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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

omg. it pains so much to read this. and now Payal... uff

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Beautiful insight in the story of Kokiladevi.. the one who is protector of those girls have gone through a similar hell in her life.. felt very sad to know about kokila and her sister kaveri.. hell.. God has been very kind to all of us who have got this comfort of beloved families and cocooned in their love and security we live a life of our choice.. but we as woman should never forget to say thanks for lord almighty for everything and also should pray that every girl gets a safe, secure, loved life.. Payal is dead.. God.. poor girl.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

superb update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Ohhh may God that waz tragic...too many things happnd in these 2 innocent lives...wat was dese 2 innocent grls fault...dey were nust beautiful nd naive...I dnt know y mankind can bcum so cruel...punishing a gurl for just being gurl to fulfil there own sadistic carnal desires. ...

It amazes me how dese gurls...have still dere sanity levels intact...dey all love each other...nd look after each other. ...

I lovd d way kokila devi lookd after evry gurl...nd how she is so maternal towards each other...giving d apt justificatn for not freein dese gurls...

OMg u left us hanging...Payal is dead ...how wen wat happnd...

dis stry is coming to and END???

looking frwd to it. ...glad I cud b a part of such a learning experience wich helpd me broading mah mind... I also lovd d fact dat it was not essentially an Arshi's stry...wich widened d stry. :)

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

whoa... superb update...

Kokila too had a terrible past... she like the other girls in the haveli have different stories of their past but same result in the end... Payal could not bare this anymore... her heart gave up... she could have been the daughter marrying... but her density 😭

Human trafficking, Rape are such crucial issues that many countries face... Superb story... There is a movie releasing of Rani... Mardaani... it deals with this issue...

Looking forward for the next update and also the movie...

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

wht d...!? payal is dead? Hws dat possible? wht happened to her. Plz i hope it nt true!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

poor devi'ji..! everyone hv dere own story fr being in dis world.

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SaRun.

@SaRun.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Oh my god! Kokila devi has suffered so much!

OUTSTANDINGLY written manny ..I could actually feel her pain.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

That was an amazing update, Manreet.. Kokilas story is heartbreaking, she saw the death of her sister in front of her eyes but being a person with a golden heart she didnt want the other girls who come to the haveli to have the same fate as hers.. And that makes me realize that she is not going to trust Arnav one bit.. Ending was shocking, Payal is dead.. 😲

Edited by mishti_17 - 11 years ago