I m very very disapointed. Many of my readers hv stop commenting. So should i stop writing?????
Allow me to knw if anything wrng with my writing.Thanks to all who commented.
As it is 1 april so update on it...
Part 10-A
zoya recognised him, he was the same guy who used to follow her frm last week.
guy:"i love u shabhnam, mt bhago iske saath" in actual he was insane ditched by hs wife. (hs character will be further elaborated later.)
asad:"man, she is nt shabhnam bt zoya" he stood up, the man glared him "u see, zoya" the man joined hs hands to apologise n left.
Asad:"voh budhe, tere piche pagal he" he 🤣.
Zoya:"it would have been better agar vo tere daat tod deta" she to smiled "vese u ok now" he noded in yes.
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Nadia:"late ni8 kahan se" he blocked asad's way wen he came.
Asad:"tere nikkah se" he 😆
nadia:"gf ke sth the, abu ko btun" she smirked.
Rashid:"gf??? Kahan the abi tk." he cme frm bck.
Asad:"abu vo... Actually..." rashid shouted.
Rashid:"u r now 21, not 12 stop behaving irresponsibly" he looked him in full anger "mark my words" asad left.
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farhaan:"ami zoya ko is bare me kbi nai pta chalna chahie".
razia:"lekin jb use pta chalega tb"
farhaan:"tb ki tb ami" he regreted to smthng.
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NEXT DAY, college
asad n gang was back again.As only frndshp in this world is selfless.
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zoya n shimit were talking, ewhile asad was burning in jealously.
Najma:"khaega use asad, itna b mt ghur" wen she realished hs gaze others 🤣
asad:"ye vahan kyun gai" he turned n asked.
Haider:"gf he vo uski saale, to kyun na rhe uske saath" he blinked to all such that asad dint notice.
Ayan:"sai me?????"imran:"haan dnt u knw, he na najma"
najma:"ya ya, they r " they could clearly notice his changing expresions.
Nikhat:"asad tujhe ni btaya usne hm sbko to pta he" she pouted.
Asad:"yr u guys sure" he raised hs brow.
Humaira:"ya why we'll lie" break begin.
asad:"moti i need to talk to u".
zoya:"ill catch u later asad nw i hv to make shimit learn the topic"
asad:"class me sota he kya???"all 🤣
zoya;"asad just few minutes" and she left with him.
Asad:"dekhe ise kitna badal gai he" he said to all.
It was becoming hard for them to control their laughter.
Nikhat:"ya ab to hmse b bt ni krti" asad;"me dekhta hun ise" he went out in anger.
As he left all 🤣
ayan:"man haddi, jiki sbse sai fool bnega aj"
imran:"right, chalo lets see kya krega" they followed hm.
asad searched for zoya n finally found her
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