ILLUSION Taarey SS *COMPLETED* - Page 2

that was fabulous and great os... liked it

amazing os👏
they u portraited Rey desperation to see the owner of the voice
the painting having an RS initial that mean rey itself made it

taani anklet left behind obtained rey
rey following her even forgetting that he has GF

everything was perfect and the gangs few jokes worked as a masala to add the taste

was taani a ghost? just asking 😉

u can even continue it.

but u named it as an illusion so let b an illusion
wonderful os try to write more os😊

Originally posted by: premlata

awesome os...

rey searching her ...her name is taani ...

os khatm ya or bhi part hai eske ...

hai to update soon

pehle to yahi pe khatam hona tha, par phir kaafi logon ne bola ki isko continue karo to I am thinking of making it a two or three shot may be. lets see😊

Originally posted by: Vrindaroxz

hey plz say dere's more to this OS...

loved it...

ok. there's more to this os.😆 actually pehle itna hi tha par ab thoda badane ka soch rahi hu.

Originally posted by: millli

AEsome

thnks

Originally posted by: princess_tara

wow yar superb
very interesting unique n mysterious os
luv it

thnks a lot

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Wonderful OS
Very mysterious ;)

thnks

Originally posted by: skfirdous

wow awesome os
mysterious os

thnk u so much

Originally posted by: visk

awesome os...

thnks

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

superb OS ..! 👏

luvd it ..! 👍🏼

thnks a lot

Originally posted by: Sswachi

Again an wonderful piece by u

Seriously love it

It was so mysterious nd interesting

nd ur writing skill its amazing

keep writing more

that means a lot dear. thnks for supporting so much. That's such a sweet comment. glad you liked it

Originally posted by: navk

wow
i just love it
it was just perfect
i dun have words 4 this

thnks. go find the dictionary navu😆

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

that was fabulous and great os... liked it

thnks

Originally posted by: dasv

amazing os👏
they u portraited Rey desperation to see the owner of the voice
the painting having an RS initial that mean rey itself made it

taani anklet left behind obtained rey
rey following her even forgetting that he has GF

everything was perfect and the gangs few jokes worked as a masala to add the taste

was taani a ghost? just asking 😉

u can even continue it.

but u named it as an illusion so let b an illusion
wonderful os try to write more os😊

thnks vini.
wow! tum ne to full too post mortam kar daala os ka😆
actually sab yahi bol rahe hai ki I should continue it so lets see may be kuch dimag mein aa jaye
it all depends on bhagwan agar kuch idea aaya to continue kar dungi😃
glad you liked it

Originally posted by: deepkriti

pehle to yahi pe khatam hona tha, par phir kaafi logon ne bola ki isko continue karo to I am thinking of making it a two or three shot may be. lets see😊


ok. there's more to this os.😆 actually pehle itna hi tha par ab thoda badane ka soch rahi hu.


thnks


thnks a lot


thnks


thnk u so much


thnks


thnks a lot


that means a lot dear. thnks for supporting so much. That's such a sweet comment. glad you liked it


thnks. go find the dictionary navu😆


thnks


thnks vini.
wow! tum ne to full too post mortam kar daala os ka😆
actually sab yahi bol rahe hai ki I should continue it so lets see may be kuch dimag mein aa jaye
it all depends on bhagwan agar kuch idea aaya to continue kar dungi😃
glad you liked it

Originally posted by: _PanCake_

Awsum os dear...

The way u described it was amazing...👏

thnks mehru😃

PART 2-->

"Sharma ji, Are you sure?" Rey asked the manager with complete disbelief.

"Belive me sir, Jis area mein aap gaye the waha door door tak sirf jungle hai aur kuch nahi. Vaha to kisi insaan ka naamonishan bhi nahi hai." The manager explained him.

While the Rey was continuing his debate over the last night's topic the sweeper of the hotel was looking at him with wide eyes. Finally giving up on manager's logical points he moved out of reception coming directly into the Hotel's lavishing garden. It was a sunny but still cold morning in shimla. And moreover it was the fresh breezy first day of new year. The city was looking angelic with the magnificient view he get from the garden of this lavish 5 star hotel situated at the top of the hill. In mid of such a breathtaking environment he was still sad as he just couldn't find a single clue about that girl- taani. The name was enough to send vibrations in his spine. He picked out the anklet from his pocket and brushed his fingertips on it feeling the cold metal.

Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder making him snap out of his thoughts and turn around founding a complete stranger looking at him with complete astonishment.

"Excuse me, Kya mein aapko jaanta hu?" He asked in a complete confusion. He didn't said anything while Rey just started at him.

"Aapne vo ghar dekha?" The sweeper asked. "Aapne Tanushree ko dekha?"

"Sorry, par mein kuch samjha nahi. Kaun Tanushree?"

"Tanushree..Taani..aapne taani ko dekha?" Hearing the same name again his head snapped at him.

"Aap taani ko jaante hai?" He asked the old man.

"Ha..Tanushree..Tanushree Shrivastav. Usse kaun nahi jaanta. Uski aur Reyaan ki kahani to Shimla ka bachha bachha jaanta hai." He said getting drowned in his own dreams.

"Kaise kahani?"

"Kya aapko kal raat ka vo raasta yaad hai?" The sweeper asked him.

"Ha. Bahot achhe se."

"To phir aap mere saath chaliye. Aapko sab kuch vaha pata chala jayega." Rey quickly nodded and started moving with him towards the woods when he heard swayam's voice calling him.

"Kaha jaa raha hai tu?" Swayam said coming towards him. His gaze moved towards the old man in confusion.

"Mujhe kuch kaam hai. Thodi der baad aa jaunga." Rey informed him.

"Ab tu mujhse chupaega. Tu vapas vo ghar dhoondne jaa raha hai right?!"

"Jab jaanta hai swayam to pooch kyun raha hai? Mujhe jaanna hai aakhir ye sab mere saath hi kyun ho raha hai. Vo ladki kaun hai aur uska mujhe yu dhikna, iss sabke peeche kya relation hai." He finally blurted out.

"Fine! Agar tujhe yahi chahiye , to mein bhi chalunga." Swayam said with a smile.

"No swayam, mein tujhe kisi problem mein nahi daal sakta."

"Aur kya mein tujhe aisi situation mein akele chod sakta hu! Bilkul nahi. I am coming with you and that's final. Aur waise bhi baaki ki toli un French Girls mein kuch zyada hi busy hai." He smirked at last making Rey giggle at his comic timing.

After travelling a few kilometres, they finally reached the place where they saw the cottage last night. With the sunrays peeping from the dense forest the land which had the cottage last night was now completely vacant with not even a single piece of the house or a tree. It was just a bare land.

"Aisa kaise ho sakta hai, kal tak to yaha pe cottage tha." Rey said in disbelief. Swayam was equally astonished by now since he had himself seen a cottage there while the group came to hunt for rey. The old man didn't said anything. Rather he just went to the land and started digging the place. The duo looked at him in confusion. After digging a few cms his hand grabbed something.

"Meri madad kijiye." He asked both the boys and they soon started digging with him. After removing a few layers of soil Rey found it completely unbelievable to find the same portrait right there beneath the land. They took it out with utmost care keeping it beneath a long tree taking its support. Rey cleared it with his hand while Swayam looked in confusion and the old man just smiled.

"Ye hai Tanushree." The old man said as rey was finally done with completely removing the soil from the beautiful portrait.

"Par aapko kaise pata tha, ki ye portrait yahi hai." Swayam asked him.

"Sab batata hu, par abhi aap yaha se chaliye. Ab yaha rukna theek nahi hai." The old man warned them.

They reached the old man's shattered house. Finally sitting on an almost broken bed, the man started.

"Ye tasveer har kisi ke saamne nahi aati. Isse pehle bhi kai baar isko dhundne ke liye jaane kitne log uss jungle mein gaye par unme se koi bhi nahi lauta. Kehte hai ki iss tasveer mein jaadu hai, isse jo bhi dekta hai vo apne hosh mein nahi rehta. Aur bhi bahot saari akhvaein hai iske baare mein jike kaaran isko dhundne ke liye log door door se aate hai." The old man explained them while the duo continued to look at him.

"Ye tasveer Reyaan Shastri ne banayi thi." Rey's eyes moved to the initials on the lower right side of the portrait. "Apne zamane ke bahot hi mashoor kalakaar. Kehte hai ki unke haatho se jo bhi tasveer banti thi usme ek alag hi baat hoti thi jiski vajah se bade bade raja unse tasveerein banvate the jiski unhe muh- maangi keemat milti thi. Unme tasveer ko zinda karne ka hunar tha."

Rey and Swayam listened to him with complete silence.

"Ek din unke sapne mein ek chehra aaya. Ek bahot hi khoobsurat chehra. Bilkul jaise koi rajkumari, jaise koi pari..Agle din unhe na jaane kaisa junoon chada ki unhone vo chehra banana shuru kar diya. Lagatar do purnima tak vo uss tasveer ko pura karne mein lage rahe. Bahot koshish karte the par har baar unhe kuch kami lagti. Unhone sabse milna chod diya, kisi se baat nahi karte the..bas tasveer ke hi aas paas rehte aur us adhoore chehre ko dekte rehte. Ek samay ke baad vo bilkul pagal se ho gaye."

While the three men were continuing their talk Rey sensed someone's presence outside house. He looked at the open window but found none. Suddenly they saw a flash of lightning followed by a thunderous sound. It was about to rain.

"Uss samay mein Shimla apne tantrik aur kaale jaadu ke liye jaana jata tha. Shimla ke junglon mein jaha aaj aapne khali zameen dekhi, uss zamane mein waha ek bahot mashoor kothi hua karti thi. Mashoor tantrik Vishwanath ki kothi. Unhi ki beti thi, Tanushree..." Rey's head turned back to the window as he felt a pair of eyes looking at them. But he failed to find anyone.

"Kya hua Rey?" Swayam asked with concern.

"Kuch nahi.." Rey declined the topic.

"Mere dadaji..Jeevan Mathur..Reyaan ke yaha kaam kiya karte the. Unke maa-baap ke guzar jaane ke baad Reyaan ka khayal dadaji ne hi rakha. Vo Reyaan se apne bachon se bhi zyada pyaar karte the. Yahi vajah thi ki Reyaan ke badte pagalpan ko dekhne ke baad vo iska ilaaj mangne Vishwanath ke paas gaye. Mere bapu kehte the ki jis din mere dadaji uss kothi mein gaye to uske baad vo aaj tak vapas nahi aaye. Sab ne unhe bahot dhoonda par vo kahi nahi mile. Pehle bhi kai baar uss kothi ke aas paas kai log gayab hue the. Mere bapu yahi baat batane Reyaan ke ghar gaye, par jaise hi vaha pahoche unhe pata chala ki ghar ka darwaza 3 hafto se nahi khula hai. Aas paas ke logon se madad leke mere bapu ne darwaza khola. Aur phir..." He stopped for an instant.

"Aur phir? Phir kya hua.." Rey asked with impatience. He didn't said anything.

"Boliye na kya hua.." Swayam said. The man got up from his seat and looked around the small house making sure there was no one in sight. He quickly closed the doors and the windows finally settling down again.

"Reyaan mar chuka tha. Usne khud ko phansi laga li. Par uski vo tasveer...vo tasveer jise vo pura karne ke liye din raat ek kar rahe the vo kahi nahi thi. Kisi ko kuch samajh nahi aaya..sabhi ko laga ki mere dadaji ke gum hone ke peeche aur Reyaan ki maut ke peeche Vishwanath hi hai. Gaonwalon ne faisla liya ki vo kothi mein aag laga denge. Uss raat...sab khatam ho gaya...Gaonwalon ne kothi mein aag laga di. Kehte hai Vishwanath ko apni maut ka andaaza ho gaya tha..aur usne ghar chodke bhaag jaane ka faisla kar liya..par tanushree kahi nahi jaana chahti thi. Isliye uss raat uss aag mein vo khatam ho gayi. Tab se uski aatma vahi hai uss jungle mein.."

"Aatma?! What Rubbish! Vo aatma nahi ho sakti. I saw her last night. Vo mere saamne thi." Rey refused to believe anything.

"Aapne usse dekha aur wapas aa gaye. Aisa aaj tak kisi ke saath nahi hua. Meri maaniye Shimla se jitna jaldi ho nikal jayiye. Aapka yaha rehna theek nahi. " The old man advised. Rey shrugged it.

"Par abhi bhi ye kahani adhoori hai. Aakhir Vishwanath gaya kaha..aur ye tasveer vaha jungle mein kaise pahonchi, aapke dadaji..vo kaha gaye, Reyaan ki maut...itne saare sawaal hai jinka hamare paas koi jawab nahi." Swayam said. No doubt he was quite believing the story.

"Pata nahi beta...Iske jawaab to kisi ke paas nahi." The old man stated. Soon it started raining with drizzles covering the entire night sky.

"Rey..ab humein chalna chaiye." Swayam persuaded Rey.

"But ye portrait??" Rey looked at the smiling picture and a smile crept on his face.

"Aap chahe to ye tasveer le jaa sakte hai.." The old man told him. Rey looked at swayam who knew very well how hyper Rey was becoming for this one portrait. He decided to just end the topic and take it with them. With swayam's nod Rey quickly took the portrait in his hand and started moving out of the house. Swayam followed.

Before taking his step out of the house and turned back to the man, "Aapne ye sab humein kyun bataya?" Rey asked him.

"Shimla mein itne saalo se reh raha hu, har din sirf yahi sochta hu ki kya hua hota agar mere dadaji kabhi uss jungle mein nahi jaate...agar Reyaan ko vo sapna nahi aaya hota...uss samay jo bhi hua uske baad mera parivaar toot gaya tha. Mere bapu bhi kuch dino baad chal base. Unki maut ka kaaran bhi aaj tak pata nahi chala. Aise mein meri zindagi ka bhi koi bharosa nahi. Tanushree kaha hai...mujhe nahi pata...uski aatma hai bhi ya nahi..mein nahi jaanta..par itna jaanta hu ki mere bapu ne kaha tha...kabhi koi iss adhoori kahani ko pura karne ki koshish kare to uski madad zaroor karna, shayad kabhi pata chal jaaye ki aakhir mere dadaji ke saath hua kya tha." He said with a small smile. Rey gave an assuring smile and left along with swayam to fight with the rain leaving the old man to his own condition. Little did he knew, the three were not alone.

P.S. I have edited one of VD's pic to make taani's portrait, check this:

TAANI'S PORTRAIT--> CLICK THE LINK

There's a request. Please guys if any of you know how to upload the pics on IF through PC then please tell me if I got to know about it I'll paste this portrait directly on IF till then please tell me how was the update and the portrait too (made by me)😃

I'm so happy that u continue this story :)
Rey is so hyper and eagered to know more about the cottage and the portrait
The old man telling Reyam the story and Rey feeling someone presence was amazing
Aww he took the portrait with him...
Fanstatic update

Amazing update!
Wow..
No words to describe it..
Can you post the next part soon.??
Can't hold back the curiosity..

me ky kahu tumhe ...mujhse kuch samajh ni aa raha hai ...

finally rey and swayan came to know about her story through this old man...
and he really help down and advice to leave as soon as possible...
do continue soon and pm me