ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 2)

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

beautiful end

loved it 2 bits

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Thank u for the wonderful story. Keep writing and i will be reading it.

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

feeling sad that it got over 😭

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

brilliant epilogue...very well written...👏

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

that was a wonderful ending...to a beautiful journey..

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

The ending was superb.

Especially the whole wedding part. The way you described each function of wedding from Shagun to their first night. Each promised Arnav made to Khushi with his each and every gift or act was just simply heart warming. A dream come true.

Epilogue was hilarious with'dhaam' and 'vhaa data' and Akash convincing two pregnant ladies to get to his soon to be fiance.

With Arnav and Khushi along with everyone getting their happily ever after. And amazing story came to it's well deserved ending.

I'm gonna miss this story a lot. I simply feel in love with Arnav all over agin in this story all thanks to you.

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

superb story with beautiful ending

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

😭Its Really End ..😭 No i can't belive 'TROTD' Ended 😔 I am gonna miss this one Badly , do you Remember Candy we Meet throw Ray Of Dawn I Remember that day , that day I found My soul Sister my Sweetest friend i love the Most , I can't Thank ALLAH for giving me my Candy 🤗 I love you Candy ❤️ Coming to update ,Aww it was romantic Update plus fun ,i just the way he Make her feel special like always , Cute family time Candy , it was so fun Reading update , And the Epilogue aww sweet yarr.. Arnav and payal are too much Bechara AKash 😆 Aww finalyy khushi is going to be a mother , i loved the way you Rnd this Beautifully Yarr , I will mis this journey , i will really do 😊 p.S Candy so my TTS is commng soon com'on tell me a good news that you are starting Tending ..

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

I justt cnt think what should i say about this story..
Its beautiful, wondrful, mindblowing, execellent, awsome, marvellous story..
Lovd each nd every part of it..
Their pure nd unique bond is just mesmeric..
All i cn just say WOW!
Nd ur writing was admirable..
Thnks for such a classy yet charming story..
Will miss this story..