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Posted: 11 years ago

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Niyati di when u going to update your stories? Pls update na

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Hi helo, sory for late updates..
I m very very busy,
Wow!
Thanks for ur lovely coments.
Chapter dedicated to afra, ridhi, linsie, symrun..
Thanks afra and ankita for ur ideas.
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Part 8-A
zoya walked on road blank crying. When she felt a tug in her hand.
She turned it was asad.
Asad:"bt mt kr, lekin akeli kaise jaegi chal me chor dun" zoya jerkd hs hand.
Zoya:"u go, i'l manage.." she turned"i dnt need favour frm u".
Asad:"pay me 100, " zoya lukd hm "taxi ka itna h bnta he, fir favour ni hoga" he angrily said.
Zoya:" maine kaha na.." asad draged her to hs car.
Zoya sat silently.
Asad played the music.
"ik ajnabi sa ehsas dil ko satae," asad lukd zoya, "shayad yahi to pyar he"
"betabio me dhakan meri jal jae" zoya shared glance with asad" shayad yhi to ..."
Before it gets cmplete zoya turned it off.
Asad:"bnd kyun kia.." he played other song.
"tu hi yeh mujhko bta de" asad and shared a click glance "chahun me ya na" zoya this time bangly switchd it off.
Zoya:"aise vahiyad songs mt chala" asad huffed.
After smtime of silence in car. Asad reached her house.
Asad:"bye.." zoya dint replied n left.
As asad was driving bck hs eyes fall on pasenger seat, where he saw 100 rs.
Asad:"my my, moti is unbelievable, bt why the hel m i bothered," he pickd the note and kept in hs pocket. "asad no man , moti n u ," he thought" forget it" he drove to hs house.
AT NIGHT
Zoya:"sun, zoya tu or asad enemies ho, dnt think of hm" she said to herself munching kurkure, "no no, hw could me n asad" she stopd munching dat let her mouth open " gosh i couldnt bare hs presence"
"he is damn hot man, those 6 packs makes me crazy" she thought bt this removd all thoughts.
"arghh.. Zo he is nt ur type.. Lets sleep" she said to herself and buried her in the blanket.
KHAN VILLA
Asad:"oh man asad just patchd up with ritz, bt why m i thinking of moti" he said lost in hs world "her cries melts me" he stood up" woh, they r chemicals on my stone body" he said then 🤣 on hs idiotic scientific ideal.
"her hairs got they r snakes that poison me"😆 "now zoology "her eyes dig my heart coal mines hard" 😆"mineral studies"
"woh, man asad cntrol, moti ki itni tarif.. Mujhe acidity ho jaegi" he said n 🤣
Nadia cme with dilshad
nadia:"ami mene kaha tha na, bhai pagal ho gaya he dekho" nadia n dilshad 😆
Asad:"ami ise leke jao, lgta he iske hone ke time c.i.d bht dekha hua, ACP ki tarah act krti he" asad n dil. 🤣
Dilshad: "lado mt, asad chalo khane khalo" they left.
NEXT DAY
Asad saw that zoya changed her seat and sat with shimit.
Asad:"mujhse itni dikat is kamine ke sth beth gai" he said to hmself.
Zoya saw hm" chalo mene seat change karake acha kia kuch prb ni hogi ab ise" she murmured.
Days pased n pased.
Zoya n shimit became nice frnds.
Asad hd startd ignoring all, he always kept a eye on zoya.
One fine day, it was free class. He got iritated seeing shimit n zoya.
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not yet cmpletd check below.

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Niyati Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Part 8-B
Zoya and shimit were loudly laughing, when asad stood up in anger.
Asad:"which mad dog hd attackd u both stop laughing" he said to them.
All got silent hearing hs shout.
Haider:"jiki, wat hpnd to u yr, its free clas, all cn enjoy" he stopd as glared hm.
Asad:"i wana study nw, so please.." he saw shimit and zoya,"behave urself".
Zoya:"woh, mr. Asad wana study, normal clases me to padta ni, free period me padega" all 🤣,
Asad:"tu bht meri padai ka hisab rkhti he, mujhe to lga tujhe apne boyfrnd se furst ni milti" zoya n all widened their eyes.
Zoya:"shimit is nt my bf, u get that" she showed hm finger.
Asad:"oh, do i say shimit?" he smirkd," kuch to bt he" he bit his lower lip.
Zoya:" dats ur thinking, i cnt change it, bt mind i m far beter than u" her words hit hs heart with a huge bang.
He dint knew why he dint likd them.
Asad left frm there.
Humaira:"yr tumhe kya hua he" she askd zoya.
Zoya:"i m super fine, bt may be smthng gne wrng in asad's screws" haider n ayan 🤣
Imran:"stop it gys, smthng is serious. Frm last ni8 he hdnt took my calls" nw all went tensd.
Zoya:"apni baby se use time mile to dusro ko attend kre na" she said in anger.
Imran:"i knw hm, he was n is never serious frm any girl nt even ritika, wondering wat mig8 be bothering hm".
Najma:"realy pehle se to thoda change he".
Break startd
They today went to garden.
Haider: "rainy season my fvrte" he lied on grass.
Weather was pleasent.
Ayan:"hme to barish se alergy he" all 😆.
Haider:"tbi to kehte he kuch namuno ko ghar pe beth" asad cme n cmpletd " ghar pe beth ke pogo dekhna chahie" all 🤣 ,
Zoya rememberd the holi incident.
Shimit n ritika joind them.
shimit:"zoya cn i hv ur notes".
asad:"clas me hasa kam kr or kam jyada, fir isse mangne ki jarurat ni hogi."all😆
zoya:"shimit i'l gve u, seek use deni chahie jise khud ata ho" asad fumed with anger.
Ritika:"ok leave all dat, kal mere ghar party he, n u al hv to cme" zoya n her gang raisd their eyes.
ritika:"i dnt hv any isues with zoya nw so she cn cme" all cherished, zoya huged her.
AT NIGHT
zoya was just gng through her id. When she got msg frm ritika.
Ritika:"wil u cme".
Zoya:"yeah i'l" they changed smiles and said gud bye.
KHAN VILLA
Asad:"yr mujhe kya ho gaya he, kyun me use bt krna chahta hun," he closd hs lappy" mene sirf uske lie yeh.." he smiled.
"bt why is she ignoring me" he got sad"my my zoya u r making me crazy" he holded hs mouth.
"oho mr. Stud asad, stop thinking like lovers thats nt ur cup of tea" he said to hmself.
he slept bt forget to turn off hs id.
IN MORNING
Nadia cme to hs rum and shoutd.
Nadia:"bhai.." he stod up" yeh kya he, ap kis ritika ki id se kisi zoya se bt kr re the" she stood with wraped.
( ritika whose request zoya aceptd was actualy asad)
asad:"chup na, why r u shouting" he cupd her mouth.
Nadia:"i-fone 5 de apna, vrna abbu.." she shoutd bt asad cupd her mouth again.
Asad:"le mar le" he gave it to her.
COLLEGE
All were busy chanting on last seat.
Zoya was doing her work on frnt seat.
asad entered the clas.
Bt soon hs eyes saw smthng.
Asad:"zoya" he ran to her and huged her. She was in hs arms.
All turned to hm.
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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

ressy

unressy..

okayz now finally m unressing it even though m super late..

thank uh soo mush for dedicating this chappy for me too..so sweet of uh..😳

nd about the chapter, it was awesome-blossom as usual.👏.

superbly brilliantly nd spectacularly written..so so so loved reading to it..

its always a treat to read asya's cute nok jhok..nd uh haved penned it very beautifully..⭐️

Zoya ignoring Asad nd Asad being jealouse to see Zoya nd shimit together was very nice..as the jealousy track has begun, we will soon be witnessing the love track rite?😉

the 100 rupees part was just Rofling one..she actually gave it to Asad🤣

nd riku baby hugged Zoya nd even invited her to the party??😲 OMG m I dreaming or what? 😆

haww!! it was Asad who was talking to zoe from ritika's fb account?? awww he is acting like a typical love-struck teenager😳😆

His moti has already captured his heart nd mind as well.

the precap seems to be too interesting..Asad hugged her😳..awww..eager to know what was that hug for? nywayz the update was amazing..do continue soonish😛

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago

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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Oww Emm Gee!!

i m 1st to res here..

but last to unres it😆

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago

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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

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#398

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Very nice update. Loved that zoya ignore asad. So asad is jealous by seeing zoya and shimit together. Good. I knew it that this is asad who talking with zoya as ritika. Asad hugged zoya. Lets c what asad saw and hug zoya. Also wait to c how zoya react. Thanks for pm. Update soon