Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 7 - COMPLETED - Page 77

Created

Last reply

Replies

932

Views

151.5k

Users

221

Likes

4.6k

Frequent Posters

piyaarshi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
what the...!!!
Already 137 pages...
Nd now i am getting time to comment...
The update was amazing...
Posy and black n white talks were too good...
Blood suckers...hehehe... I laughed on this statement...
Arnav getting panicked during the check up made me feel bad...
He is still fighting wid his inner self...
And then khushi's inner vibes..., hope khushi doesnt figure out on her own... Coz she will be hurt if she comes to know that arnav hid it from her...
Small moment shared between them in part 2 was lovely...
And the family,is just crazy...
Even i got the doubt that is that person related to arnav whom adi gave that CD...??
Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago
ankitamishra201 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 update
dat kid is not giving khushi any good feeling...as it is said every memory remains in ur unconscious mind ...
lets c till wen n how arnav will b able to hide d truth from her


Edited by ankitamishra201 - 11 years ago
BroknAngel thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..I thought arnav wil have tough time in accepting d baby...but here khushi feeling was shock.. she felt it..wen he is ready to accept it she is confused. Well written. Is he gng ti find his roots??
arnaushi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
unressed!!
fabulous update!!! every line, every word, every sentiment was perfectly described!!
loved the waiting room scene. it not only shows how caring and concerned arnav is but also how they both are concerned about each others choice. loved that when others better half were not accompanying their women, here arnav was all set to patiently accompany his wife for a child which is not his!! not only that he wanted to know more about the baby and how it was doing inside of khushi!!
they both are worried if they want to do this together. the light discussions about the kiss and the bed and etc was nice. Good that they are trying to get past all the obstacles. it must be very difficult for arnav to get past all those memories and readily accept the child from the bottom of his heart.

the portion when you described the sampling of blood and further more test was really funny and at the same time sweet as arnav was trying really had to adjust to these new things in his life. he as done quite a lot of research on pregnancy and he is doing quite well as an expecting father!! nice to know that!

i never knew about such a medical test as it was new for me as it was for arnav!!! i could understand what he must have gone through. it was like repeating the same night all over again! he was trying to rectify his mistake which he once committed in the name of betrayal that he felt! he was trying to save khushi which couldn't do the last time, now he doing that. the convo was nice as they were trying to figure out why he had freaked out like that with the doc!
though they have hurt each other unknowingly, they find solace in each other which is truly visible!!!

now when arnav is nicely coming in terms with accepting the baby with open arms knowing the fact that the baby is the victim of his brother's hatred and in-humaneness, khushi is getting detached from the baby and sub-consciously is not able to connect to it as it's not her husband's-her love's.

Again, those skin scars reminded me of that vile human who raped khushi brutally for six hours. We can only imagine what she must have gone through even though she was unconscious. Liked their convo in the car as they both are trying to take initiative to make this relationship work and bring it back to normal. Good that khushi shared about her uneasiness regarding the baby.

"Sometimes I really wonder how Nanaji tolerated your guttery hormones" and "The Monkey Gang"---that was really hilarious and loved arnav being a protective brother to anjali and taking care of what khushi eats!!!

So, arnav is still looking for his parents i guess...which girl is arnav searching for through his baba...again, arnav is trying to get everything which will make khushi learn about that night...
he might get the person with that video.
i don't know if you want to save the baby or not but plz reveal everything soon...just can't wait for more!!!!
Edited by arnaushi - 11 years ago
hararnav thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
khushi is one smart woman...
arnav can try n hide all possible evidences but wht will he do abt her sub conscious mind/./??
the doc visit part was good.. poor guy wen will he be able to comeover the fear of khushi being hurt...

why did arnav want to know abt his baba now??
TwilightStar_JP thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Emotionally draining!! What an update!!
Will edit my comments morning!!

Cheers
ranogill thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
my god she feeling weird regarding baby
crazyff-fan thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
The update is very emotional..I hope Arnav is successful in hiding the truth so khushi need not to have to go through the torture..
dumas thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update so cute arnav went to the appointment with her loved his reaction when the nurse was talking blood loved how he kept teasing her and loved how he is learning everything for her and they heard the baby heat beat and arnav reaction when he reverted back to that night he is going to have to ocver more track to hid the baby biological data and loved aman and nani and anjli knock joke so cute when arnav was teasing khushi awesome update thanks for the pm.
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago
jduke thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Proud moment for Kushi to have her husband next to her when all the women she came across are without their partner and this gesture of him must have made her to fall in love with Arnav all over again and happy about giving them second chance.
Arnav can never forget that horrible night and he will act like this whenever he witness somebody coming close to Kushi even a female doctor. All I can say is Adi was real beast and deserved the every punishment he got. Unknowingly Arnav is also under psychological trauma and depression. Poor soul how much can he bare before he breaks down?. Is Kushi going to come across any rape victim with scars and lacerations similar to hers in future?. Also will those lacerations play major role in bringing forth the hard truth to Anjali?
Kushi's uncomfortable feelings about the baby kicks and movements made me to think it might be true instincts and sixth sense do exist in us like animals can sense the approaching storms, tsunamis and other natural calamities. But question is will her instincts lead her to ultimate truth?. Arnav has good plan about checking all the meetings Adi had in past year. That will reveal his meet up with lawyer and in turn may help to find CD (hopefully). Finding about Arnav's mom, that is a new twist in this chapter?. How her role is going to influence Arnav & Kushi life?. Was she a rape victim?.
Looks like I have more questions than comments 😊 . Once again brilliantly penned down chapter. Looking forward for more twists and revelations in maha update.
Edited by jduke - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 months ago

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 5 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 5 months ago

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".