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Posted: 11 years ago
The hospital moments were so beautifully written. The story is progressing beautifully. Awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally, I found time... actually.. I am sneaking to write the comment Deepu... Huh... I don't like him to be home on TVKDays... My TVKDays are reserved only for TVK... to think..to ponder.. to investigate.. about TVK. He messed up my schedule.



I bet,... All the moms here on TVK, who read this update will surely remember their first visit to the doctor in their pregnancy, be it first or second or many, it doesn't matter. Because there will be first visit in every pregnancy. And every experience is different. My hubby came with me for my every appointment when I was pregnant. Deepu you made me remember those days.


Ok,... I will Zip my mouth and will start to comment.



Coming to TVK today... I loved the Khushi reaction after seeing the other to be moms without their special ones next to them. And Arnav answers for her amusement. "May be their wives are not as posy as my wife"...Flirty Arnav is back...


I loved all of their conversation in the clinic lobby. And I loved every reaction Khushi gave for his whispers.


Arnav is maintaining checklist of her tests... Oh..How sweet of him. This is something my hubby didn't do.. I will make him read this chapter today, and tell him to do like Arnav for my next one.


And his reaction for the blood drawing for "Bloody Blood Suckers"... I couldn't stop laughing for that sentence.


What happened to Arnav, What made Arnav to react like that, What did he thought when doctor tried to test her at her private parts... His possessiveness. His proctiveness. His guiltiness. All came into him together and attacked him violently and gave that reaction out of him. But I thought, if he would have reacted the same way that horrible night, these two innocent souls would not have been here in this helpless position. Even though he thought she was willing into it, where his possessiveness went, I know it got buried under his numbness, under his betrayed instincts.



Boom... here comes my Deepu's brilliant thinking mind... I didn't expect Khushi will react like that, in her first visit. Truly, her all senses worked up here. I am very curious to know what made her think there is something wrong in all that. She supposed to enjoy her first sight of the baby. Interestingly Arnav was more into it, than Khushi. Deepu I liked the way, how Arnav thought about accepting the child as his. But truly speaking any human in this world will feel like Arnav atleast for one second about his or her own child in that situation.

And the conversation with Aman is full of fun... Aman in TVK always makes me laugh. And Anjali... Mmm here hum thoda think karne ki padi... Is there any chance that Anjali is going to know anything that happened to Khushi... We never know... what Deepu's intelligent mind is thinking.


And, now the discussion about Arnav's mom came back again today after long long time... I think it's one of the early chapters it seems. Is there anything to do with his Mom, in this situation. I am thinking crazy,,,,, "Is Arnav an outcome of a horrible rape". Is his mom help him to come out of his confused state about accepting the child"... I know I am crazy.. what can I do... now a days I am doing friendship with so many C'razy people.. including you Deepu.


And finally, you brought about Adi again... So he is searching for all the people who Adi met in last year.. So there is a big chance that Arnav finding about CD, if he comes to know about Adi meeting his lawyer.


And one more thing,... Adi's case will be coming to court trial after 5 months.. that means after... 5 plus 3.. that means 8 months of Khushi pregnancy... What will happen at that time... If Khushi have to know, she has to know to before that... but, Arnav doesn't come into limelight right... Please.. please..please... I know Deepu... this is all because you want us to challenge our thinking process right.. Taking revenge on us for asking so many questions... I know... But We won't give up Deepu.. we keep on thinking .. no matter what.. because our craziness doesn't make us sit in peace without thinking about TVK.
Another Amazing update Deepu... and another update to make us think... Cruel Angel Arises.😈
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

Does Aman know that Khushi is pregnant due to Adi?? I never felt he knew it but again not sure about it.

Also the trial date for Adi's murder being after 5 months, I wonder if that will have any significance in the story. Anything can happen in these 5 months


Kavitha, I guess Aman does'nt know that Khushi is pregnant with Adi's child. He doesn't know they didn't consummate.

And to the next question... We never know... She can do anything... We will come up with our own strategies Kavitha... don't worry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional update yaar...
Thanks a lot for d pm...
Feeling bad for arnav yaar...
U r d best...
Cant wait for d next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update very much..
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Posted: 11 years ago
the way the story is going and you are writing is so superbly only one words come from me for the update.. its OUTSTANDING

⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
The examination during tests is so truly depicted. Remember my days. Strange that the reactions were reverse for Arnav &Khushi, if she has such a strong intuition then her finding out the truth is inevitable. Moreover, the evident scars seem to be indicative of evidence remaining.
Khushi is so innocent not to realize that a first time need not be so harsh as to leave scars, though Arnav covered it for the moment, how long before it is revealed.

The mental trauma Arnav is undergoing is evident through his extreme reactions in spite of his control. But heartening to know he is able to have his moments with Khushi without that showing.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovedrops


Finally, I found time... actually.. I am sneaking to write the comment Deepu... Huh... I don't like him to be home on TVKDays... My TVKDays are reserved only for TVK... to think..to ponder.. to investigate.. about TVK. He messed up my schedule.


Another Amazing update Deepu... and another update to make us think... Cruel Angel Arises.😈


Kiran, what will happen if your husband reads your comments secretly and finds out about the above statement. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm Khushi is getting some bad vibes from her pregnancy

crap when she comes to know about her r*pe I just pray she doesn't hate the baby

Arnav is so strong to try to hide everything from her so that she is never hurt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
they both visited the dr.
you wrote hospital scene so beautifully.Arnav's fears and he being so protective of khushi.
their relationship is progressing😊
waiting for next part.

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