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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

Res.

Unres.

I loved the description you have given to describe her and the cottage.

The write - up is kind of like you can imagine it happening.

I am in love with the concept.

Its unique.

White top n Skirt reminded me of Ang Laga De Re costume.

His sensualness with emotions were penned down perfectly.

Kria is sinfully beautiful😆

Loved the One Shot.

It was different and I loved reading it.

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

res

unres...

OMG this is awesome!!!

I m sooo loving it!!!

the start was beautiful... Kria and her cottage... Perfect!!!

rey having those desired emotions...

their love!!! Their emotions!!! Awesome!!!

lived the way kria has been described!!!

and then unsatisfied emotions satisfied!!! Beautiful!!!

loved the mystery!!!

kriya...

I just can't tell how much I loved it!!!

different concept!!! Awesome!!!

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow awesome.
loved it
it was beautiful.
it was emotional and sensual at the same time.
the concept was mind blowing.
superb writing

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

its is different...loved it..

the storyline is unique...

loved the way u potrayed the situation...

dark and sunsan highway

the cottage..its beauty..

specially kriya... her dress..

it reminded me ang laga de re...though the skirt was white there..

rey's emotions...superb job..

it was hot, sensuous and beautiful

with lots of love

moumita

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing concept...
Sensuous and mysterious. ...
U imagined ang laga de re dress of kriya...
Kriya is the spirit.. she found freedom when rey touched her...
Beautifully written

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

OMG SHENZ... 😲

THIS WAS...WOAHHH...sensuously HOT...

ok i cud actually imagine Kriya in that ALD attire... the way u described..only that came in my mind...

but...this was sooo different...i mean concept wise...

you are amazing shenz...

i loved how u described all the details...

how she appeared out of dark everytym... how hard it was for Rey at first...

Table makeout... i loved it... 😉

amazing one... loveddd it..!!!

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Bigaad diya na dii mere jaise sudhron ko... 🤣 🤣

Its a Res!

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

maar dala yaar... :D it was truelllyyy amazingly beautifulll... :D (y) u knw i was thinking that.. In white saree wid candle ghumnam h koi typ stry,,,:p bt it was lovely... :) btw isme mature content kahan tha... ??? Mnu toh kuch nhi dikha ... :p yaar real life m usse kriya jaisi dikhne wali s mila deti... :p ;) lovely update..:*

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Prarthana nick name shalu

@Shalu_Amar

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

18+ 😭
nice concept
amazing.

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