TaaRey ss- I Do Ishq Only Tumse (IDIOT)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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BANNER MADW BY ME
HAYY GUYS
okay i know i havent update my other ff's
this one was written from when i started (second and the last love) i had it but i wasnt sure if it was nice or not
but now am thinking to give it a try
so hope you guys like it
CHAPTER 1

(Guys if you guys know that scene rdx party war between dazzlers and weaklings. There is no kriya ok and no one knows taani she will come in my story guys. in this os there are weakling and dazzlers who hated each other.)

RDX sir invited the whole gang to a party and his little sis who came from USA.

Here one side of the pool dazzlers are standing and giving glares to the weaklings who are standing at the other edge of the pool and giving glares back to them but swayam was looking lovey dovey at Sharon and she was just as usually giving attitudes.

RDX said out loud- so guy this party is for dance yes for the dazzlers and weakling ...so guys kyuna ek face off hojaye hmm

Sharon (giggling)- sir hum inse face off ...yelog to ek step bi achi tarase nahi karsakte hai (the rest giggled with her but rey was just normal)

Vishaka- hay kya huwa ye batt ko long banara hi ho ..yaa tumlog daar gaye ki humlog tumlogo ko ek hi step se haar denge hmm (the dazzlers got angery)

RDX- hayyy guys please i said face off just to make the party more fun not an argument ok (but when he sees that everyone is looking at the pool)

He sees his little sister coming out of the pool, that to wearing a bikini

RDX (looking angry at gests and the D3 boys (the girls are getting jealous) - guys (he sees that no one is paying attention to him but his little sis he runs to his little sis and drags to a corner to cover her from the boys.

When they left all the boys in dreamy way - sexy chik

RDX- taani what are you wearing and- - - -

Taani- ohh bro please don't start your lecture on me - you told me to come to your party that you were giving and - - i just felt like to relax myself so i thought swimming will be the best thing

RDX- yaa you did seem tired- - - but please can you wear something- - - - i don't feel good when all of the boys are looking at you in that way(making faces).

Taani- okay bro i will just go and change

RDX (smile at his sis)- good girl go

Taani went to change -

(taani has a tattoo , there is one written TaaRey ' it's on the back of her neck)

Until she changes, ,here with the party.

RDX- so guys -- - - (looks at everyone)--- guys where were we ...ohh ya so kyu na ek face off hojay put on the music guys

So everyone gathered around weakling at one side and dazzlers at the other side both teams were giving tashon looks.

Here taani finished changing and sees there is a dance battle going on. She smiles and goes to her bro and stands next to him. The people who were cheering are now just looking at taani and so did the gang. Some boys were giving her dreamy looks or some were just staring at her and some girls were jealous or some were just looking at her tattoos. But when they hear a splash noise they see rey in the pool who can't even swim and here the gang and guest got worried.

Dazzlers- omg can someone help rey he can't swim please someone help

Here taani was thinking - why are they shouting cant they jump in the pool and save him ... ehh taani stop thinking and go and save him (she jumped in the pool and made the rest shock. She went to rey and said) hay come here ...hold"(rey catched her hand) come here ...just be cum

Taani took him out of the pool and everyone came there. Taani pressed his chest so that the water comes out. It won't working so then she putted her lips on his which make the gang in shock but what shocked taani was that rey was kissing her and taani automatically kissed him but after 5 seconds she moved back and what she felt when she kissed him ,she wanted to do it again, she missed him and his lips (you will get to know)

She moved back and then the dazzlers and RDX moved to rey and (you know what they will ask) "are you okay ". Rey was keep on looking at taani , even taani was looking at him, rey was just saying "am okay guys am okay". Taani saw him and said "hay you okay (he nods) if you didn't know swimming then why did you jump in the pool", Sharon felt that she was being rude to Rey; rey was about to reply but then.

Sharon (as she get up and walks to taani)- hay don't be rude to my friend (she was getting close to taani) and don't give that attitude to us dazzlers okay babzz

Taani (she was relaxed)- i wasn't being rude...i was more of asking him a question...and yaa talking about attitude (now gives attitude) then babzz you really wouldn't want to see my attitude...and who the hell are these DAZZLERS...(looks around) i don't see them anywhere

Sharon got angry and the rest were shocked, no one has ever dared to talk to Sharon, but this girl is surly going to be in big trouble.

Sharon - no one have ever dared to talk to Sharon ria prakash with attitude..

Taani- well there is always first time...

RDZ (coming in between taani and Sharon)- girls please stop ...taani go to your room right now(in ordering tone and Sharon smirks)

Taani( angry)- what the help bro...she started all this..with her stupid attitude...what did i do wrong

RDX- taani just go to your room now..i don't want to discuss anything now

Taani- FINE I WILL GO (she turns to go but then turn to Sharon) listen whoever you are ...i was just helping him (points to rey) him...he is your friend you should have helped before i did...you cared about your stupid dress and make up NOT your friend... i didn't care about anything because someone life is more impotent then some stupid dress...(she turn and leaves)

Sharon and the rest felt really a shamed because of what she said was right, their friend, student, GS or enemy rey needed help but they were thinking about them self instead of helping someone who's life was in danger.

Here rey was just rooted to his place, the girl who he just kiss, the girl who tasted so sweet, was even a girl who had attitude, but more than that he was thinking of how helpful she is, instead of thinking of herself she helped him, he thought that "she is a girl with beauty and brain". His thoughts were broken by RDX.

RDX(out loud)- okay guys the party is over..everyone go home (he was interrupted by taani who was walking toward the gang and him)

Taani (went to rey with a towel and some clothes)- here dry yourself (gave the towel) and then change into these..its not good to stay in wet clothes..(Gives him some of his bro clothes)

Rey was just staring at her as well as the rest except RDX who was smiling at his sister care for everyone.

Taani (~to RDX)- bro we need to talk (looks at all) i hope you all had good time ..but the party is over so it will be better if you all leave.( looks at rey) you came with me..I'll show you a room to change.

She and rey goes back inside to change, leaving the rest in guilt. The gang left, aswell as the rest and RDX went to collage by some important work.

Here with taarey

Taani was at the front of rey, they were walking in the corridor. All of a sudden rey pines taani to the wall, and pines her hands on top of her and then..then...then

(hahahahaa you would have to wait for the next chapter)

PRECAP

Rey- you never told me you were coming

Taani- that girl with some weird attitude...the one i was arguing outside with...in the party

Taani- what do you mean by "accidently"...where was your attention ...what if something happen to you

Index
Chapter 1/ up
Important Note / page 5
chapter 2/ page 9
Chapter 3/ page 15
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please readers give me
two goods and a EBF (even better if )
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deepthi261 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
really superb story...plz write next chapter ..soon/😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
superb start
taani dress is awsm
taarey kiss was nic
u end it in such amzng point
updt sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awesome start
i think TaaRey are in relationship
love this attitude taani
Continue soon
thanx for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
1st of all ur banner was superb
& title of the story was amazing
awesome start yr
i guess taani & rey knew each other
i like taani's new avatar
& taarey kiss rocked lolz
update soon dear


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story
n superb start
if u had this before in ur mind why u didnt write such interesting concept
fabulously written
taani's entry everyone staring at her
her attitudee
tani saved rey taarey kiss her caring nature every part was so gud
eagerly waiting for next part
plz plz i beg u update it soon
one more thing luv the title really cute n funny
Edited by princess_tara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its amazing one..
n honestly the differnt one too..
RDX sis is taani.. its supr cool..
well i knw after reading that taarey kno each other from before..
continue real soon..
coz m way too much excited to read more of the story.. !!
pretty pleash.. continue soonish.. 1!!! *puppy face* :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update
Wow attitude wali Taani love it
Taarey know each other before
Update Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!
Lovd Tani's atitute!
Last scene took my breath away!
Rey pinned Tani! 😉
Naughty rey! Was kissing Tani!
Continue soon .
Pls pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome
taani's attitude loved it
taarey kiss
i think taarey are in relationship
update soon
pm me

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