An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog*

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

OMFG Juhiii !! I just can't believe i finally read the second part...and girl i have no words this time.

The second part definitely pushed me into Lala land and i'm unable form coherent sentences at the moment.

The part started with Aman being an Ass big time and Khushi getting fired !

Arghhh ! I so wanna strangle him to death for being so unreasonable...

And then after that Khushi's talk with her mother and sister too left her unhappy , and i kinda felt sad for her as she was going through one of those bad days of her life...

but just then you proved me wrong, absolutely wrong ! If a Bad day is like...erm..this then one would prefer each and every day of his life to be a BAD day !!

I in my wildest imaginations about this chapter , didn't expect to see their first kiss.

I was behaving like a bloody little blushing chick , changing the tabs again and again because i was BLOODY BLUSHING !

It was like -

Without giving myself any time to think or reconsider, I walk over to the connecting door and knock on it.

* I go to another tab thinking - she's really doing this?? *

"I want a kiss. Just one."

* I change tab - this just cannot be ! *

"...need me to...what, exactly?"

* Change tab again - i'm sure i'm dreaming *

His left hand wraps around my waist, bringing me flush against his body. My breasts are flattened against his chest...

* Once again i change the tab - i'm gonna faint now , i'm gonna fain now ! *

"I do need help there. But I don't think that you're quite ready for that yet."

*And i die...*

Dude , This was such a surprise !!

The entire chapter was 'Perfectly, amazingly , fabulously fantastic and just so so so good !

Just in the previous comment i was talking about Khushi succumbing to the sexual attraction and it seems like Juhi devi loves me way too much and fulfilled my wish so bhery soonwa !

I love you so much for this rocking chapter Juhi.

Totally worth the wait...

And i'm really happy you're making a blog for Shaadi which will be open , because i'm seriously sick of some of IF's weirdly crappy rules...

But I'll try not to spam this time *pouts*

And last but not the least , i'm making the last part of my bhavishyavaani come true by already demanding Ch - 4's - Teaser , Teaser , Teaser !

Will be waiting eagerly 😃

-Nikita

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 11 years ago

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mbibi

@mbibi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Oh man! The heck is wrong with Aman?! It makes no logical sense for him go blame khushi; he's acting like a spoilt brat because he didn't get what he wanted from khushi but again, it's not her fault; and Arnav is right, she should have taken legal action for him unfairly firing her but I guess it won't matter dnce she doesn't want to associate with him...awww poor Khushi :( she feels left out from Payals wedding but it may just be in their Excitment, or at least I hope!
Ohh ho look at Khushi! U go girl! She's right, she should be selfish for once, and why not when Arnav is more than happy to give her what she is curious about! Ooo wow the temperature is going going wayy high...and no, we are not tired of the innuendos! :P

Oh and the blog is a good idea! Lots of other IF writers have shifted over and I think it's convenient not only for the writers but readers as well..so good luck with that and all the very best!

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awesome👏

Part -1...😳...

Part-2...😳

That jerk Aman😡

ASR so sweet ...

It really happens that ppl take u for granted ,when they know they r ur weakness ...even family 😕

Poor khushi ...it's always human to want to be desired...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

😳

😆

Blog sounds great !

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Loved chapter 3... Brilliant story

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Whoa..that was an awesome update..

I will go with the hotter things...Arnav and Khushi are so damm hot here and they have not anything till now(except for the kiss)..seriously the zipper part was way too good...😉..

For once Khushi let down her hair and did something for herself and they actually kissed

!!..

I truly understand her feelings regarding Payal and her mother's attitude..They might not be doing all this intentionally but still hurts..and she has sacrificed so much for Payal so its going to be all the more hard ...

Arnav in his own way is helping her and I'm so proud of him...In the first part, I felt like everyone was crowding over Khushi and I actually felt suffocated reading that part.On one side K has a deliciously handsome husband,then there was NK with his curious looks and then Lavanya. And finally the ass hole Aman..was he just relying on Khushi for his company to flourish...??

P.S:Do let me know when you open your blog and if you can do send me a pm or u can just save your time by putting the link in your profile/signature.I hope that is ok with the IF rules...

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Nisha

@urs_kkgsr

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Dear DT .. Care to explain what amount of replies are called spams !?

And juhi not to worry ... Your art doesn't need this..

"You can go anywhere ... Will follow you everywhere" 😉

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

will be following you any where don't get dishearten you have a loyal following loved the update so cute when she was helping him dress and loved their conversation and loved how they listen to each other so cute when she helped him undress and aman how dare he blame her for his screwed up business what an a** and khushi asking arnav if he leaked it and payal ia really so into her self that she cares about any one i blame khushi she lets people step on her loved how arnav took her out and kept asking for her help to distract her loved that she knows what he was doing and loved the kiss and loved that she realized for the first time some one was putting her first awesome update beautifully done.

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liza_beans

@liza_beans

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

I stumbled upon this story and am glad I found it. You are an amazing writer and I hope to read more of your stories. Can you pm me your blog address?