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Armaan basket ko alag nai karna
Uff ye shanky kitna khurrat hai
ab armaan ko kya kya karna padega
I hope wo shanky ko akal aa jaye
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Part 15

(pura gang cafetaria par baithkar soch rhe hote hai kya karna hai.)

Riddhima- mujhe to kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai...kya ho rha hai...kal tak sab kitna acha tha... Aur aaj...sab bigad gya...kuch kro armaan...

Armaan- mene kha na..riddhima me sab thik kar dunga...sabse pele mujhe dr shashank se baat karni hogi...
(tabhi piche se ek awaaz aati hai..dr shashank ki)

Shashank- kahiye dr. Armaan kya kehna chahte hai dr armaan...
(armaan aur gang sab piche mudte hai aur dr shashank ko vha dekhkar shock ho jate hai...)
Shashank- kahiye na dr armaan ab aap chup kyu hai.. Khiye jo kehna hai...
Armaan- sir.. Aap mujhse bade hai me aapki respect karta hu...aur me sirf aapse yehi kehna chahte hu...ki main riddhima se boht pyaar karta hu..boht zyada...me jaanta hu..aap riddhima ke papa hai...aur yeh bhi jaanta hu..ki aapse zyada pyaar riddhima ko koi nhi kar sakta hai...shayad me bhi nhi.. Par yeh zarur kahunga...ki aapke baad agar riddhima se koi sabse zyada pyaar kar sakta hai...to vo me hu sir...shayad aap mere past records ko dekhkar mujhe judge kar rhe hai...par bas ek baar aap apni beti par bharosa kar lijiye...aap mere pyaar par shaq kar sakte hai...par apni beti ke pyaar par bharosa kijiye sir...ap to riddhima ko jante hai vo kabhi galat faisla nhi legi sir...bas ek baar riddhima ke pyaar par bharosa kar lijiye...please...
Sashank- mujh pta hai dr. Armaan... Meri beti kya kar rhi hai...bacchi hai vo abhi kuch nhi pta hai use...abhi..aap ke is dhoke ko pyaar samjh rhi hai...
Riddhima- ppa me bacchi nhi hu...aap kyu nhi samjh rhe hai...pyaar karti hu me armaan... ..
Shashank(gusse me) riddhima...bas...ab me tumhare muh se dr armaan ka nam bhi nhi sunna chahta hu...
Riddhima(gusse me hi)- to aap apne kaan band kar lijiye papa...kyuki meri har saans me armaan basta hain...meri har dhadhkan se aapko sirf ek awaaz ayegi...armaan armaan armaan...mujhe ab samjh aa rha hai...aap aisa kyu kar rhe hai...agar aap mere asli papa hote to kabhi aisa nhi karte...aaj aapne sabit kar dia hai...ki aapne mujhe adopt kiya tha..
(dr shashnk riddhima ki yeh bat sunkar usse thappad marte hai...aur riddhima ko bhi yakeen nhi hota hai ki vo kya bol rhi thi...vo guilt feel karti hai)
Riddhima- I am sorry papa... Vo mujhe vo sab nhi kehna chahiye tha..i am sor...(isse pehle riddhima aur kuch bolti...shashank armaan ki taraf dekhkar bolte hai..)
Shashank- dekha dr armaan kya... Bna diya hai... Apne meri bacchi ko...ki aaj vo apne papa se tamiz se baat karna tak bhul gyi hai...
Riddhima- papa isme armaan ki koi galti nhi hai...papa..vo me hi kuch...
Shashank- riddhima agar tumhare dil me...ab bhi apne papa ki zra bhi izzat hai..to.. Mere saath chalo ghar abhi...aur agar..tum mera saara pyaar bhul chuki ho to...dr armaan ke saath chali jaao..me tumhe kabhi nhi rokunga...par yeh yaad rakhna...agar tumne.. Dr armaan ko choose kiya to tum apne papa ko hamesha ke liye kho dogi...faisla tumhara hai...
(riddhima shashank ki yeh baat sunkar boht shock ho jaati hai...usse samjh nhi aata vo kya kare..vo armaan ki taraf dekhti hai...armaan usse kehta hai..)
Armaan- riddhima... Aaj tum apne papa ke paas jao...shayad tumhare papa ko tum par bharosa nhi hai...par tumhare armaan ko bharosa hai..shayad tumhare papa darte hai...ki agar tum mujhse pyaar krogi to unhe bhool jaogi...par me nhi darta mujhe pta hai..chahe tum khi bhi ho...par mere liye tumhara pyaar kabhi kam nhi hoga...mujhe apni riddhima par aur uske pyaar par pura bharosa hai...jao tum apne papa ko.choose karo...par yeh mat samjhna...ki me tumhe paane ke liye kuch nhi karunga mujhpar bharosa rakhna riddhima tumhara armaan tumhe zarur lene ayega...aur koi bhi hame nhi rok payega...
Shashank- dr armaan aapko kya lagta hai...aapke yeh sab bolne se me riddhima aur aapke liye ha keh dunga... Riddhima aapki ho jayegi...
Armaan- riddhima to hamesha se meri hi hai..sir...bas aapko yakeen dilane ki der hai...aur mujhe pta hai..mera pyaar itna kamzor nhi hai...mere pyaar me itni takat hai..ki vo bade se bade pahad ko jhuka de..phir aap to ek insaan hai sir...mujhe yakeen hai...ki jeetega to mera pyaar hi...aap haar jaoge sir...aap haar jaoge...
Shashank- vo to dekhte hai...ki aapka so called pyaar jetta hai..ya meri parvarish...
Armaan- me dua karunga sir ki aapki parvarish jete.. Par itna to mujhe bhi yakeen hai..mera pyaar nhi harega...
(dr shashank riddhima ka haath pakadkar vha se riddhima ko lejate hai...aur riddhima piche mud mud kar armaan ko dekhti rehti hai...anjali bhi riddhima aur shashank ke saath chali jaati hai...sab vhi khade armaan se kehte hai...)
Rahul- armaan tu fikr mt kr...mujhe pta hai..tera pyaar zarur jeetega...
Abhi- ha armaan...tu fkr mt kr...sb thk hoga.
Sid- ha.. Armaan tum aur riddhima ek honge...
Naina- ha armaan. . Jab itna badi bimari tumhare pyaar ke aage haar gyi...mujhe yakeen hai ki dr shashank bhi haar jayenge...

IN LOCKER ROOM
(Naina aur sid dono bethe huye hote hai)
Naina- pta nhi ..kyu dr shashank armaan aur riddhima ke pyaar ko nhi dekh paa rhe hai...sab jaante hai..armaan aur riddhima ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai...
Sid - tum sahi keh rhi ho...pyaar boht khoobsurat chiz hoti hai...(sid naina ko.dekhte dekhte kehta.hai)aur aaj armaan ki ankhon me dard dekha jab dr shashank riddhima ko usse door le jaa rhe the...tab pta chala ki pyaar kitna zaroori hota hai..aur me ab dubaar apne pyaar ko nhi khona chahta hu..bas tumse itna kehna chahta hu...I am Falling In Love With You Naina...
UPCOMING SCENE FOR PART 16
SONG SEQUENCE
(riddhima sing)
Log Kahte Hain Paagal, Hoon Main Ye Bhi Na Jaanu
Dil Lutaayaa Hai Maine, Ab Kisi Ki Na Maanoon
Chain De Kar Ke Maine, Bechainiyaan Ye Lee Hain
Neenden Udaa Ke Maine, Tumse Vafaayen Ki Hain
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Jee Rahen Hain Ham Tere Dam Se
Ab Ye Pyaar Na Hogaa Phir Hamse
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Hamko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse

Part16

Sid - tum sahi keh rhi ho...pyaar boht khoobsurat chiz hoti hai...(sid naina ko.dekhte dekhte kehta.hai)aur aaj armaan ki ankhon me dard dekha jab dr shashank riddhima ko usse door le jaa rhe the...tab pta chala ki pyaar kitna zaroori hota hai..aur me ab dubaar apne pyaar ko nhi khona chahta hu..bas tumse itna kehna chahta hu...I. Am Falling In Love With You Naina...
(naina boht shock ho jaati hai sid ki baat sunkar)

Naina- sid...yeh...yeh kya keh rhe ho tum...mene tumhe kabhi aisi nazro.se nhi dekha hai..sid..tum mere acche dost ho...aur mujhe to laga me bhi tumhari sirf...

Sid- I know naina...me bhi tumhe sirf dost maanta tha..par pyaar to pyaar hota hai..kabhi sadiyo lag jaate hai pyaar hone me aur kabhi..bas ek pal me ho jaata hai...mujhe tumse ek pal wala pyaar ho gya hai...shayad me yeh tumhe kabhi btata bhi nhi..par armaan aur riddhima ke pyaar ne mujhe ehsaas dilaya...jab pyaar door hota hai na...to uski ehmiyat pta chalti hai...aur me tumhe nhi khona chahta hu..naina..tumhe time chahiye. Na...lo..me tumhari jawab ki puri zindagi wait karme ko tayyar hu...

Naina- no sid...hum ek nhi ho sakte I dont love you aur mujhe.samjh nhi aa rha hai tumhe kya hua hai...tum aise kyu bol rhe ho...but mera jawab sirf ek hi.rhega no...

Sid- par naina kam se kam...

Naina- maine kha na..sid no...

Sid-par naina bina soche tum kaise...

Naina - mene soch liya hai sid. No no no...

Sid- ok fine...dr naina kashyap
(sid vha se gusse me chala jaata hai..aur naina apne sar par haath rakhkar vha par hi beth jaati hai..)

IN GUPTA HOUSE

(Shashank riddhima ka haath pakadkar use ghar ke andar laata hai...aur anjali bhi piche piche aati hai...padma sab ko aise dekhkar confuse ho jaati hai... Shashank gusse me riddhima ka haath chodte huye padma se kehta hai...)

Shashank- samjhao apni beti ko padma...armaan ne ise pagal kar diya hai...kuch nhi soch rhi hai yeh kya kar rhi hai...kya bol rhi kuch nazar nhi aa rha hai ise.. Us ladke ke liye...mujhse battamizi kar rahi hai...us ladke ke liye...us awara ladke ke liye...

Riddhima- papa uska naam armaan hai..aur vo.awaara nhi hai...vo aapki beti ka pyaar hai...

Shashank- dekha padma..kaise baat kar rhi hai yeh mujhse...riddhima kya ab tumhare liye vo armaan hi sab kuch hai...tumhare ma baap kuch nhi hai tumhaare liye...

Riddhima- hai... Papa aap log bhi zaruri hai mere liye..par aap kyu nhi samjh rhe hai..jitna aap meri zindagi me zaruri hai..utna hi armaan bhi hai...

Shashank- bas uska naam bhi nhi sun sakta hu main...is ghar mein...ab mujhe pta hai..tum kaise use bhoologi...ab tumhari shaadi hogi riddhima... Vo bhi us ladke.se jise me pasand karunga...samjhi tum

Riddhima- kabhi nhi papa...me armaan ke siwa kisi se shaadi nhi karungi samjhe aap...me kisi se shaadi nhi karungi...

Shashank- shaadi to tumhe karni padegi riddhima... Varna me apni jaan de dunga.. Ab tum soch lo..tumhaare liye kya important vo ladka armaan ya...apne pita ki zindagi.or me mazaak nhi kar rha hu..riddhima..kal sanjeevni ki.. 25th aniversary party hi..vhi me tumhe apne dost ke ladke se milwaunga...aur mujhe koi aur tamasha nhi chahta hun...samjhi..

(riddhima yeh sab sunkar kuch bol nhi paati hai...padma shashank ke piche chali jaati hai...riddhima vhi zameen par bethkar ron lagti hai.)

Riddhima- kyuu?? Me hi kyu...kyu...hota hai mere saath aisa..
(anjali riddhima ko sambhalti hai)

Anjali- ridhzi apne aapko.sambhal...sab thik hoga...

In Sanjeevni Party

(pura gang vha pohcha hota hai...vo dekhte hai...ki shashank,anjali aur riddhima...enter hote hai...riddhima ko dekhkar armaan ke face par smile aa jaati hai or riddhima ke bhi...jo shashank notice karta hai...vo riddhima ka.haath pakadta hai..aur use apne dost aur uske bete ki taraf le jaata hai..)

Shashank- riddhima.. Meet my friend..mr krishna chopra aur yeh hai inka beta vikrant...

Vikrant- hi riddhima.. Nice meeting you..

(riddhima fake smile deti hai..jo armaan notice kar rha hota hai...vo confuse hota hai...dr shashank use confuse dekhkar...riddhima ko vikrant ke saath chodkar armaan ke paas jaate hai..)

Shashank- kya hua dr armaan itne confuse kyu lag rhe hai...ohh aap soch rhe honge..ki riddhima vikrant ke saath kya kar rhi to me bta deta hu..vo riddhima aur vikrant ke rishte ki baat chal rhi hai...aur riddhima khud viikrant se milne ke liye ha ki hai..(armaan ko shashank ki baat par believe nhi kar paata hai..)hairaan ho gye dr armaan...maine kha tha na..pyaar vyaar sirf kuch pan ka pagalpan hota hai..(shashank vha se chala jaata hai aur armaan vha gusse me kuch aur soch nhi paata hai..aur dekhta hai vikrant riddhima ko chodkar apne papa ki baat sunne jaata hai..armaan mauka dekhta hai..aur riddhima ka haath zor se pkadkar use party se thodi door le aata hai..)

Riddhima- aah...armaan mera haath choro muje drd ho rha hai..

Armaan- or jo mujhe dard ho rha hai..usa kya riddhima...

Riddhima- armaan tum kya keh rhe ho... Mujhe kuch..

Armaan- zyada bholi mat bano... Riddhima...mujhe pta chl gya hai.

Riddhima- kya pta chal gya...tum kya keh rhe ho..

Armaan- ohh to tumhe kuch nhi pta...to yeh vikrant koun hai riddhima...

Riddhima- armaan voh..pa..

Armaan- tumhe mujhpr bharosa nhi tha riddhima itni jaldi..haar maanli.. Tumne...kaise haar sakti ho tumm.. Shaadi ke liye.. Rishte dekhti phir rhi ho...

Riddhima- armaan aisa nhi hai...

Armaan- to phir kaisa hai riddhima...yha yeh sab kya ho rha hai...tum ek taraf mujhpar bharosa rakhti ho aur dusri taraf tum rishte dekh rhi ho..

Riddhima- armaan tum galat samjh rhe ho...

Armaan- to thik hai riddhima... Mujhe galat saabit kardo..aaj kuch ishaaro me aisa kehdo..jisse mujhe yakeen jo jaaye ki tum.. Abhi bhi meri hi ho..(yeh kehkar armaan vapas party me chala jaata hai...)
(sid vha drink counter me bethkar naina ke baare me soch rha hota hai...ki naina vha aati hai)

Naina- sid vo me...

(sid naina ko dekhakar uthkar jaane lagta hai...naina uska haath pakadleta hai..)

Naina- kya ho gya hai..tumhe sid..hum ache dost hai..na...sirf isliye ki mene tumhe na kardi kya tum hamari dosti tod doge...

Sid- nahi naina...main kabhi hamari dosti nhi todta agar..tum kam se kam ek baar sochti to... Par tumne bina soche jaane yuhi na...kar diya...ab hamari bato ka koi faida nhi hai...(sid vha se chla jaata hai..)

Naina- pta nhi sid..par jab tum mujhse baat nhi kar rhe ho...mujhe boht bura lag rha hai...

(riddhima vhi khade hokar kuch sochti hai phir party ke beech me akar kehti hai)

Riddhima - me aap sab ke saamne kuch gaana chahti hu...or jiske liye ishaara hai...mujhe yakeen hai ki vo samjh jayega..(riddhima yeh armaan ki taraf bolkar kehti hai..aur phir gaana start karti hai armaan ki taraf dekhte huye hi..)

Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Hamko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse
Pa Pa Dha Sa, Ni Dha Ni Dha Ni Pa Pa Dha Sa
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Hamko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse
Ab Ye Pyaar Na Hogaa Phir Hamse
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Hamko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse

(riddhima shashank ki taraf dekhti hai..)
Log Kahte Hain Paagal, Hoon Main Ye Bhi Na Jaanu
Dil Lutaayaa Hai Maine, Ab Kisi Ki Na Maanoon
(phir armaan ko dekhti hai)
Chain De Kar Ke Maine, Bechainiyaan Ye Lee Hain
Neenden Udaa Ke Maine, Tumse Vafaayen Ki Hain
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Jee Rahen Hain Ham Tere Dam Se
Ab Ye Pyaar Na Hogaa Phir Hamse
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Hamko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse...

(armaan riddhima ko.dekhkar smile karta hai..aur gaata hai)
Kuchh Ishaaron Mein Tumne, Hamse Jo Ye Kahaa Hai
Ab Yakin Aa Raha Hai, Tumko Bhi Kuchh Huaa Hai
Kyun Tumko Dekhte Hain, Kyaa Dil Mein Sochte Hain
Toofaan Jo Uth Rahaa Hai, Ham Usko Rokte Hain
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Ye Milan Hai Sanam Kaa Sanam Se
Ab Ye Pyaar Na Hogaa Phir Hamse
Ya Ya Ya Ya
Kasam Ki Kasam Haan Kasam Ye Kasam
Dee Kasam Lee Kasam Haan Kasam
Kasam Kasam Kasam
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se, Hamko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse
Ab Ye Pyaar Na Hogaa Phir Hamse
(aur ek dusre ke gale lag jaate hai...)

UPCOMING SCENE FOR PART17

Armaan- .aapne riddhima ke liye rishta chuna aur riddhima usse mili bhi...sir yeh sab. Aapne. isliye nhi kiya...taaki riddhima ki shaadi aap us ladke se karwa sake...aapne yeh sab mujhe dikhane ke liye kiya...taaki riddhima aur mere beech galatfemi ho...par aap bhool gaye sar ...ki pyaar me galatfemiya ho sakti hai..har rishte ka haq hai...yeh...par dooriyan...vo hamare pyaar me ho hi nhi sakti hai...aaj me khud kehta hu sir ki aapki parvarish jeet gayi...par mere pyaar ne...aapki parvarish ko jeeta kar bhi hara diya...aur mere pyaar haar kar bhi jeet gaya sir.

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Edited by desire_nikki - 11 years ago

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