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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

hhaaahaa. I'm having the time of my life over here. But this seems like a terrible waste of both NK and Khushi's talents. Hope they get their big breaks. poor Arnav though. That was absolutely hilarious.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

This update was sooo good
I was chuckling throughout
Loved how concerned Arnav was!!!
And hahahahahaha he wears strawberry Chapstick

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Loved this
thank u for pm 😃

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Loved d update

Thanx for pm 😊

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Loved this chapter! :D

Your writing gets better and better with each part!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

amazing update !!! loved the way things happened between arnav-khushi.. loved the update 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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...ASB100...

@...ASB100...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Loved the update Choti!

Arnav seems to be like a decent person, and that scene in the bedroom was really well-written!

And that moment in the studio between them was, well, steamy! :p

Can't wait to read more!! :D

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Loved the update it was awesome!

Phew I'm glad that they didn't ahem

LOL Arnav wears Strawberry chapstick 😆 looks like Manorama was right

Oh so Arnav wanted Khushi to save him from Manorama and Rajjo 😆 poor him

Thanks for the PM!

Update soon!

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

oh man i am definitely bookmarking this one... 😃

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

So what do we have here!

Desi girl! ;)

I really really enjoyed reading all the 3 chapters. You are someone who can take up an out of the box concept which others may shy away from writing on and then you weave such a lovely story.

This is fab.

Loved the characterization of Arnav and Khushi.

The funny scenes are so entertaining.

And am here now. :')