A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON) - Page 58

READ IT ALL IN A GO, THE PLOT IS NICE. AND THE HUMOR ACTS LIKE A CHERRY ON THE TOP!T

Originally posted by: SWA1992

its really really awesome...
Pm me when you update the next part...
Super excited to see where sandhir is headding to...

Originally posted by: yobmott

READ IT ALL IN A GO, THE PLOT IS NICE. AND THE HUMOR ACTS LIKE A CHERRY ON THE TOP!T

Awsome update love it

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

may...drling u leave me speechless...really u sent me a pm fr dis...and my bad that i never knew there was such a cute tale going on...anyhow better late thn never... Ah Its not your fault! They shifted my story to fan fiction. This is a really stupid rule! -_-
and on the brighter side its good that i got to read 8 chaps all together...my o my
when i read the prologue...it was a harbinger to the tale that would shw some stuff bout sandhir dealing with preggy issues... Its just not a story about sandhir.. i also wanted to tell that teenage pregnancy is not something.. well.. bad. Its not good ok, but you know. I actually thought of this plot when my 19 year old friend got pregnant except for my parents and her's, almost everyone cursed her 😭
but damn when i read the first chapter...it was far more happening than i could ever thought...
i loved the fact and the convo between kaustuki n sanyu...awww...they r crazies...
super crazies... Hahah! I tried to make eveything a little light! you know this is the effect that comes when you watch hollywood daily soaps! Plus i dont like sad stories!
and i love fr a fact tht parth is one nut as well with them...m glad it turned out to be parth rather thn frandhir becoz fr a fact it lead to an even more cute convo on the block...hehehe hehehehe i love ur sarcastic touch to sanyu... Ah! Thanks a lot! I like this Parth. Unlike the tv parth, he's actually like a regula guy. The way a boy should be.
then Randhir's reaction oh teri i alomst thought he too got nervous breakdown... Panic attack.. nervous breakdown.. same! 😆
yrrr... sanyu has three kids to handle...randhir inclusive with all taxes...hehehehis freezing part is so super freakin humorous O god yeah! Randhir and the twins! Thanks!
i love fr a fact tht ur ff is not a container of aftermath but contains uber set of emotions...that i love to read... Aw thanks a lot! That really means a lot to me!
fun between kaustuki n sanyu is the best...
lol
i love the way parth n kaustuki tease her...still cant believe...she was lamely asking was he good...and i was earlier worried randhir might hear her and the inevitable happened...
he heard it and smirked and boasted about fulfilling her needs...
lo krlo baat... Hahaaha! 😆 yeah!

and i forgot the revelation... oh oh poor yoyo... kya kismat h bechare ki pehle sober baithna pda fir ... uske baad itna shocking scene... yeah if it would have happened in front of me, i would have been petrified!
bechare sandhir ke shock se kese nikla hoga...
and ohhh my god...
sanyu went ahead fr it when he signalled it... It was more like randhir did it. He glanced at her lips.. so .. i think when a guy glances at a girl's lips and say, "i never wanted to kiss someone so badly", he wants to kiss her! But i'm 16, so what do i know! 😆
i cnt believe...
i loved every sentence of ur ff...i mean it and while i was reading uff ff... i was constantly giving reactions...my mom thinking i hav gone bonkers...lol
Hhahah!! Thank u di soo much!!
love u loads
seerat...
keep pming me... :)
hugs

Originally posted by: kamyaka

Awsome update love it

Plz update soon

pm me when u update nxt

Originally posted by: xxMaYxx

Hi di !!

Aww your comment.. 😳

wow!

Thank u so much!

Im glad u liked it!

😃

aley le...itne cute replies...awww luv and hugs...
looking frward fr ur update.,...u gt me glueddd...

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Hello yaar😛

Thanks a ton for sending me the PM for this story! Ahh, I missed such a wonderful thing all these days!😆 Well, it was sooo good to read all the parts in one go! I just loved it a lot! Aww... this is cute yaar!😛 How in the world did I miss it.. Anyways, I'm happy that I found it atleast now!😛 Better late than never you see..😉 Well, I'm in love with this Randhir whose favorite reaction is to freeze and run away🤣 I think we should tie him somewhere so that he doesn't run.. Well, as of now, he is so caring. I love the way how he keeps an eye Sanyu and her matters! Kasturi and Parth are really wonderful friends that one can get! Sanyu's feelings for Randhir...awww😳... but I don't think it is all becoz of pregnancy hormones... Common yaar, deep down the heart even she knows that her feeling towards Randhir is not coz of pregnancy only.. 😉 I'm really eager to know where Randhir takes Sanyu now... Please update as soon as possible yaar!

Take care🤗

Originally posted by: xxMaYxx

Hi !!

Ah its ok! The story has been shifted to the fan fiction sectioon soo no one seems to know about it! Stupid rule -_-

yeah randhir and his freezing activities! But bechara, what can he do?

yeah i really liked the way i portrayed their friendship. Simple, pure and not complicated at all!

Actually, it is true that a teenage girl during pregnancy gets physically attracted towards the guy. I did asked few girls from outside india who got pregnant during teenage.

Aw thank u so much!!

Im glad u liked it!!

😃