'The Forgotten' - Swaron SS part-8 page 35 - Page 14

Ooh...man...i m sooo happy...finally you updated...thanku soo much...u r an excellent writer...all ur works are just osme..nd dis is my fav...nw comming to the update...very well written...sooo intense..sooo romantic...i m soo addicted...

Oh my God
Update
Let me dance first

Litrly dear I m.overwhelmed

Baba swayam.hahaha
Omg sharon
Poor swayam felt shy

Lovely yr
Swaron moment is wow
So finally swayam started feeling something

Hope they meet soon
NOW UPDATE SOON PLZZZ
thanks 4 d pm dear

Magical chapter with magical swaron chemistry
Well penned
Thanks ffor updating
And thanks for the pm

Finally read all the chapters...
U have really penned it down in a very awesome way...
Just luvd it...
Till part 5 i tried to stop my tears but while readng those chapters i cried...U have expressed sharon's pain very welll...
Can't see her this way...
Nd this chapter is really awesome...Swaron 1st kiss...
Plss next update mein to SwaRon ko milwa dena...plzzz
Swayam ka memry kb wapas aaega???
Remember me SS mein sharon ka memry loss hua nd isme Swayam ka...
Bt fr v SwaRon ko pain mein nai dekh skte...
Isme to swayam ko koi idea hi nai h ki wo kitne imp person ko bhool gya h...
Plsss jldi SwaRon ka meetng krwao...plzzz
Waitng fr next part eagerly...update asap...
Thanx fr pm..

That was so romantic :)

Happy u update ..

Finally you updated
And my god do what an update. It was so so so amazing.
The way the flash back starts and then the way it ends.
**blush **

The intimacy level. The passion. The feelings. Everything was simply perfect. Specially the couple.
Waiting for the next update eagerly
Want SwaRon to come face to face.

Update soon is baar. Please.
And thanks for.the PM. Appreciate it. 👍🏼

😳 ☺️
Re-read it again. A trip to SwaRon dreamland again.

Forgot to mention. Beautiful work done by you on the writing part

wow what a beautiful romantic update

Wooww...awesome do updates soon :)