kya rey n kria bann payenge kriyansh????(part 8 updated on pg 28) - Page 2

Kya Rey or Kria bann payenge Kriyaansh???

Part 2

Recap- kria's rentry...

Sh- kuch socho guys uss Ms. kripa ko maza chakhane k liye...

Aa- Ms. Kripa ye kaun hai ??????

Ri- Kria

Aa- per aap log toh unse naraaz ho na toh unhe kripa kyu bula rahe ho ???? unhone ap logo ki help kri thi kya ?????

Si- arey nai aashi vo tum Sharon use pasand nai krti isleye vo usse kripa kehe k bulati hai.

On the other hand Sharon was getting irritated. (Or jab vo irritated hoti hai toh sb jante hai ki kya hota hai.)

Sharon shouts or sab ek dum shant infact puri canteen shant ho jati hai, itni shant ki agar pin b drop kre toh uski awaz sunai de jaye...

To calm down Sharon simmi speaks guys kuch socha uss kria ka krna hai.

Nil- hum na ek kam krte hai pehele kria ko dhundte hai or phir on the spot soch lenge.

All say yes...

Meanwhile humara bechare devdas(rey) ki entry hoti hai canteen mein and pura gang pagalo k jaise chipat jata hai usse.

Sw- rey tu theek hai na.

Vi- tu kahan tha?

Ni-haan hum kitne tense the tere liye.

Bh- abey aise bina btaye kahan chal gaya tha?

All this time rey was trying to say something or the other but was not able to say...

Si- kahi tum kria ki vajah se toh...

Rey glares at Simmi.

Ri- arey rey simmi ka mtlb tum kria ko leke tension matt lo..

Sh- haan rey tum kria k bare mein zyaada matt socho use toh hum handel kr lenge.

Rey- mtlb

The whole gang smirks... (xcept swayam)

Rey- Sharon kya chal raha hai.

Sharon smiles and tells him the plan firstly rey revolts bt then agrees... But swayam revolts by saying

Sw- guys tum log pagal ho gaye ho kya????

But no pays a head to him and starts walking.

Swayam again intrupts

Sw- guys tum log kria ko galat smjh rahe ho vo yahan humari help krne ayi hai.

Sh- bt hume uski help ki koi zarurat nai hai.

Sw- itni jaldi kisi answer pe matt pahocho or aisa kuch matt karo jise baad mein tum log regret karo.

Gang shewed his saying nd come in a group and shouts "Kria bhagao mission starts".

And starts moving in search of her but someone was lost in his own thoughts...

So here ends part 2... hope you like it...

Precap- gang on the mission. Swayam busy on phone. Sharon jealous. Someone lost in his thoughts.

nice part..
so gang s planning to make kria leave them..
hope they don't hurt her..
i want truth b out n them feel bad for wat they did n kria must not accept them especially rey..
precap looks interesting..

Nice concept looking forward to it

nice start

just finish read your part 1 and 2 together it was fabulous ...
on instead of swayan to they did not back out with their plan and want her to go back...
amazing and superb... do continue soon and pm me

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

plz continue soon...

will continue soon

Amazing update..!

nice one continue soon waiting 2 see wat d gang does

very nice!!

I think I know who that someone is... Well...

I loved the part... I won't comment much cause the story needs to unfold and I'm hell excited on what's gonna happen so please update fast and

Don't forget to PM me please...

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