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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: candyprincess

I think it some girl cause at the beginging u had something that angad listened to some message but she never called maybe it that girl even thought i don't who the girl but i preety sure it's that girl 😊 anways great part can't wait to read more 😃

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i am sorry to disappoint you but its not that girl

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

fantastic..
continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me and just me

gr8 part jaldi se cont karna 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

awesome part
cont sooon
is this person the one who angad always waited 4...u knw always used to check his messages...it culd be he's sis, bro,ex galfrend...it culd be anybody 😆 😆 but i hope its not someone hu will seperate a-k...i knw there they're not together yet but 4 me they're already together lol 😆 😆 😆

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don't worry that person won't seperate a-k and is introduced for some special reason

sweety😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety223

Thanks 😛

Wait for an hour you will know who the person is 😉

sweety

😃 YAY!! 😃 cant w8 til u continu... i'l b w8in.. 4 an hour..? okie dokie...

xxMWAHxx

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety223

Thanks

i am sorry to disappoint you but its not that girl

sweety

okay so then plzz post the part soon need to know who is the girl or anyone else
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Posted: 18 years ago

Maybe it's angad's dad or mom!😃

Continue soon!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
waiting...it seems such a long time u posted a part and i cant wait anymore to find out who it is
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 13

Angad saw that person after 2 years, he is happy because that she seems to be happy and sad because he can't go to her anymore, now that she belongs to someone else, he don't want her to see him

As he turns to go away he bumps into someone

A: I am sorry and he looks up and is shocked to see him

Pe: Angad , in a low whisper and shock

Angad starts to walk past him but the guy also follows him, and gets hold of him, he turns angad to face him

Now we see the person its josh

Josh is angad's child hood friend and knows each and every secret about him except where he was in past 2 years and what he is doing now

J: angad I am sorry, I don't know what to say but today when I got to know everything, I feel myself ....................

A: I told you before and I am telling you now that I don't like to here sorry or thank you from you and it was not your fault, you don't know anything about it and it would be better if..................

J: if what angad come on tell me

A: if you don't tell about me to and he looks at the direction where he saw her happily laughing

J: angad don't you want to know about ....................

A: josh can you meet me somewhere else tomorrow, I don't want her to see me

J: ok, we will meet tomorrow here at same time and same place

A: but you need to promise me that you wont tell anyone

J: ok I promise

Angad went away from their before josh can ask him further, he reached his apartment, he was not able to sleep at all

Next day

Angad didn't attended any classes and everyone is shocked, he went to visit kripa, he don't know why but he wanted to talk to her, he wanted to forget everything and start a new life with.................

Angad eneterd kripa's room,

K: dadi I don't eat this, this is taste less, aur jyadha kadva hey

Da: main kuch sune valli nahin hun, aghar kuch aur bholi tho main prithvi ko phone karunghi

K: karlo phone vuse main vuse nahin darthi,

Da: acha, abhi dekthi hun and she dials a number in her cell phone, ............hello prithvi beta, tum kaha ho..........oh...........kyat um yaha hospital.............

Before dadi can finish what she is saying kripa cuts the phone call and starts eating the soup making faces

All the while angad is watching her and now he stop himself laughing, kripa looks at angad and is shocked to see him

K: angad what are you doing here , you must be in class, having her soup

A: ayise hi mann nahin kiya class attend karne ki

Kripa chokes on her soup

A: arram se, and he gives her some water

K: dadi ye hey Mystery Man...........I mean angad

Da: oh hello angad

A: hello Mrs. Sharma

Da; tum bhi mujhe dadi bhula saktey ho, kripa aur prithvi ki tarah

A: thank you dadi

Da: angad beta kya tum meri ek help kardhoghey

angad has tears in his eyes, after a long time he heard his name with lots of affection

da: kya huva tum kyun ro rahey ho

a: kuch nahin dadi, bahuth dhino ke badh apne mujhey beta bhola kuch yaad aghaya tha

da: arey aghar tumhe acha laghegha tho main tumhe beta hi bhulavunghi

a: thanks again dadi, abb bholiye main app ke liye kya kar saktha hun

da: kuch nahin beta kripa ko kaise bhi soup finish karni hey aur vuskey badh ye tablets leni hey , abb isska zimedhar tum ho

a: don't worry dadi, main dekhungha ki kripa kana kaye aur tablets bhi liye

da: tik hey phir main chalthi hun

k: bye dadi

da: dekho isse tho mujhe bahar bhejney ki padi hey, angad aghar issne kuch trouble kiya tho prithvi ka number lelo aur vuse call kar dhena

a: sure and he notes prithvi's number

da: bye beta, by kripa and she kisses angad on forehead and is about to leave

k: mujeh kiss nahin karenghey , cheating apko naya grandson mila tho oh mere wajese come on give me a kiss now

da: ok baba, ghalthi hogayi maff kar dho and she kisses kripa on her forehead

dadi leaves from there, angad wipes his tears before kripa can see, but kripa has already seen

k: hey mystery man, you are soo sweet and sensitive like prithvi, but you know what I don't like when a guy like you cries, so promise you wont cry again and she forwards her hand

a: angad keeps his hand on hers, with a sweet smile, promise

kripa got butterflies in her stomach

a: abb jaldhi se soup finish karo

k: angad abb hum dhono friends hey na

a: haan tho

k: kuch nahin I don't want eat this anymore please

a: no way abb tum ye kha rahi ho and that's final

k: noooooooooooo

a: main bhi dekhungha tum kaise nahin khavoghi , saying that he takes the bowl from kripa's hand and feeds her

kripa who is totally lost in his eyes, finishes her soup without knowing

a: good girl, now have your tablets

k: tabletssssssssssss, angad please I hate tablets

a: kripa you are behaving llike a 5 year old

k: whatever but I don't want this tablets

a: tik hey main abhi prithvi ko phone karungha

k: no no main tablets lelunghi, please vuse phone math karna

and kripa takes the tablets making a angry face at angad

a: kripa ek bath puchu

k: haan

a: kya tum prithvi se sach main darthi ho

k: main aur vuss langhur se, never

a: langhur...........

K: oh apne apko bahuth smart aur handsome samjtha hey

A: tho vusmain ghalth kya hey

K: ghalth ye hey ki oh mujeh giddi (short) kahkey tease kartha hey, which I don't like

A: giddi nahin tho kya ho tum

K: youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu tum bhi

A: sorry sorry

K: friendship main sorry ya thank you jaise words nahin rehtey

A: ok ok phir prithvi ka nam lethey hi tum haan kyun kehthi ho

K: because I love him, oh mera sabse bada weakness hey, you know

bachpan se lekhey ajj thak main kissiki bath manunghi tho oh prithvi ka aur oh mera

A: oh (with a disappoint look), he don't know why he is disappointed but when kripa said she loves prithvi he felt like the new world his creating has shattered into pieces

kripa on seeing angad a little dissappointed planned something in her mind and has a evil grin on her face

k: angad can i have some choclates

a: sorry

k: please angad

a: okay where are they

k: i don't have any with me, can you get me from hospital food court

a: ok, saying that he leaves from there

kripa takes her cell and calls prithvi

p: hi kripa, how are you feeling today

k: i am fine how are you doing

p: i looked few sites and going to have a look at two more sites

k: ok ,prithvi i need some help

p: tell me

kripa says something to him, we can't hear it

p: kripa this is not fair and i am not going to help you in this

k: please prithvi, only for today , i promise kaal main vuse sab kuch bholdhunghi

p: kripa no, its not fair

k: please bhaiya, please

p: kripa you know what,

k: i know that i need to grow up

p: ok i will play along with you, but only for today promise me you will tell him everything tomorrow

k: promise, kripa sees angad coming from the glass window so she says a little louder, thanks prithvi I love you

p: i love you too krips, now i need to go bye , i will see you in the evening

k: ok bye

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thats for today

sorry for the delay as my net connection has some trouble

next part: what has kripa planned in her mind

what will happen when angad meets josh at the beach

will josh hide the truth from the lady about angad

please do write comments

luv

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part
poor angad...kripa has planned something 4 him...i bet that she wants prithvi 2 act as her bf ... its gonna be fun 2 c angad wen he gets 2 knw that its her bro 😆 😆
this mystery lady not introduced..is it aaliya???
cant wait 4 the next part
cont soon

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