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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Congrats on new thread
Phew so close
And like I said revenge will get them nothing
In fact it will bring more destruction
And that's all they need
No they don't need more revenge
And yet nothing has changed between them
So baby is fine
Thank god for that
Why kill baby like they do in serials
I never get that
Okay but she has gone blank
That is no good
She is right all her life someone has told her what to do
Did she ever do anything because she wanted to
Waise I remember someone asked who opened the gate for khushi
To her house
Can't be sashi as he was in jail right
Then who
Aman too was with them
Is there anyone loyal to raizadas
Somehow I doubt it
Anyway let's deal with all involved
But how
Wait she isnt reacting at all
Is that any good
Her talking to him still can't digest
Neither could he when she said in his name
Pyaar bhi air nafrat bhi
What a dilemma
But must say loved khushi here
How she didn't back down
And accepted her fault
But what to do about that
So many complications
Thing is I don't know forget it
Hmmm where does it leave them
Being together till the baby is born
But what after that
Oh man this is confusing
Will she leave him after baby is born
Can she really
Glad he told his sister about it all
Best not to have secrets anymore
But family reaction to khushi
And what happened
Guess will find out
Am glad anj was being strong there
She needed to be right
Especially as her brother has more on his plate
Wait that flashback that explains how aman called at right time
Hmmm well let's see what else happen
Night dear
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Congrats for the new thread đŸ„ł
brilliant update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
OMGG even aman is involved:o
Ok thats the biggest jhatka for me!! N dont forget arnav...poor guy first his wife n then his own right hand man.

I got some mixed feelings for khushi...i mean for all the wrong things she did...she deserves all the insults/hate from everyone but dont forget even she is a victim. She got hurt aswell. N i think a person who knows that he or she has hurt someone (with a mission/goal) n now knows that the hole thingy is fake/lie/not the truth...believe me that person gets most effected/hurt. In other words i feel sorry for her aswell. I wonder what khushi is gonna do now. I think she is gonna do everything what arnavs says..maybe her way to repair everything.

Omgg abhi oor secrets baki hai...i thought we already had the biggest part. Challo koi nahi..im still dying for the other secrets;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Awesome update dear!!!! Loved it soo much.. Wow the story is getting really interesting... Looking forward to read next part:-))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh okay!!! Yeh khushi kabhi nahi sudharne wali! After everything that has happened she is still behaving like queen victoria! What happened? I dont see any remorse in her eyes! Y is she throwing her weight around? Either she is too numb to react and everything or she still dsnt care about arnav! I mean i dont think she has any feeling for arnav. She was so busy hating him that she never gave her a chance to love him. The only thing she has done fr him is not aborting his child. May she has done that to atone her mistake n not out of any special love for him.
I just feel as disgusted with her for more reasons than one which i wudnt like to write here.
N arnav be stronger! I mean still in this semi numb state she has the capacity to outsmart you! Show some strenght, hatred anything!!
Aman! Well i remember in the chapter where khushi gives that file to arnav to malign akash, i had cast my aspersions on aman's character n believed him to be part of the gang but then i didnt dwell much on it!!
N zee m waiting to see what happened to shyam? Has he fled? Is he aware of the truth n shashi's arrest?

V interesting chapter zee! Though I have to say after everything i still dislike khushi with sane vehemance or may be more!
N wat more secrets zee??? Kitne secret bachche hai! Aur kaun mila huya hai? This reminds me where is lavanya? What role does she has in all this? Coz she was actually the one who got khushi to shantivan n therefore in to arnav's life! N since every step, meeting, emotion has been planned so though m sure khushi la friendship must be planned but is la aware about khushi's real character??
Cant wait to read more!!
Thanks for an early update!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
really a very very nice update
acutly the last part brought a smile on my face
i was listening to that song jado hai nasha hai
oke
so aman is also working for them god
i am happy that they are in VVIP part so that shyame or aman would not come their without being seen
and what next
anjali is very strong in this ss
i am happy that arnav would tell everyone the truth bcz the secrets bring confusion and mislead people
and about khusi she is not khushi --she is like a restless soul
is she hypnotize by shashi
and plz plz tell us what garima never told khushi --the whole truth
and buaji whats goinf to happen with her
and i think khushi need physcologist
and i hope arnav would know
love the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Grt update.
Soo aman was also invoved
but khushi nt showing any emotion.
Feeling too bad for arnav.

Waiting for nxt updt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice chapter...

glad that kushi and the baby is fine...feel really bad for kushi..she is used as a toy...i like this line zara the way u written brought tears" dont worry i will do exactly like u want i have a good practice of doing others what they want me to do"..she is damaged a lot...arnav has to work very hard to get kushi back...

well written arnav and kushis conversation...i guessed no matter how hard he try he can not hate kushi...arnav will realize soon kushi is used as toy ...the flashback is soo nice i can imagin the diwali night in the show...😃😛..

i guess every body will forgive kushi because its not her fault...tough time a head...liked the way anjali is taking all the things...she is soo stronger than arnav...

thanks for the update...

cheers..


Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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While the anticipation of revenge may feel pleasurable, the actual carrying out of revenge brings little satisfaction and may create more problems and suffering.

So Khushi did not abort the baby. I knew she would not do it. Shocking revelation was that Aman was also involved. Shashi turned out to be more intelligent than thought. He surrounded the Raizadas with only his men and planned everything very meticulously. I guess he did not expect that in the last minute Garima would give away the truth. Now I am thinking will he stay silent or does he have a plan B. Has he planned something else without Khushi's knowledge?

Poor Arnav, his love whom he trusted more than anything turned out to be the biggest lie of his life. How should a man react in such a situation. Though he wants to take revenge on her, will he be able to do it.

What surprised me the most was Khushi's reaction. She stayed so calm as if nothing happened. No apologies or no asking for forgiveness. How can someone be so cold after all that has happened? Is she prepared to bear any kind of torture which she thinks Arnav would probably give? Her behaviour maybe indicates how she views her life is now - lifeless and barren. Even if she has feelings for Arnav and all that was between them was not total lies, how can she convince him of the same. Will he trust her and love her again? Probably no and I think Khushi knows it and maybe thats the reason she is just blank.

Z, you are like the queen of flashbacks. I just love it when you add them in your stories and today's flashback gave us a picture of how Shashi had planned every scene and every move in this revenge drama.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Congrats on new thread...
Thank God Khushi didn't abort their child...I was quite sure about that ...
I know she is not that bad...
Poor Arnav...
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