After reading all the parts,i will unres it dear.Thankyou for sending me PM,otherwise i would have missed it.I don't want to miss any of your works.
Unres.
Sorry for unressing lately.
Wowww...What an amazing story dear,I read all the parts in one go.I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
You are an amazing and versatile writer Rasmalai,be it any genre of writing,u handle it with great ease.
This is a well-built story.
The way the story moved from one level to another was awesome.It moved smoothly.I could clearly visualize everything happening infront of moi eyes.Your flawless writing always gives that visual effect to the readers.
There are many high-points in this story,Moi loved it.
Parth and Vidhushi in your FF,were like couple made for each other.Loved the bond they share with Sanyu and Aryan.It's beautiful.Parth and Vidushi understands that even though Sanyu is happy in her life,deep down there is a void in her heart,which only Randhir can fill with his love,without him Sanyu and Aryan are incomplete.They truly supported Sanyu and were with her through every thick and thin.This is what a family mean/am super duper happy that Sanyu got the love and affection that she craved for through her best friends-vidarth.These 4 together created magic,they enjoy and have a blast when they are together.
Sanyu and Aryan's convos were a treat to read,loved all the moments they shared so-far.Mumma-Aryan's moments were sooo cutesy.
The way Sanyu managed everything on her own was outstanding,she is truly an independent and strong woman.Respect for her increased even more dear.Uski har takleef bhulkar,usne sirf aur sirf apne bete ke liye,mehanat karke pura empire khada kiya hain.Only for her son she kept aside her pain and worked hardly and emerged into a successful business woman,to provide a better life to her son and fulfill all his wishes,the way how she decided to dedicate her remaining breaths to her son was so heart-touching.Such is the love of a mother for her child.Mother's love is unconditional and infinite.
The pain that Sanyu has gone through in those 10 years was clearly visible in your words,Being a pregnant and simultaneously managing her office work,attending meetings,going to sites,etc...,was not an easy task,she is really a tigress who reached great heights through her hardwork and dedication.It had been a roller-coaster ride for her,but she never let anything effect her son.The reason behind RD leaving Sanyu or more appropriate to say he being kidnapped on the same day of their wedding,was sooo painful and heart-touching,how can Ankit stoop this low and ruin his own sister's life.
Loved how sudden appearance of RD in Parth's house affected Sanyu,the part where RD was jealous that Sanyu was talking with someone in the phone unaware of the fact that she is talking with their son Aryan was hilarious.Vidhushi's pregnancy part and she giving birth to a baby girl and Parth,Vidushi and baby girl moments were sweet.Loved Sanyu and Randhir's reunion and the part where he came to know that Sanyu was pregnant when he left her and that now they have a son was beautifully written. He questioning himself that kaise hoga mera beta,uske pasand aur na pasand kya honge,woh mujhse nafrat karta hoga,thinking that i left his mom,i know that feeling,i can't bear my son hating me,Mera beta hain toh mere jaisa hi hoga and the same moment Sanyu entering and saying that ha..he is just like you RD,and showing him the pic and he seeing it and touching,feeling it...was beautiful.Then Sanyu taking him to her house,he seeing a photo of Sanyu and Aryan with moist eyes,and feeling sad for missing precious 10 years of his life was so emotional.Sanyu taking Randhir to meet Aryan and his thoughts about what to speak and all was penned down beautifully.Aryan was exactly like his father,like father like son.Dealing with 2 randhir's is a tough task,which only Sanyu can complete.lolzzz...Aryan's attitude and him boasting about being Rank.1,his attitude,everything were like RD.Exact photo-copy of Randhir.The part where Aryan said that toh tum hi ho jisne meri mom ko chodke chala gaya part clearly showed how much Aryan loved his mother and the fact that RD's absence affected his mother,affected him and the tears brimming in his mother's eyes,stopped him from wanting to hug his father,for he being the reason for all the tears in his mother's eyes.Sanyu feeling sad and trying to convince him and RD saying to let him go and saying,he needs some time,etc...,everything was flawless.I am eagerly waiting for the day when Aryan accepts RD and their family becomes complete and they living happily together.
Infinite love.
Priya.
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