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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Arnav declaring himself as her brother... heartbreaking. I felt like crying in the end. Waiting for Khuhsi in the next...

Lovely piece dear!

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rima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

what an amazing piece of storytelling. awesome. I really loved how the past was built into the story and how the prostitute was actually a suffering woman

sadly most of them are in it due to abject poverty and other pressing needs and I loved this empathetic portrayal

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wow... redemption for his father too!!

The sins of the father...

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pree2605

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awesome..

nvr expected all dis frm arnav father...poor arnav...feeling soo bad fr him...

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kutkut12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

earlier it was all abt revenge...he was ready to punish innocent Khushi for the sins of her mausi but how changed he is now...letting go of things and actually helping the woman who was indirectly responsible for his mother's demise. He has found his heart, thanks to Khushi.

Well he is still planning to take revenge from his uncle but that is because others had to pay for the sins he had committed...other innocent people. His uncle needs to be punished because he is not even repenting. But on the whole this man has come a long way from the selfish and proud ASR. He is a man of substance.

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Jyothsna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Awww,i loved tis twist. He accepted her as his sis. Tis is a wndrfl twist i hav ever read. Poor asha. Hw old is asha? 14 or 15?

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incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Congrats on the new thread!! :)

This is quite a heart-wrenching update Smita! It actually left me teary-eyed..

Feeling so so bad for Arnav. His chacha killed his father. Every otherrevelation is so killing! 😭

Yet he is doing so much for the 'other woman' in his father's life. Plus getting to know that he has a half-sister and acknowledging it..he mustered alot of courage to do that. He's a changed man, courtesy his love for Khushi..

Loved it! Looking forward to the next update! :)

Thanks for the email Rashmi! :) xx

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AKHUSHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

OMG! How low can Arvin's Malik get? Good that mothers bold flows in Arnav's body. Wonderful update.

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Tammie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Well, I was not expecting that twist... Another sister? Things just got real.

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

that was a big turn of events...
nice going... so his uncle was behind the murder...
the story is really getting exciting...
and congrtz on the new thread...