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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: vishruta

Awesome
Continue soon
Read it all in one go
Amazingly written


Thanks a ton
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
AWSOME UPDTE
love sandhir chat
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
update fats... this one was veryyy gud!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

There you go with part 6 ! Part 7 to be updated soon!!

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Sanyukta was looking outside the window, again and again looking at her mobile to make that chomo think as if she's waiting for someone's message or call, suddenly the chomo broke the silence between them and said "Sanyukta, you are looking very beautiful in this dress , brown mera favorite color hai, mujhe brown bahut pasand hai" "Aur ab mujhe iss color aur suit se nafrat ho gayi hai! Thanks to you" sanyukta murmured, "Kuch kaha kya ?" Asked chomo , Sanyukta acted innocently and said "Nahi toh", suddenly Sanyukta's mobile beeped , it was message from Randhir , which said :

Aankho ki gehrai ko samaz nahi sakte,
Honto se kuch keh nahi sakte,
Kaise baya kare hum aapko yeh dil ka haal ki,
Tumhi ho jiske bageir hum reh nahi sakte...

Sanyukta was stunned to read the message and murmured to herself "Iss MCP ko kya ho gaya hai ?" ,5 mins later another message came from Randhir , which said:

Farzi! Zyada mat socho , aise type messages main tumhe behjta rahunga aur tumhe inhe padh kar smile karna hai so that uss roadside romeo ko shaq ho jaaye , ab iss message ko delete kar dena and haan apne roadside romeo ko bolo gaadi tez chalane ke liye , main tumse aage nikal gaya hoon aur aage ek turn ki taraf wait kar raha hoon , black helmet pehna hua hai with black bike , apne roadside romeo ko meri presence ka shaq hone mat dena.. Main tumhare saath Delhi aa raha hoon ... Mera plan hai , zyada mat socho aur iss message ko delete karo , mere mobile mein ek timer laga hai jo todhi der mein tumhe ek message bhejta hai aur haan jab yeh padh lo smile karlo aur jab woh roadside romeo tumhe dekh le smile karte hue then inn messages ko delete kar dena get it !... Ok ...ab jitna kaha hai utna karna...

Sanyukta read the whole message and quickly deleted it and then read his previous message and smiled and then deleted it too, chomo saw this and asked "Kya hua ?" , Sanyukta now stopped smiling and realized that Randhir's plan is actually working, she quickly replied "Kuch nahi" and then looked outside the window and smiled , a few minutes later another message came:

Banane Wale Ne Bhi Tujhe

,Kisi Karan Se Banaya Hoga,

Choda Hoga Jab Zameen Par Tujhe,

Uske Seene Mein Bhi Dard To Aaya Hoga...

Sanyukta read this and smiled , and chomo was observing her , he tried to talk to her , but fail , she wasn't interested in his talks, she was busy admiring the beauty of the nature, her mobile beeped again, it was message from him again:

as Ek Choti Si Haan Kr Do

Hamare Naam Is Tarha SaraJahan Kr Do!

Wo Mohabbtain Jo Tumare Dil Mein Hain

Un ko Zuban Pr Lao 0r Bayan Kr Do!

Aaj Bas Ap Kaho 0r Kehty HiJao

Hum Bas Sune Aisa Be-Zuban Kr Do!

Hoi Purani Dastan Heer Ranjha Ki

Tarikh Mohabbat Ki Phir Se Jawan Kr Do,

Aa-Jao Ke Aisa Toot Kr Chahon Tumhe

Hamari Mohabat Ko Mohabbat Ka Nishan Kr Do!

Apne Dil Me Is Tarha Chupa Lo MujKo

Rahon Humesha Is me aisa Mera Makan kar Do...!!!

Sanyukta smiled even more brightly, and chomo was still confused thinking what's wrong with her, they got to the point where Randhir was waiting, Randhir was sweating a lot hence he removed his helmet he then saw the car in which Sanyukta is seated and as the car passed he saw her and smiled, she saw the handsome hunk as he smiled and returned a smile.

He then put on his helmet and drove his bike. Sanyukta received those messages Randhir sent & deleted them after reading but continuously smiled making chomo doubtful. Chomo stopped at a dhabba to have meal, he went inside the dhabba while Sanyukta made an excuse saying that she wanted to see the place and chomo agreed ,

she started walking when suddenly her mobile rang , she answered the call "Hello ?, Yeah I'm fine, how r u ?, haan padhe maine, bahut acche hain , kya !! Accha theek hai" chomo heard so and then Sanyukta started walking towards a tree while talking to someone on the call, she stood leaning towards the tree, talking on mobile, but in reality she was talking on phone while she was actually talking to Randhir who was just in front of her leaning to the backside of the tree "Plan kaisa chal raha hai ?" Randhir asked

"Perfect ! Uss chomo ko pakke tareeke se shaq ho raha hai , waise tumne mujhe call kyun kiya aur yahaan aane ke liye kyun kaha" Sanyukta replied , "Tum ,apne phone pe kaustuki ko call karo and before ring jaaye , call kaat dena aur mere naam call directory se delete kar do" Randhir commanded "Kya ? lekin kyun?" Asked Sanyukta

"Farzi! Bhagwan ne tumhara top floor khali nahi bheja hai , bas tum uska use nahi kar rahi ho!"Randhir taunted "Kya matlab?" Sanyukta asked again "Farzi agar tumhare roadside romeo ne tumhara phone dekh liya toh.. tumhari band bajayegi .. iss liye chup chap se jitna kaha hai utna karo and tumne woh saare messages delete kar diye hai na ?Chalo theek hai hia main chalta hoon"said Randhir as Sanyukta nodded her head and did as Randhir said , she just watched him leave , she turned to leave but was shocked to see the chomo standing there, she felt as if he heard everything "Saameeer ... Tumhe kuch chaiye ?" said Sanyukta nervously and stammered a little , chomo replied with a sly expression on his face "Sanyukta woh..."

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Ok guys I've anoother 440 volts jhatka news ... I told na that you'll get to know Randhir's reason of helping Sanyukta in 3-4 updates , I was just thinking about it and realized its not 3-4 updates but 5-6 updates...

I know you all are very angry and want to kill me but what can I do ! The devil inside me is like "Tadapao inn logo ko" and all

I'm really sorry but according the plot its neccessary...

Edited by MyLiFeMyRuLeS.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
awsome updt
message are awsome
randhir plan is working
waiting fr nxt
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U r making us wait for too long!!!!!!!!!!! waiting for the next!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awesoomee! n update fast [ as always] .. jhatka toh bada wala diya hai tumne... still.. go on..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

awesoomee! n update fast [ as always] .. jhatka toh bada wala diya hai tumne... still.. go on..


Hehehe ty will update soon the secret will be revealed b4 friday
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous! !!dats d only word I can think of..
Hats off babes👏! !u hve a real knack at building suspense yaa!!😃i seriously luv it!!m sure d nxt update will b just as awesome. .keep going girl!!one more thing, I probably won't b able 2 comment on ur nxt update bt I'll surely read it wen I get tym...

-Gargi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gargi.swaron

Fabulous! !!dats d only word I can think of..

Hats off babes👏! !u hve a real knack at building suspense yaa!!😃i seriously luv it!!m sure d nxt update will b just as awesome. .keep going girl!!one more thing, I probably won't b able 2 comment on ur nxt update bt I'll surely read it wen I get tym...

-Gargi


Thanks a lot it means a lot to me ...
You can comment later no problem for that

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