SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
res
-unres-
sorry for unreserving late..all thanks to thi phatechar net n my dabba phone jo aur b kharab ho chukha hai..ya alaah aisa merai sath he kyu hota hai..😭

okay sorry for ^ that bakwass..
coming to the update..

The title was fab! ..ahh! n those lines by THE anuradha were soul-searching..
mai toh start main he clean bold hogayi thi..😆

start main he mystery..kya baat hai!👏...muje gandi wali feeling kyu aarahoi hai ki that man was vardhan sir..😕..par main zyada sochungi nahi,...becoz apki twists ka koi bharosa nahi..😉

Sandhir scenes were oolaa laaa!..lots of revenge wali feelings n ol but,mazedaar...

n ramu chacha was murdered..mera bechara randhir..he was so broken😭😭..plz inn murderers ko end pe aisi saza dena ki yaad rakhe..😡😡

aur when sanyu saw randhi in that state..sab revenge bhool gayi...😳

all in all this update was chotu acc to me(gussa mat hona)😆 but, it was AWESOME to the hilt..

shall be waiting(eagerly u know) for the next chappy.>

love ya
naira❤️
Edited by nafees5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
~Unres~
The Title.
"Dismal Tidings" eh? What is this tidings?
*google baba ki jai*
Ohh news or information..haa!! Ohh goshh Iraa didn't know such an easy word.
*Thanks Anu for increasing her vocab.*

The Quote.
Another quote by The Great Anuradha!!
This was quite emotive and entrenched.
Bade uch vichaar hain aapke.🤣

The Update
Ufff!!! Pehle hi your very first para got me moonstruck. Why didn't you reveal who that man was?
*Thinking*
*guessing*
Naii woh naii ho sakta. (-_-)
*Thinking*
*guessing*
Naii woh bhi naii ho sakta (-_-)
And REPEAT!!!!!!!
Kuchh samaj naii aaya who that man was.
Atleast you can tell me by PM-ing baakiyon ko mat batana🤣 🤣
What say?

Randhir thinking about Sanyu? Haye!! Kahi toh progress ho raha hai in dono ke relation mein🤣
Aap CVs ki team mein kyu naii ho????? Arghh!!

The last part? Ek aur MURDER? OMG!!!
Mera Randhir kitna broken hai!!! :'(
() () () () () () ()

Uss fevicol ko onscreen dekhke toh ab I can't see my RD suffer anymore. Not atleast here.
Make them fall for each other jaldiii.
No patience left. I need SanDhir for my placidity. :'(

The pace at which you are changing the situations is amazing and I'm satisfied (which is very rare..I tell you)🤣

Shaabaash merii Future Novelist!!!!

So to accolade for this update, I would like to say You are a Stagger (the one who arranges everything perfectly) ;)

Update the next part soon.
Love ya
Samaira


Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res unressng 😃 finally. I tuk part in res game. N luk wat i got 6th pos. Big congo 2 myslf. xD Its really hard 2 manage undr top 10. All thnx 2 ur so calld fans. 😃 k. Cming 2 ur update, i wasnt going 2 unres now, bt as i cant wait til 2rmw. "May be it's time we thought about what 'happiness' really means" k. So aftr readng dis, i actualy tho8 abt it, n i came up wid n ans. 4r me happiness is watchng sandhir sandhir n only sandhir. No sarth. xD K. It wasnt funny. I thnk dat guy who textd was none other than.. "vardhan sir" or may b "his uncle" luk m nt sure of vardhan sir, i wrote his name, as u alwaz cm up wid big surprises. N is br maine bohot soch vichaar krke likha h xD omg randhir was gettng "sleepless n8s" dat 2 coz of sanyukta. Dat feathr braind grl. XD bt wait. M wondrng y d hell it didnt poppd in his mind dat she calld him "Delhi ka betaaj badshah, ShahRukh Khan" i wisd he wud hv tho8 abt it. N whn kaustuki enterd alone, it didnt got unnoticd by randhir. Goshhh at least notice toh krta h. Apology idea was gud, bt as v knw randhir is randhir. Huhhh -_- "You think that a shekhawat will fall in love with u? Lemme ans on behalf of sanyu. Stupd boy hell yes. U wil. " U think u deserve such greatness?" obvio. Get dis straight. K. Rofl 😆 the randhir singh shekhawat ka "Dont Mess With Me" yaha par bhi a gya. XD ishita kept her head on randhir's shouldr. I swear m gonna kill dis grl. "I hate her...She's making things worse for me" wt is he talkng abt. Is he talkng abt sleepless n8's? 😕 the moment randhir pushed his sheet 2wrds her. I was hppy, satisfied. 😳 bt thn wth i think during correctns. Evn randhir wil b gettng punishd. Aftral he was hr partnr n they were supposd 2 discuss. N ramu chacha's death. 😲 arrey he was d only 1 who ws close 2 randhir n i guess supportd hm aftr his parents death. 2day v came 2 see, a diffrnt side of ishita. Feelng bad for randhir. N just a wild guess r sanyukta n ramu chacha connctd smhow? I knw it doesnt make any sense. Bt sochna pdta h. Aakhr apki ff h. N di ho sake toh is sanyukta ko thoda sherni plus determind typ bnao. Jb dkho randhir ko ghurti rehti h. Pta ni mjhe bhi kya ho gya h. I was imagining randhir as robert dat is edward cullen frm twilight. XD dhanyad 4r readng my crap. M sry mjhe nind nhi aati jb tk mai ye bhashan na likhti. 😆 luv u anu di 😳 *PRIYANKA*
Edited by angelpriyu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved ! :)

Unreserve!
Oh God! This mystery is killing me!
Its so damn intriguing! After each chappy I end up doubting a different person!
In this one it was Parth!
Might be coz I am currently put off by him or bcoz he is tryin to guard the secret behind kaka's and the Shekhawat's death!
I was so sure it was Ishita and her parents but now I think they were trying to protect Randhir!
Looking at how devastated she was after hearing the news of Kaka's death!
Utter confusion in my head right now!

Guess that's what makes you such an amazing writer!You know how to keep your readers completely hooked to the storyline!

Love the way the Sandhir story is progressing! He is so affected by her!
I see not many reasons for him to be so concerned abour her feelings but he is!Love that!
She makes him lose control! Whoa!
I guess she will help in his healing coz he hasn't come out of the trauma of what happened to him in the past just yet!
So cool !

Just a truly amazing tale you have spun here!
Update soon ! :)
Edited by So_Naley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Randhir😭
Nxt prt plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! AWESOME CHAPTER
i thnk 1st person u describ i dr. Dinesh shekhawat... I'm jus guessng
nd i dn't undrstnd 1thng sanyu unn logonse baat karne kyu jaati hain bhaar bhaar... 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LIKE A COMPLETE PACKAGE OF DRAMA ROLLED INTO ONE!
Right from the guilt in Sanyukta, to the test trap Randhir layed out for her(that's so him to be precise!), to the way he threw stuff on hearing about ramu chacha's death.. UFFF!
everything about every chapter of yours is just... YOU SHOULD COME TO IIT-B now and find me a bigger dictionary now!
and Engineering kya kaam tha, that you go ahead and add two spoons of extra madness and inquisitiveness about your story into my life!👏🤣
I have a number of ff's on this forum, but never a one this amazing, this good! geniusness ki bhi haad hoti hein yaar, di!!!!!!!!!
Love your writing, love your ff and love you!❤️
vaise plz thoda baksh dena... saare readers aap hi lekar bhag jaate ho..!🤣😆
Love,
Aryana.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Res!!
Uff aaj toh bezzatti ho gayi by god!!!!
Anu ...I know pichla bhi unres naii kiya..
Gustaakhi maaf karo pleaseee!!!
Kal subah dono unres hongey!! Promise!!
Tab tak aap mera OS padho ...maine likha hai..🤣
"Sandhir forever" naam hai.
Aapke ff pe apna os promote kar rahi hoon.🤣
Self promotion is best promotion.🤣 🤣


nice idea 😆
ab toh main bhi promote karungi🤣
do read my ff - i'm with you
its on sandhir and its latest part (part 8) is dedicated to our anu di🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: soumyamishra

res

unresssing


see what you have made me.😳
from a silent reader to the 1st commenter.😆
i have never looked forward to any update like for this one.

coming to the update
sanyukta has managed to disrupt his life again.
but what he did was also not fair.
parth is sweet and understands randhir the most.


reading this chapter i feel ishita is not that bad. she is a spoilt girl but maybe she really cares for randhir but someone is using her. or maybe she is trying to save someone.
oh god ramu chacha dead
this will again be a blow to randhir
poor soul how much he has to suffer.

i knew only that only vardhan could handle randhir when he is in such a state.

and sanyukta she will forget all her problems and will always pray for well being of randhir.

a 10/10 chapter for me.

will be waiting for your next update. by the way i know i might sound too much restless but when are you going to update next.


Hey would love to know ur name...
Soumya is it?
Well thank u so much!!
Silent reader to 1st commentor...OMG!!! Thank UUU!
😃😃
My updates will take a bit of time...Im really busy with exams...So please bear with me..
I will try & post ASAP!😊
Thanks again!
Love u❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Drama_Writer

You are MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LIKE A COMPLETE PACKAGE OF DRAMA ROLLED INTO ONE!

Right from the guilt in Sanyukta, to the test trap Randhir layed out for her(that's so him to be precise!), to the way he threw stuff on hearing about ramu chacha's death.. UFFF!
everything about every chapter of yours is just... YOU SHOULD COME TO IIT-B now and find me a bigger dictionary now!
and Engineering kya kaam tha, that you go ahead and add two spoons of extra madness and inquisitiveness about your story into my life!👏🤣
I have a number of ff's on this forum, but never a one this amazing, this good! geniusness ki bhi haad hoti hein yaar, di!!!!!!!!!
Love your writing, love your ff and love you!❤️
vaise plz thoda baksh dena... saare readers aap hi lekar bhag jaate ho..!🤣😆
Love,
Aryana.😳

Aryana,
Oh my god!!!!
I'm just smiling like an idiot after reading this!!
Really yaar...thank u sooo much!!!
I myself don't know how this has happened that i'm getting so many readers!
But really, it's u guys that have a BIG heart!!!!
Love u :*
PS: IITB *Hail u lady*Clap
Edited by federized2210 - 11 years ago

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