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Simran Thakur

@sweetsimi_15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

thnx fr pm..
but i didnt expect this that u vil end it lyk dis.. this story was vry close to my heart.. but u ended it lyk...
anyway thnx..

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ranogill

@ranogill

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Sad ending but it is needed...I am happy that khushi took baby. We who do not went through the pain like khushi can not imagine the pain ...how rape victims deal with the ordeal...may be in the future as time is great healer, she will think about herself...let's hope so

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

i wont say that m not upset or m content with the ending coz frankly m not...i accept whatever your reasons are for this ending and wont either deny that i personally felt that she should give up the child but also then reprimanded myself for such thoughts but i feel that they deserve happiness...not because they are a couple whose separation we cant bear but the two broken souls that can mend each other...their are girls out their who fears their future and cant be with any other man...khushi is same and the child is live example of what happened with her and it'll always remind here of what happened to her...but wont it always remind arnav's love for her his sacrifices...he accepted the child without any complain and for arnav it'll remind him of her love for him...this may be not their love child but the child did taught them what just togetherness cant...and i feel that now if they (or anyone in their case) separated then they are letting the evil win...

i dont know if what i wrote is right according to you and may be m so overwhelmed that m finding reasons for them to get together but they still need to fulfill their dreams...wander the world and find happiness...there are still girls out there who even after this monstrosity crave for one word of appreciation and one person who love them selflessly...every day in life...

i never expected this ending from you but hats off to you that you wrote this story...even after knowing how we fans would have reacted...

a mindblowing story...while i was reading this...Crazy4ArnavSR aka Meg called me up...she talked to me...we shared what we felt...n then she said that this surpasses everything good that she had read up till now n i would side her comment...this was amazing...

PS she did chose the child above her husband or should i say husband above the child...she thought that it'll be better o give him what he deserve but did she really...he accepted the child with only hope that she will be with him always..all he wanted is her...but leaving him so broken n not trying to mend things...she could have asked for space n time from him...my only question will she now really be able to take care of her child...

i knw m blabbering now...writing things n contradicting myself...coz i dont know..arghh

i'll just leave it like this...

Edited by jahnvi.luvs.ASR - 11 years ago

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Hira

@hira_arnie

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Am speechless deeps...
Have no words to describe ur effort which u have put in whole ff...
Pls sorry for not commanting lately...

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Parii...

@Parii..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

awesome

amazing

so emotional😭

i never imagine i will b connected so much to this ff

i always cried reading chapters

they r so perfect i fell horrible to read and to fell how the person who actually feel this how they act

i really pray to god never ever any person face this in their life

at last i want to say u r fab wriiter

i never read this ff ever in my life

best of luck for ur future

and hope u will start new ff which will b like this😭😭

ur end was right

and note was too right

i will miss this ff😭

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#766

marvelous piece of your writing skills!!

though i believe that unconditional and pure love have an amazing healing power!!

as this point of time khushi is really shattered and i guess this time far from Arnav will give her clarity of thoughts and Arnav will also second time realised there is no Arnav without Khushi.. so they are bound to be together come what may life through on them..

this story shows how impactful your writing skills are!!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

oh giod i am crying in my office n its all ur fault...

i understand khushi character and i knew the woman she is , won't destroy a baby but also the way she love her husband anyway

i feel so sad about tht man he has been rejected once again..thats not accepted ...he thak gaya houn is too much...

i hope u will bring a sequel of this story ...where khushi has finally accepted life n bring some life n arnav pleaseee

u see i missed ur note,i am more relax now

i believe good thing should always happen to good people,time heals everyone and it also reflects whta life is all about...we only should know how to survive and deal with these problems...

at first it is always difficult to forget the bad things but then we just learn to mold ourself the way our situation is...

Edited by march2011 - 11 years ago

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

This update made me cry buckets 😭

Though i did not want this ending, i guess this was the best this ff can have... N moreover this is not the end...😉

They will meet again n would again fall in love n they deserve a life without any past baggage...

I am hurt for arnav n khushi a lot, i dont know why they r being punished always...

They deserve better n i hope next phase of their life would have happiness only...

I salute Arnav for what he is, The Valiant Knight, always fighting the odds of life and emerging out like a phoenix from the fire...

Lastly, thanks to u for such an amazingly wonderful story 👏

This one by far one of the best i have read... N a big hug 🤗 to u for coming up with this master piece of an FF ...

Keep writing n stay blessed 😃

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#769

OMG love you so much deepthi... There could be no better ending for this story than this..Thankyou soo much for keeping this story so close to reality.. I mean who doesn't want to have a happy ending but sometimes things don't go the way we want them.it was really and emotional and heart breaking chapter but believe me when I say this that you have written it sooo brilliantly that everything seems right.. Khushi's decision, Arnav's reaction everything.. I am really a great fan of your work and love to read more of it.. Looking forward to read the next season of this story.. Really really awesome story dear.. Thankyou thankyou sooo kuch for giving us the opportunity to read your work.. Love you and all the best for next season of TVK...