SanDhir FF: Of Broken Hearts (Chapter 20 (LAST) on Page 81)

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Archana Kannan

@archakan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Our sandhir deserve to be happy dear...unki kisse ki khishiyan unhe do ... I really like this dhamakhedar part.. Thanks for PM and pls update next part asap...

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ammi22

@ammi22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

loved the update
amazing update
waiting for the next part

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

You know I was so excited to read this chapter .. That I read the previous one again and came back to this !!!! And double dose of hotness..

It was more sensual and emotional... You did not once make the scenes look vulgar or cheap... I mean they were filled with emotions and love for each other .. It was beautiful...And I loved how Randhir initially behaved with sanyukta .. Scared that she would leave him again.. That would just leave him broken and shattered ..and sanyukta is a sweetheart ... She was in so much pain but still.. I felt so bad for her..even Randhir was worried.. She let herself be in pain for Randhir .. Gosh she LOVES him .. Doesn't she ? What an amazing chapter ... I just wanna cry and hug you

Edited by ChasingLiberty - 11 years ago

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himaniagrawal12

@himaniagrawal12

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

awesome part

try to post asap

plz pm me next time

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Sakshi Nagpal

@Parshian_SAK

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Eeeks i blushed again 😳
How do i tell you how much i loved it..!!!
I am in love with ur words :),the way u include sweet romantic tinges between wrds :),u leave me mesmerized !!!!
N the way story is shaping up..I love it
Excited to knoe what happens next..coz a sense a catch cumin up soon
Loads luv
Sakshi

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

You know I really was not expecting this of all things!

Though I think I know why you are taking this route?!?! Maybe, Imma speculate anyways!

*you have been warned😆*

So Sanyukta wants to get Randhir's trust back and she feels like letting him have his way will do the trick. But will it? I think there might be a point that Randhir realises that Sanyukta is going all for his happiness... Quoting some what from the update "Pain over desire"

I really don't know if that made sense... But most of my comments don't make sense! It was an intimate scenario, though I was not reading too much in that!

The way you wrote less about their "actions" and more on Sanyukta's state of mind was what caught my eye!

What are you cooking up Saffi?!!? Me is soo intrigued to know!!😃

Love,

Pari

PS: Update soon😃