plzz post the correct link..

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