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@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

The first part was really funny! But then, khushi remembered all those times when arnav had hurt her, Hurting herself and arnav!
Hope she forgets all those bad memories soon!
That was a Lovely update!

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

simply superb update !!! loved it.. it is superb story and don't feel it is being dragged.. its moving on with sound phase..

thanks for pm 😊

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

thanks for the pm

I too agree with regarding arnav's redemption.

Myself I didnt feel that u are dragging the story

its on correct pace

continue with whatever u had planned dear

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Superb update...

Glad to know arnav feels sorry for hurting khushi with his actions and words...

Wished some thing similar was shown in the show...

Bechara Raphael have to watch bollywood movies for khushi's sake...

Thanks for pm

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sspoorthy

@sspoorthy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

superb

loved it

poor arnav can't do that

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Bichara Raphael!! Kaha phas gaya??😲 par that was fun😆

The jalebi tale was Awesome Shona and Khushi was cute best.

What a way to show Arnav the mirror, time and again, great.

By the way Khushi don't ask for kiss, demand them. He will be more than happy to be your slave for the rest of your life and fulfill your every demand, Sar ankho pe!😃

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

that was a good way of making arnav realize the pain, hurt that he had given khushi...

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redpetals123

@redpetals123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

No dear not at all, you are not dragging the story even I too wanted a proper redemption from arnav but that was the major drawback in the show, after all that she has faced in life due to him, they didnt even show him apologizing properly, it was just a dialogue sorry for everything.

What you have written is proper and correct she should make him feel what she has gone thru in her life becoz of him.

Please continue soon.

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Fantastic

Some pains are very hard to forget no matter what.

He needs to realize no amount of time or sorry will be enough to make her forget all the bad memories

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#740

Awesome update.

Arnav really had been nasty to her that time and he never knew how badly he had hurt Khushi. Glad you bought some of that into your ff. Brings back memories of Diwali.