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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarahjac

Finally both of them are asking the right questions, looking for the answers within themselves. Peace /happiness can never be attained until you let yourself free from all the unrest within...I am looking forward to their second one on one 'talk', I loved how Khushi didn't relent to his request initially...She can forgive, but can she ever forget???

I feel for Arnav, he has suffered much, first it was fate then it was his own decision which lead him to an emotional abyss, it's funny how he understands that Khushi never grew emotionally, what about him? I am not oblivious to his pain but somehow I find myself inclined towards Khushi.
Trust once crumbled can never go back to its original form, her immense love can push her back into A's arms but she would still be guarding her heart, how can she be the spirited young woman and live her life the way it should be if she lives in constant fear of losing all over again...

PS: enough suspense with the prologue already, you didn't have to add more :P ...I see an evil smile on your face :P ...me thinks, Khushi broke up with NK and Arnav needs to tell her that he still loves her ?


Love dthis comment.
about bold, I was thinking on exact same lines. He broke her heart at dawn and noon, how can he get her to trust him again ?? It will take gargantuan effort on Arnav's part. There is lot of healing required for for of them.
Khushi's fear is very true- what if problems arise again and he shuts her out??

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

All these secrets are a little difficult to digest.

I am suffering from indigestion!
Could you please find the cure, Sandy! 😉
I hope you understand my predicament!


Originally posted by: shree10



Can you have some mercy on your readers this time and update quicker??


I'm so sorry girls. I maybe later than usual this week. Will let you know soon on my update schedule. You'll have the update of the week, of course :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
a truly brilliant update!!! Your writing skills genuinely amaze me... I mean suppose this brilliant piece of story is gng to be made into a serial ( which I desperately wish for) evrything along with an incredible story, deep thoughtful dialogues , mind blowing talented actors ( ofcourse our IPK gang was incomparable ), wonderful lavish sets , best attractive costumes ever , brilliant screenplay n evrything important required to make a serial is ready for the director ... A perfectly tailor made work... Hats off to your creative writing👏👏👏 . While reading it I truly feel as if I m part of this wonderful journey ...
Coming to the update...everything including Khushis conflicts with her mind n heart to Arnavs guilt n sorrow , from Anas emotional thoughts about herself n missing her parents to Amans strong support n undying love n understanding for her , from payals love n responsibilities for her family to Mamijis genuine acceptance n pride...from Nanijis silent wishes n prayers to ANJALIS ray of hope for his brother... Everything was just brilliant n outstandingly written ...
N as you say the revelation of prologue is nearing I suddenly have this strong feeling that it is khushi n her n Arnavs angel in the prologue n it is indeed none other than the most beautiful angel ever with brown eyes , dark black hair, bow shaped lips n everyone's most loved ever...
The depth n strong emotions of this story truly amaze me n m lucky to come across such amazing works...
Waiting desperately for next..
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
oky finally finished reading till 45 chappies...whn i came across d story, d thing i first checked was wheather its cmpleted or not!!...😉 bt whn i read prolouge n 1st chap, i couldnt hold my self back!!..
its one of d awesome stories i hv come across if!!...
oky so after reading d prolouge , i thought tht was khushi's mom or smthing..bt nw i guess its payal's mom!!...bt still nt sure...waiting for u to reveal tht one!!...
d way ana,khush n pal bonded together, d way u showed der first meeting, was brilliant!!...
in any arshi story, i look forward to read some arshi scenes bt in dis one, i loved all three soul sister's scenes!!...
loved anya!!...so down to earth n a grl wid a golden heart!!...
khushi's first meet wid arnav!!...as a teen...n ofcourse she hv to bump in to him!...thts arshi!!...😉
aww did i mention i love shadow!!...
i love d way shadow n khushi bonded together after der first meeting!!...
flirty akash is smthing new!!...bt love him...😉
n thn khushi witnessed famous ASR's anger!!...for her bestie!!...
whn he said sorry to her!!...tht to twice !!aww...😳
loved anji's entry, her views for lyf!!...how she feared comitment!!...
at d movie, d attraction dey were fighting, d way arnav signaled khushi to move with him, whn akash wanted to switch der seat!!...i litrally got goosebumps!!!...beautifully written!!...👏
thn anji's b'day party!!...introducing shyam jha!!...oh!!..how i lov him in this one!!...a true lover!...
god!!!...thn d kiss!!!...it was amazing...u written d scene too well!!...it coulnt be more better!!...i was blushing while reading d scene!!...☺️
n thn it happened!!...:( whn no one was wrong i guess!!...not arnav, not anji n not d family!!..bt i agree wid khushi tht he should hv told his plans to his family!!...
d forceful kiss!!...n after tht hw horrible he felt!!...d station meet whn khushi was leaving was damn heat touching!!...loved it...
thn after d graduation!!...sanjeev!!...😉well, i liked rajeev khandelwal too!!...bt none s compared to ASR ofcourse!!...😳
payal's char is lovely too...practical abt lyf for her own reasons!!...and a goal to acheive!!...
n thn thrs payash!!...god!!...d way all d frndz trapped them to confess der love was superb!!...😉
aman n anya r adorable!!...
anji's wedding!!...whn khushi read d wedding card!!...i was jumping wid happiness tht wow!!...anji has finally decided to maeet shyam!!...
thn d confusion!!!...bt thnx to anya , coz of tht, arshi met after d break!!...all alone!!...😉
d kiss!!...☺️
loved khushi's bonding wid all d raizadas!!...nani is a sweetheart!!...
i dnt blame manorama too in payash matter...well she wants best for her son !!...n again no one is at d wrong place!!...
aman's confession was smthing!!...aahh!!...how much i loved it!!...finally anya-aman together!!...
d scene, whr arnav save khushi at d market!!...was aahh no words!!...n thn d aftereffects!!...😉
anji's emotions at d wedding dy n d sisters talk was written perfectly!!...
so anji n nani had got d idea bt arshi !!...anji after d night club n nani after d haldi wala romance!!...😉
arshi's first date was beautiful!!...
n thn expexct d unexpected!!!...d cnfusion!!...d tension!!...d worry!!...
n finally arnav got her!!...took care of her!!...heart touching moments those were!!...dey became one!!...d love!!...d bond!!...☺️
n again!!!...expect the unexpected!!...
u kne d helicopter scene, whn he said , rather shout MOVE to her!!...i was lyk!!! oh nooo!!..plzzz nt again!!...😭
d accident!!!...d guilt arnav felt!!...i didnt blame him, whn he said all those to khushi at d terrece coz he was abt to loose his sister, his life!!...bt tht moment was khushi's!!...i coulnt help bt cry for her!!!...d moment it was!!...😭😭 n top of all...anya witnessed it!!...god!!!...
d only gud thing happened tht time, was payal-mamorama relation!!...
after tht, d gudbye letter khushi wrote to her besties!!...i had tears in my eyes while reading tht!!...so broken she was!!...poor grl!!...😭
and tht letter effected many relations!!...again, no one was at fault!!...
d way anya-arnav relation got strained...i couldnt help bt to think lyk anji tht isnt anya streching it too far!!.isnt tht betwwen family n frndz!!...bt thn she was more thn a bestie to anya!!...
khushi in singapore!!...her success!!...her proffetional growth!!...thn she met aman!!...loved tht moment!!...
n she decided to come back!!...
the reunion of d soul sisters was heart touching...
n nk!!!...khushi's fiance!!!...😲
can only imagine arnav's conditon!!...
d accident again!!...bt tht changed relations for good!!...anya-arna, payal-arnav!!...n ofcourse arshi!!!...
arnav winessed nk kissing khushi!!...😭😭
bt payal is sure upto smthing!!...attacker to protecter!!..in akash's words!!...😉
time for anya's wedding nw!!...airport scene!!...arshi's nok-jhok was adorable!!!...loved it...
whn arnav met her parents lyk a true gentlemen!!...😉
n d road trip!!!...d awkwardness in d beggining follwed by chitchatting!!...😛
mandir scene was touching!!...
n came d much awaited confession!!...
whn arnav said, dnt marry him khushi!!...i was lyk ya plzplz dnt!!...
arnav sharing his past with khushi!!...superbly written!!!...👏
dnt want nk in d picture now!!..ofcourse hes total darling bt still!!...😛
anya-khushi-payal's frndship, love n bonding is incredible!!...❤️
did i mention aliya is a sweetheart!!...❤️
i wish i didnt start reading d story, coz i cant wait for d update now!!...
p.s. i knw dis is kinda too long, bt belive me, i wanted to write much more...abt all d past incidents tht raizada siblings witnessed , abt garima n shashi n many more!!...bt my hands r hurting nw!!...😉
p.s.s. sorry for d typos!!...😛
p.s.s.s. if u pm d updates thn i would love to receive !!...if dnt thn nvr mind!!...😊
loving d story to d core!!...





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Posted: 11 years ago
was for the last few days have been reading this ff nonstop and reached chapter 34. I can kill arnav for separating khushi from himself. how dare he make her his whenever he thinks and ask her to go away from him when he thinks he can't handle it.
he thinks he is doing a 'mahaan' job by what he is doing. it takes guts and true commitment to 'try' and do what is right whatever is in his hands.

have to read the rest of ff.

you are doing a real great work. I love the three musketeers. they are the best. please continue writing. you are super talented.
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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats for new thread just read last couple of chapter together loved them
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely lovely.i just cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading your story and how much I have been waiting for the new chapter. Thank you for writing it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey Sandhya...
I read the last 2 chapters and i absolutely loved them both. im commenting on both the chapters here. I did feel bad for young Arnav. and this Arnav too...how he wanted to save khushi from himself. loosing her is not an option. i just could feel his pain through your words.

i know he has realised that he needs khushi in his life...and i loved it when he said it all loud that its for her that he was in the temple for...and also when he said not to take nandu's phone.

there is something about him that attracts me to him...is calmness makes me curious. and he is the one here with the best heart...yes he is not very vocal with his feelings...or maybe he hasnt done the best things...but it did hurt him too while doing that. well i feel for him because he went through all of this ...he didnt tell this to anyone ( that he did love her too, that he was scared of losing her) and also had to take in all the anger of the family..specially ana's. and he too didnt have the best times in these years.

and in this chapter too...i know that he wants her...he wants her to talk...he wants to tell her that he needs her...and he probably wants her to yell at him...and he wants to make her trust him.

that apart...aman is cute...and ana...her reasons for crying are justified. who wouldnt want their parents to be there on their wedding. and moreover she still has the guilt that she hurt her brother so much ...she hadnt realised that her brother too had been in love.

and yeah khushi seems to be hiding something from her Arnav (oh my poor baby has to suffer a lil more...a small punishment for him maybe)...but i guess its about her and nandu's status.

ok about the prologue...one thing i have noticed is...you never mentioned that the baby was a girl...hmm interesting. but then there arent many chances that the baby is a boy.

anyways...do continue soon...loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
a beautiful and delightful update...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya



I'm so sorry girls. I maybe later than usual this week. Will let you know soon on my update schedule. You'll have the update of the week, of course :)


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