The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Amazing update... sounds so interesting...

Arshi had a past... Arnav being a rich brat and all in college...

Arshi's going to have an adventure in the wild forest... some dangerous and some romantic I guess... 😉

Can't wait for the next update

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

WOW Arhi romance in a forest sounds very Interesting...with smugglers, poachers...
That was an awesome start!!!!!
Hmm..are they school friends who had feelings for each other..but something went wrong...
well, can't wait for the next part...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Interesting and aur majjo aa gayo..

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Very nice start. Ananya I have read your two FFs and liked it a lot. Its great to read your work again.

So Khushi is an environmentalist and Arnav is a DCF at the Park.

Loved the part when Khushi felt that Shyam looked like a smuggler, a smooth

talking smuggler. 😆

Looks like there are lot of unwanted, not so good happenings in the Park and

Khushi has landed herself at the wrong place, at the wrong time.

Waiting to read more.

Finally if I want pms for the updates whom should I ask??

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Ana,

It was a fabulous start!! I truly enjoyed the first chapter and you have set the stage perfectly! Great job 👏

Looking forward to working with all of you!

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

superb start!! arnav s amazing! loved how he was protective of khushi and her safety even without knowing who was sending the email.. Shyam might be involved in the news - dont get a good feeling about him...

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Loved d

looking forward to read more

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Unresd my comment on pg 13!!! Anupama waiting for your next update!!!!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Interesting start... loved the update

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Angel1618

@Angel1618

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Wow Intresting. ..

So Arnav and khushi know eachother from college days and looks like not everything is good there. And khushi you are right Shyam do look like a smuggler 😆...

Waiting for next update...😊