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Gayuraj

@Gayuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Wonderful update as usual..
Thanks for PM

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Amazing update... 👏

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Same pinch Vanhi... I love Viswa more than Arnav because he set her free to go with the man she loves truly madly and deeply and he was there for her when she needed someone to support her in her difficult phase...

The songs lyrics you've shared in this chapter are lovely and the kiss Arshi shared after their conversation was breathtaking & a perfect moment to convey how they are incorrigibly in love with each other...Arnav had bared his heart out to her and Loved the way Khushi took away his insceurites..

I totally agree with Lavanya that he should move in his life...The way she understood Viswa and his inner feelings, looks like she loves him from the bottom of her heart..Because like Viswa she cannot see him in pain and she genuinely wanted him to move on in his life..Superb update

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Marvellous and very emotional update.

I also can't stop myself from thinking about these two. Pain and thought of Viswa in Khushi's life is making arnav more miserable. But like she said she lives him not Viswa.

You write arnav and Khushi's part so beautifully. Their love and pain can be felt by any one.

What have you decided about their fate. Please don't make it a sad ending. I hate sad ending. At least in fiction we can think of happy ending.

Loved lavanya in this. She loves him a lot. Knowing he loves Khushi. Yet she is here to support him. Viswa should not let anything come in between this time.

Loved reading today's update.

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#645

I agree with u along with arnav realy lov vishwa i hope he can move on his life butiful updt waiting for next part

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#646

m in love with this song... n beautiful chapter vanhi... i think even i love viswa more

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Beautiful chapter.. as always.

Yes, as much as we love Arnav and Khushi, Viswa really has to let her go as she will never see him beyond a friend.

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#648

nice chapter

loved arshi's part

loved how arnav was keeping on telling khushi that he loves her

viswa needs to move on

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Life has a funny way of teaching us about love and heartbreak...

Viswa loves Khushi, knows everything about her likes and dislikes, to Khushi, he's a good friend, her best friend... Lavanya loves Viswa enough to know what to say , what to do to help him heal, yet Viswas love for Lav will never be on par for his love for Khushi...

Arnav feeling insecure upon realization of Viswas love, scared him but Khushi allayed his insecurity and soothed away his fears...

Your choice of songs was spot on today ... " when a heart breaks, it doesn't break even' ...