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Posted: 11 years ago
heya!
I m very very disapointed. Many of my readers hv stop commenting. So should i stop writing?????
Allow me to knw if anything wrng with my writing.Thanks to all who commented.
As it is 1 april so update on it...
Part 10-A
zoya recognised him, he was the same guy who used to follow her frm last week.
guy:"i love u shabhnam, mt bhago iske saath" in actual he was insane ditched by hs wife. (hs character will be further elaborated later.)
asad:"man, she is nt shabhnam bt zoya" he stood up, the man glared him "u see, zoya" the man joined hs hands to apologise n left.
Asad:"voh budhe, tere piche pagal he" he 🤣.
Zoya:"it would have been better agar vo tere daat tod deta" she to smiled "vese u ok now" he noded in yes.
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Nadia:"late ni8 kahan se" he blocked asad's way wen he came.
Asad:"tere nikkah se" he 😆

nadia:"gf ke sth the, abu ko btun" she smirked.
Rashid:"gf??? Kahan the abi tk." he cme frm bck.
Asad:"abu vo... Actually..." rashid shouted.
Rashid:"u r now 21, not 12 stop behaving irresponsibly" he looked him in full anger "mark my words" asad left.
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farhaan:"ami zoya ko is bare me kbi nai pta chalna chahie".
razia:"lekin jb use pta chalega tb"
farhaan:"tb ki tb ami" he regreted to smthng.
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NEXT DAY, college
asad n gang was back again.As only frndshp in this world is selfless.
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zoya n shimit were talking, ewhile asad was burning in jealously.
Najma:"khaega use asad, itna b mt ghur" wen she realished hs gaze others 🤣
asad:"ye vahan kyun gai" he turned n asked.
Haider:"gf he vo uski saale, to kyun na rhe uske saath" he blinked to all such that asad dint notice.
Ayan:"sai me?????"imran:"haan dnt u knw, he na najma"
najma:"ya ya, they r " they could clearly notice his changing expresions.
Nikhat:"asad tujhe ni btaya usne hm sbko to pta he" she pouted.
Asad:"yr u guys sure" he raised hs brow.
Humaira:"ya why we'll lie" break begin.
asad:"moti i need to talk to u".
zoya:"ill catch u later asad nw i hv to make shimit learn the topic"
asad:"class me sota he kya???"all 🤣
zoya;"asad just few minutes" and she left with him.
Asad:"dekhe ise kitna badal gai he" he said to all.

It was becoming hard for them to control their laughter.

Nikhat:"ya ab to hmse b bt ni krti" asad;"me dekhta hun ise" he went out in anger.
As he left all 🤣

ayan:"man haddi, jiki sbse sai fool bnega aj"
imran:"right, chalo lets see kya krega" they followed hm.

asad searched for zoya n finally found her

not yet completed, check below
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 10-B
zoya n shimit were hanging out in garden
when asad in full anger holded zoya's hand n took her with him
he took her to terrace
zoya:"leave my hand, kya kr rhe ho" she said as she felt pain in her hand
asad:"tune mujhe kyun ni btaya, itni nafrat he mujhse" zoya gave him 'what' expression.
Asad:"aise mat dekh mujhe teri frnds ne tere or shimit ke baare me" she shuddered in disbelief bt then saw thier gang pointing her to lie.
The very moment she realisd its 'FOOLS days' mean 1 april.
Zoya:"god! Hw dare they to reveal abt my relation to u" she said making pouts.

Others frm back 🤣
najma:"asad to sai me achcha fool bn rha he"
ayan:"jiki to bht bada pagal he, bewkoof bn gaya" he hi fied with haider
haider:"lekin ek bt samaj nai aai, ye itna kyun utavla ho rha he"
imran:"kahin koi gadbad... " others 😆
humaira:"zoya n he... Joke of the year..."
asad:"zoya, tu or shimit ek dusre ke lie nai bne ho" zoya shuddered
zoya:"how dare u say this????" she playfully approached him
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peon:"yahan kya kr re ho" he said to asya's gang who were eyeing them.
Ayan:"nthng bhaiya bus ja re he" unwillingly they left.
Humaira:"hme unhe chorke nai aana chahie tha"
nikhat:"bt ab kya kren hope vo bach jaen"
imran:" vrna jiki or zoya to gae"
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asad find her getting close to him.
He approached backwards.

As n wen poen came to shut the terrace door, he dint saw them as they went to other side.

Peon closed n tightly closed the door and locked it.
Zoya:"ek bt bta shimit tujhe pasand kyun nai" he simply nodded.
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it was now evening 7 pm.
Ayan:"yr college bnd ho gaya ye kahan mar gae"
najma:"shayad vo chale gae tabhi fone b ni utha reh" she said trying their phone.
It was in their bags in class.
Haider:"r u sure, i dnt thiank jiki gaya hoga"
shimit:"hey zoya kahan he, asad use kahan leke gaya he" he asked being concern.
Humaira:"i think she left with asad" they guessd n all left.
bt still they were not sure where they r.
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asad:"yr ye darwaze ko ptani kya hua he khul hi ni rha" he said trying to open the door fr 10 time.
Zoya:"tumme hi surely kuch prblm he tbi hmesha tumhare sth hi me fasti hun" she said being disguist.
Asad:"moti, ditto..." he said making pouts.

Zoya:"u mean ye sb meri vajah se hua he"
asad:"do i said so" he grinned.
Zoya:"bt how to get off frm here"

asad:"if i would hv knwn i m nt mad to waste my time here"
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KHAN VILLA

rashid:"kitna irresponsible he ye ladka" he said seeing time
it was 8 now, n almost dark.

Dilshad:"aata hi hoga" she tried to control the situation.
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razia n all in their house were equally worried fir them.
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asad n zoya sat on floor.
Asad:"yr wat the hell kya kre ab" he said throwing hs leg.
zoya:"nai tut rha, " she clenched her jaws" danda mar ke me tod dun, its jus cz of u we r here" he angrilly saw hm.
asad:"ok my fault, bt tu mujhe apne or shimit ke baare me pehle bta deti to ye ni hota."
zoya:"man dumbo we fooled u, april fool" she twiched her lip.

Asad 🤣 :"really moti tu b na me to dar gaya tha" he gave her aside hug.

Zoya:"dar gaya tha mtlb" she raised her brow
asad:"shimit ke lie, tujhe jhelna assan thodi he" zoya hit hm
--------- 10 pm ------
they were now yawning hard.
Zoya:"bht nind aa rhi he" she yawned.
Asad:"me too"

zoya settled on floor, nd covered her frm dupatta.

Zoya:"kya kr rha he" she said as she saw him removing hs shirt.

Asad:"me raat ko shirt ke saath ni so pata, moreover i hv to cover my face" he said n settled next to her.
Their arms touched.

Zoya:"dur ho" she turned another side. And soo did asad.

Precap:asya romance

razia slapped zoya.
Asad defended her...
Rashid's biggest decison...

Done!!!!

Do buddy me for pm
do like and comment.
Edited by KaBhilove07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
your precap is scary.
hope everything goes fine btw them.
plz update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
I M 2
Shimit and Zoya🤣 FOOL DAY 😃
Jeoulse ASAD 😆
WHAT WILL RASHID DECISON? MARRIGE? I HOPE SO 😉
RAZIA SLAPPED ZOYA HOW DARE SHE...😡
AMAZING PART 👏
THKS FOR PM 🤗
CONT SOON 😃😉
Edited by PreetLuvKSG - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey hey firsy of ol i m so sorry, i wasnt able to cmmnt last ime
I was just reading dat part wwen i got pm fr dis..
So sorry
So sorry

Okay both d updates were awesome
So sad so it was shireen's death anniversary..
So sad
Aww lovely how he went to d grave n even zoya supported him
Zoya ka ashik
Nice one.. shabnam... 🤣
Ph god why did nadia say so..
Ne defo rashid has doubted asad
Oh so d whole group was angry bt they r frens n no one evah can apart them
Lovely
Oh so april fools day..
Okay..
Hmm april fool banaya to unko gussa haya..
Hehehe
God wat a plan
Rofl
Ohkay n poor shimit n zoya
God he was so angry..
Hehe
Why why asad miya, u jealous kyu?
Oh so he took ker yo d terrace, koi r jagah nahi mili??
Wat was razia n farhan toking abt??
Oh god everyone left??
Mummy ab kya hoga??
Oh god sabki punhi baj rahi h including asya
N there stood rashid he will surely asumme something..
N d decision i , sure of marriage or parting away
Coz how dey have slept wud surely making ppl assume wrong
Oh god wat will happen
Bt it was as always superb
Lovely
Though cliffy
Oh god i was like it shudnt end
Bt god u cliffy personality
Why so??
Bt all in all it was so interesting..
So cute
N serious at the same time
Lovely
Awesome
Amazing
Wonderful
Update soonishest

P.S : dont u dare end it, or else bhaiseena n pammi on d way..

Loved it to d core
God it was awesome..
Update soonishest


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Posted: 11 years ago
what an update!! all fooled asad...lol...poor guy!!
but it was really funny...

niyati...why r u sad dear?? it happens sometimes...people r having exams...that's why there are less comments i guess...
and besides u just write for yourself...whatever ur heart says...readers will swarm over...i know appreciation matters...just give everyone some time...

eagerly waiting for rashid n his biggest decision...i guess it'll be a happy one!! please...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for Update.
I am Sorry for not commenting because of my exam preparation.😭
The story part was very interesting and Zoya fooled Asad(KSG)😆 and they slept in one room.
I am waiting for next part,please update soon.

__________________
(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)
PRIYAKABHI.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

your precap is scary.

hope everything goes fine btw them.
plz update soon

lets see wat hpnsss

thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PreetLuvKSG

I M 2

Shimit and Zoya🤣 FOOL DAY😃
Jeoulse ASAD😆
WHAT WILL RASHID DECISON? MARRIGE? I HOPE SO😉
RAZIA SLAPPED ZOYA HOW DARE SHE...😡
AMAZING PART👏
THKS FOR PM🤗
CONT SOON😃😉

congrats on being 2

thanks for such a lovely comment
and lets hope fr best

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