I OWN YOU DEAR LAST PART(pg 35) SEASON 2 STARTED!!! LINK IS IN PAGE 39 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh man !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am still shocked how can nuts and vidhushi go so down !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Parth is the savior of sanyu , while reading this I cursed Randhir sooo much and I cried too 😭 , man you're such a gr8 writer
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nooo😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Go to helll u vidhushi😡😡😡 ...i wil hit u😡
superbb update...continue soon plzzz😭😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏👏👏HEY U R AN AWSUM WRITER I WANT YA I CAN SAY WE ALL WANT U TO CONTINUE THIS WORK IT WAS JUST WONDERFULL👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
UPDATE SOOON!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I got all numb and teary the moment he called her a prostitute.it was beautiful and please update soon.
Edited by Raisinghope - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww what an ff , read all 7 parts in one go , soo emotional😭👏
waiting 4 next part , do pm me plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz update the nxt part asap...
plzzz post it soon...
this 1 was damn osm...superbbb!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
read all d parts in a go...its awesome.. d last part made me cry😭 do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
So hve it...again my cousin cried after reading this...if u guys too cried let me knw...

I own you Dear
part 8

Parth-BLOOD IS INDEED...SANYUKTA ATTEMPTED SUICIDE...

Evryone was shocked..none of them utter a word...vidhushi and nuts were afraid of soft corner from there family to Sanyu...devils will be devils...

Nuts-vidhushi dii do smethng...
Vidhushi-ok...calm down..
Vidhushi-oh God yeh ladki bhi naa...kithni naatak karthi hai...
Nuts-ekk number ki drama queen...hamesha meri randhir ko mujse cheena chathi hai..
Renuka-dont worry Natasha..thum dono sanyukta tho kya koi bhi nayi door karrsaktha...

Bleady ankit too joined them..

Ankit-papa dekhiye naa usski nayi drama...
Sanyu.dad-yeh ladki hamaari naak kattvakarri rahegi...shekhwat Saab...aap yeh sochna bandh kejiye..lets continue our dinner...wo bhauth naatak karrthi hai...
Anju(Sanyu mom)-nayi..nayi...main janthi hoon apni Sanyu ko..wo kabhi iss thara mazak nayi karegi...
Nuts-aunty..comn...aapne tho bathaya tha ki wo aapki beti nayi hai..main aapki beti hoon...sanyukta hamesha galath kaam karthi rehe thi hai..patha nayi yeh ladki kabh sudregi..hamari life main shehethan banngayi hai...yeh naa randhir..??

(I knw u guys waited for Randhir reaction..hve it...)

Randhir was numb...he felt as if someone suddenly hitted him on his head with heavy stone..his heart sunk...his heart crushed into thousand million pieces.
Nobody knew wat was happening to Randhir...
He was lost..he felt lifeless...his hand and legs were shaking badly...yess he hurted Sanyu to take revenge..but it hurted him more then her..seeing her hurt made him smewhat happy...but it always ended with tears in his eyes...it was disaster for him...his heart cried badly day and night since they broke up...suddenly he remeberd his words bitch,prostitute..it was hitting his heart as arrows...

Nuts-Randhir...yeh sabh sanyukta ki naatak hai...bass wo chathi hai..ki thum usse Milne jao...wo thume phirse phasa rahi hai...darling..main hoon thumare saath...
Renuka-humne galthi karrdi uss ladki ke saath Randhir ka shadhi karrvake...
Sanyu.dad-hame maaf karrdhijiye...sabh hamara galthi...humne kabhi nayi socha tha ki hamari beti essa bhi karrsakthi hai.!!!...lekin abh main usse apna beti nayi mantha...nathasha hi hamari beti hai...

Randhir p.o.v

Really sanyukta!!!..nayi..nayi...I knw Natasha teek kehari hai...wo muje phasa rahi hai...bleady hell..kabhi nayi sudregi...Maine esse ladki se pyar kiye ki muje paane ke liye ithna girrsakthi hai...wo muje kabhi pyarhi nayi kiya tho..sucide kyun karregi??yess nuts is right...but agar Sanyu natak karri hai tho..vardhan sir kyun call karenge??"

Parth-muje patha tha yaha pe kissi ko koi pharakh nahi padega...wo marr bhi jaaye thabbhi nayi..

Parth walked towards the door...

Anju-beta rukho...main bhi aari hoon...thumare saath..
Sanyu.dad-anju kaha jarra hi ho thum??
Anju-meri beti ko meri zaroorath hai...
Dad-thum kahi nahi jaarahi ho..anju..chup chap baito..
Anju-nahi...aaj nahi...aaj main chup nahi baitoongi...kaash yeh Maine pehele kiya hotha...main apni beti ko jaanthi hoon..wo kabhi essi mazzak nahi karrsakthi...main jaarahi hoon..
Ankit-maa...

All convinced anju...but she was not ready...afterall Sanyu was her daughter...

Dad-teek hai thume jaana hai tho jao...
Ankit-papa...!!??
Dada-lekin vapass ghar math aana...

Anju was stunned...to hear it... She was crying...
She wipped her tears...

Anju-jii..teek hai...main vaapass nahi aaungi...main apni beti ko lekhar kahi bhi chalejungi...lekin vaspass aapki ghar nayi aaungi...meri bacchi ne bahuth dardh sehachuki hai abh aur nahi...chalo Parth beta...

Anju and Parth leaved to hospital...

Others were stunned...ankit was cursing Sanyu...with bad words...nuts and vidhushi were happy..atleast other people did not cared...but soon they left...Randhir was lost...

Randhir was not reacting for anythng..he kept quite..every second he was dying...he closed his eyes but only he can remember her face...her smiling face was flashing...his heart was dying to see her..he felt as his stomach was squeezed...finally...he lost it...and reacted..

Randhir-dad..muje hospital Jana hai...muje usse dekhna hai...
R.Dad-perr beta...
Randhir-dad I promise agar yeh joot nikla..zindhgi Barr usski chehera nahi dekhunga...plz dad..let me go...
Nuts-Randhir thum sanyukta ko dekne jaoge...!!!???
Sanyu.dad-jabh Hammhi usse saara rishtha thod diya hai..hum usse beti nayi maanthe tho..thum ithna parishan kyun ho...??aaj hi saadhayi hui hai thumara...
Randhir.dad-Haan..beta jabh wo loghi usse beti nahi maanthe tho thum..ithna parishan kyun ho??

Randhir-papa main UNKI BETI KO NAYI...APNI BIWI KO DHEKHNE JAARAHA HOON...isliye muje jaane dhijiye...

Soon randhir left to the hospital...as well as all others too left...

Randhir stepped inside the ward...only he saw is Anju and niharika were crying badly...parth,Dean and vardhan were discussing...a girl with full of blood also present near the operation theater...

Anju-kyun aaye thum log yaha??yehi dekh ne keliye naa kahi meri beti Mari yaa nahi..??

Well Anju was cursing others...randhir stepped forward..now he was in front of OPT...he starred at vardhan..but vardhan ignored him..soon doctors came out frim OPT...

Anju and Parth rushed towards them..

Parth-kya hua?? is everything ok??
Doctor-we r very sorry...bahuth buri thara se usski brain pe effect hua hai...bahuth koon bhi behuchuki hai...we are trying our best...but Kuch nahi kehesakthe...Dean sir this is 100% sucide attempt..she is too depressed...hame patient ki pet se 6 sleeping tablets mili hai..we think tht wo tablets lene ke baad wo terrece se giri hai...lagtha hai wo apne aapko kissi bhi haalath main zindha nahi dekhni chathi hai..issliye sleeping tablets bhi liya hai..sath main terrace se bhi ghir gayi...
Vardhan-doctor..plz usse kissi bhi haalath main bachalegiye...
Doctor-hum bahuth koshish karr rahe hai..but she is not responding...usse bachana bahuth mushkil hai..I dnt think she can make it...we will try...rest upto God...

After hearing this..randhir was lifeless..he felt breathless...he felt as if someone squeezed his heart by knife..his legs had no more strength to stand..he jzt collapsed...





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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg.!!!
Yeh Kya tha..??😭
Sanyu dad n her brother dey r so heartless..
And tht vidhushi n nuts bloody bi*** Shameless creatures...!!
This update again made me cry badly than d previous one..
I hope sanyuktha will b fine soon..
I just loved the way u portrayed randhir's feelings..
Update next part ASAP...
Can't wait to read next part..
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago

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