sandhir ff...always together part 78 pg 141 last part and imp nte

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yatup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Suspense nai diya. Ab acha laga par phirse bataya SanDhir scenes mein kuch hoga. Toh hame rukao mat aur jaldi se update dedo

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Asapom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

awesome update as usual

precap is awesome

but sandhir scenes mein kya hoga"???

continue soon

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Dreamy_Angel

@Dreamy_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

wowww suprrr...👏👏

luvd Parth n Sanyu's frndshp...😆😆

continue sooonn...

many ppl r in luv wid ur ff...including me...😉

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Read all the parts in one go 😊
Awesome 👏
The suspense part is too good 😊
Parth & sabyukta friends & randhir helping sanyukta 😊
Waiting for past of sanyu open
Update soon

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

PART 23

parth comes and sits besides sanyu...

sanyu:ab kyu aya hai...

parth:hmmm...kyuki mera pair yaha chalke aya hai...

sanyu:bad joke

radnhir cud hear dere convo(to himself)sach me bad joke tha...kitna drama karti hai...

parth:acha sun na...

sanyu:mera kan khula hua hai...bl

parth:sorry...

sanyu:its ok...per kis k liye

parth:tu sachme kaise 2nd hui???

sanyu:exam deke

parth:tera mei kya karu...

sanyu:kuch mat kar...

parth:tu sudhregi nhi...

sanyu:nhi kyuki mei sudhri hui hu...

parth:to mei yeh samjhu ki tu

sanyu:ki mein

parth:ki tu dance karegi...pls pls pls...

sanyu:per tujhe

parth:seriously ek bat bolu...

sanyu:ha bol...kn rokega

parth:meine dean ko wo bola..phir teri dance k videos dikhaye taki tu jab dikhe tujhe wo pal yad aye jo humne sath me bitaye the...sirf ek pal k liye tune apna passion,apna hissa chor diya...to meine socha ye fest ...hum sab...isse bara aur koi chance nhi hai tera woh passion wapas lane k liye...issilye bl raha hu...pls karle...

sanyu:hmmm sochungi...waise khane ko kuch hai...

parth:bhukkar...ruk pas mei dhaba hai mei bus rok ne k liye blta hu...

randhir(to himself):ye parth diabetes ki dukan nhi lagta???aur us farzi ka passion dance...use machines k sath dekke to nhi lagta kuch aur bhi passion hoga...wait a min...mei kyu uske bareme soch raha hu...mujhe arjun aur uski frienship me focus karna chahiye...sachme socha nhi tha ki mei unka friendship karwaunga...

bus stops...parth:hume pochne me der hogi...ap logo ko bhuk bhi lage ga...so abhi kuch kha le...vids:mujhe dhabe ka oily food nhi khana wo bhi punjabi dhaba...never

parth:kabhi khaya hai...there's always a frst time...kha k dekho...pasand na aye to sanyu ko de dena...bhukkar jo hai...

sanyu :teri to...and gts up frm seat and while going towrds him she was going to fall as she didnt see the leg strched on floor ...she was ready to fall and so she shut hr eyes ...but wait...she is hanging...she luked back...dere hr enemy is holding hr hand tightly...

randhir pulls hr wid grt force and to stop colliding wid him again she pushed his shoulders and while doing dis she also goes back...dey bth are standing tilted still catching hands and the odr hands are on top of seats to prevent them frm faliing...dey stay dere fr min wen arjun broke their trance...he just got up frm sleep and on opening his eyes he sw two hands holding tightly each odr..on luking r8 and lft he sw two enemies staring each odr...

arjun:ahem ahem...tum dono thik ho na...and dey stand properly...sanyu goes out of bus...

randhir:khayega kuch...

arjun:ha ha chal...

vids:aj kal mujhe heart attacks zarur ayenge...kausto ...kausto uth meri maa...

kausto:ha bol

vids:chal dhabe me

all ate ...parth:kyu vids acha tha na...

vids:nt bad

sanyu:mera khana ho gaya mei bus me jati hu...mujhe sona hai...pls disturb mat karna

aftr 2 min...dey all board the bus and leaves...all were sleeping...

bt dey didnt noticed dat two of dem are missing...

sanyu:arrey arrey bus roko...

she ws running bhnd the bus bt it went...and she has no mre energy left to run...

sanyu:ab???mera phn bhi bus mei...kya karu...kaise batau un logo ko...us parth k bache ko nhi chorungi...ek bar dekh nhi sakta tha ki mei bus mei nhi hun...ab???

smeone taps hr shoulders...

sanyu:(in mind)kahi kuch gadbad...she turns slowly...tum,???tum bus me nhi gaye...yaha kya kar rhe ho mcp

randhir:wo mei tumhe bhi puch sakta hun...

sanyu:wo mera earing bahar gir gaya tha window se...wo me lene k liye utri thi...aur jab ghuma to bus strt ho chuka tha

randhir:tm ladkiya ...sachme...ek earing e to thi...or dekho kitna chota hai...

sanyu:jo bhi ho mera favourite hai...per tum

randhir:ha wo me unke peeche peeche ja hi raha tha lekin wo mei phn bhul gaya tha...leke jab wapas aya to bus nhi hai aur dekha ek bandarya bus k peeche daur rhi thi...

sanyu:ooo...per meine bandarya nhi dekha...kaha hai...wait a min...tumne mujhe bandarya bola...

randhir strts walking

sanyu:ruko...mcp kahika...hw dare u...aur kaha jaa rahe ho

randhir:cite jana hai ya nhi...to chalo...yaha bus nhi milega...thori pas mei bus stand hogi...

sanyu:mei tumhare sath kyu jau...aur bus stand hai kisne bola

randhir:wo dekho board ...o sorry tmhari to aankhen kharap isiliye girti rehti ho...

sanyu:mcp kahika...dekho abhi mujhme koi energy nhi hai...isilye yeh jhagda postpone karti hun...abhi chup chap chale...

precap:mre sandhir scenes

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

hey!!!! anisha yippee am first

awesome one i loved it

parth and sanyu convo was nice

eyelock aww cute nice nice...

u penned it beautifully

overall it was very well written

thanks for the pm!!!

Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago

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Sheron♡

@Sheron18rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Loved it to the core jabse yeh show start hua hai i love mcp wrd u r a rocking writer superb update and as i am a sandhir fan so i would be eagerly waiting for ur next update and yaa thanks for the pm