On His Demand: THREAD # 5 - Page 63

I knew it...
I knew they weren't his parents.
I had a gut feeling like Khushi
I hope Arnav finds the baby and brings him home to Khushi.

First of all my apologies for late reply.. busy with stuff so didnt gt tym to read the ups.
just now read chap 47...
aww how sad finally Adwaya's parents took him away from Arshi..
How well and emotionally they gt attachef to the kid that ... his departure was .. as painful as the time dey lost deir kid..
this update was very well writtn with a perfect flow of emotions.

Arnav being aan hide his emotions bt he too holded his pain deep in hid heart and shed it silently not to be shown in front of Khushi...
it was so painful to read this as like feeling same as Arnav that Vishal's parents should be seen off RM without him.. but as dey too knw how it feels like losing a child... dey respectfully handed him to his parents.

Khushi's last gestureof kissing him madly over all his face made me feel like my heart gt shrinked and shred to pieces..
hats off wat a grt penning down of emotions... it can not be anything othr than perfect..

shocking teaser i just hope adhway is fine

okay so now done with chap. 48...
it was a grt chap... a very well thought of understanding...

I really admire how well u have shown the relation of a husband wife... that they are the one for each other to take away the pains..

i really likd how arnav take a step to take khushi out of her mourning for adwaya's going back...
she was already in grief with her loss .. and now adwaya's presence made her more weaker than earlier and now again being stronger will not be so easy for her and that is the reason i see .. she fall sick and loose all ties close to her as non existence wen she is all in adwaya.. he made her more lost and broken than wat he own child did...

She is trying her hard to not hurt the man she love and who is just all for her and concerned for.her.. but wen her motherly care and concern overpower her she fail to notice anything.. bt i like how the very next moment she define het life and the man and tht he is more imp. than any reason she can give..

Is khushi's nightmare's indicating something about Adways or is it only her constant thinking and seperation that is taking the shape of such nightmares..
hope to gt the answrs soon...

and again i will say ..it was a wonderful update.. and i feel pity of Arnav and Khushi for the ill fate .. that they being toghtr in love still now miss the spl. thing that is taken away from them and this longingness had startd effecting their lives to a grt extent..
i hope it didnt grew more ... and Khushi gt a chance to meet Adwaya .. as i dnt think Arnav can see her devasted and falling ill .. coz he know the cure medicine for her current illness...

hats off the way u write their emotions so natural.. that this is how it must be happening if u lodd sonethibg more precious of urs thn ur life ...

ok now just in continuation read the teaser..
wat khushi's intutions were correct... Adwaya was in harm

hope Arnav could save him.. othrwise it would be Biggest ose for him ad he didnt listened khushi at first place.. and this information may also broke khushi .. of adwaya's life being in danger..

i wish before mother's day cebration Khushi too is turnd to a mother of Adwaya ... aka adhaan..


Eager nw for thr update.

I expected some thing like this to happen soo the kid will be back with khushi

Interesting teaser!hope adhwaya s fine!

Fantastic

it was good that all children are safe...and also adwaya is with arshi...
loved it ...
continue soon..