ArShi FF: Labyrinth - Thread 2

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It is said that once inside a labyrinth, you only move forward, despite the direction you take. You could lose your way navigating the puzzle and decide to turn back and yet, you are only moving forward even as you retrace your steps, for your purpose remains the same while you step back - to walk out of the maze.

This FF too, though one of the oldest stories there is, has been retold as a modern day tale of a woman who went on to become one man's winning (and avenging) inspiration and the downfall of another. Kushi Shyama Draupad, the dusky maiden known for her nonpareil beauty and lofty nature, is coveted by many and yet, there is only one man she would submit to in marriage: Arnav Arjun Puru, a savvy and struggling ad man from another old bloodline, who has nothing left of the princely past, except their family name for his progeny.

But love is never enough, isn't so? And what of a family that chooses to remain in a lesser practiced joint family structure, as opposed to going separate ways? Is a woman truly married only to the man living in such a social construct? And what of long prevailing family feuds which threaten the budding relationship between Kushi and Arnav. Read Labyrinth to know how their fates weave a tale of pain and passion and friendship; of excruciating decisions to mete out poetic justice to their loved ones; of good that should prevail over evil, even in their microcosm.


Note: I can never tell why I'm more drawn to this great epic than the other more revered one. Well, the story has been retold and told again, but I would like to try a modern tale of the same heroes, who in my view drove the story forward, except with the same limitations that govern our lives today - there is not going to be one woman married to five men, there are no gods who would walk the earth with men, no boons and banes and lastly, there is no Kurukshetram. Though, there would be parallels between the two stories, I shall refrain from quoting them on the thread out of deep respect to the longest poem ever written, in all ages known to man.

So, wanna read? Like it, hate it and let me know (either ways) if you want to read more (or not.) Until then, I will post a few test chapters and wait till I hear back from some of you, if not more.

-H

Update Mar 25th: Over the hiatus, I have given some thought to the story line and would be most comfortable in making this story my own. Though there are many similarities with the epic, hence forth, the story line might embark its own journey, given the modern times its set in.

Other notes on the story: The backdrop is drawn from Madmen - an American TV series on the infamous ad men of Madison Avenue, NY. Most of the names of the characters should be recognizable, if not here is a legend to point you to their namesake in the epic.

Dhri - Dhrishtadyumma: Draupadi's brother

Kushi Shyama Draupad: Yajnaseni (one born out of the sacrificial fire)

Arnav Arjun Puru - Arjun (Obviously!)

Aditya Karan Singh - Karna

Yuvi Puru - Yudhisthira

Dev Puru - Bhim

Vishwa - Krishna Vasudev (Double obviously!)

Nivedh Puru - Nakul

Sahasra Puru - Sahadev

Khyati Puru - Kunti

Nilofer bi - Kunti's lady's maid and now, a friend.

For conveniences sake, we will keep it to three brothers, unlike five. And I really want to make do without other characters - we'll see.

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Update Mar 25th: Over the hiatus, I have given some thought to the story line and would be most comfortable in making this story my own. Though there are many similarities with the epic, hence forth, the story line might embark its own journey, given the modern times its set in.
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The Magic of Krishna's Flute ...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GBCLSbIbHSw&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]
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Wow...the new update notice promises something special...will be looking forward to it...and thanks for making this new thread H!
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Originally posted by: dreamymaya

Wow...the new update notice promises something special...will be looking forward to it...and thanks for making this new thread H!


I know you have been asking for it, for a while now. Indeed! hopefully it will still be to your likes.
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Looking forward to it..😊
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Congrats on your new thread. I am looking forward to the new way you will be writing it as I was terribly lost with the epic not being familiar with it. The modern settings suit me just fine, can't wait.
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Congos on new thread...anc nee writing chala super...gripping undi story...keep it up
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New thread!! Waiting for more, it all has now got a mystic blue aura!!
Can you please tell me of the book on Karna's wife though?
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This is awesome story..never thought that epic can be interpreted this way too...the characters and the storyline and also the pics are beautiful..
i am half way thru the story..

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