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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: TylerRosewood
Awesome update
Rey's Love for his children
his hurt on seeing their house and problems
Rey wanting to take Taani home
Arshi's plan to make rey realise
totally loved it

thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: sona_taarey
plzzz updateee we all r w8inggg

updating in a while

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: lechu10
nice updates... plz update next chapter soon and pm me also

thank you.. will update n pm u

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Taarey_Manan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: -SunShine
haww...dhamki dena is not good 😆

ufff chalo u updated

Edited by taashareyam - 11 years ago

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tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: -SunShine
updating in half n hour

half n hour is over dear..

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

CHAPTER FOUR

Taani was very happy Today she got the biggest and happiest news of her life...she is pregnent
Taani was going to tell him about their baby who is growing inside her

"may be iss news se hamare rishta bhi sudhar jaaye" taani thought excitedly thinking after hearing this news rey will accept her as his wife but she is unaware of storm coming in her life which is going to change her life

Taani was busy in her thoughts when rey entered in room in his angry young man avtar

Rey walk close to her and grab her hairs in his fist pull her up...taani was not shock with his behaviour it was not new to her..his manhandling

But taani was confuse and scared looking in his anger filled eyes

Taani : "aap ye..yeh"
She didnt even complete her sentence when rey increase his grip on her hairs...she winced in pain

Rey : "you bit**...dare you utter a word..i dont want ur filthy face infront of me...get out of this house...get out of our lives"

Taani : "mene ky..kya kiya h..hai"
Taani was shocked and in pain...how can he throw her out without any reason...tears were falling from her eyes

Rey instead of answering her...he lost his control and slapped her not once but many time...taani placed her hand on her stomach protectively not wanting anything happen to her unborn baby

Rey again held her by her hair...taani tried to free her hairs from his dead tight grip

Rey : "tumahare uss bhai aaj apna asli chehra dikh diya...dikha diya ki tum jaise log paison ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho...jab meri bahen ke liye uss ghar mein jagah nahi hain toh tumhare liye bhi iss ghar mein koi jagah nahi hai"

When rey come to know that shyam had threw anjali out of his house...he filled with anger now he wants to hurt shyam...he want him to feel the same pain which he is going through seeing his sister shattered

On the other hand taani was shock hearing this news
"bhai ne bhabhi ko gharse nikal diya par kyun" taani thougjt to herself

Rey : "aur vese bhi mein tumhe dad aur di ki vajah se jhel raha tha...but ab aur nahi...nikal jao mere ghar "

He drag her downstairs.. taani was begging him not to throw her out of house...just listen to her once but he didnt paid any heed to her
Nobody was there in house that time to help her

Taani : "rey please esa mat kijiye...meri bat toh suniye
She beg him

Rey stop infront of main gate of his house
And his next move shocked her to the core..in a swift secont rey snatch her mangalsutra from her neck...she standing there lifelessly

Rey : "from now you are not my wife..from now my family had no relation with you"

Saying this rey close the door on her face

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Taani come out of her past memories when she felt someone wiping her tears...taani open her eyes saw aaryan standing there..he again wipe her tears

Aaryan : mumma aap kyu ro rahe ho

Taani was not able to sleep after what happen today...how can he ask her to come back as if nothing had happen
Taani was lost in her past when aryan come there

Aryan was sleeping but he woke up in middle of the night when he didnt find his mumma on bed beside him...when aryaan notice her mumma sitting on sofa...he too move toward her

Seeing her mummas tears his eyes were also start getting watery
Taani : kuch nahi bacche bas ese hi mumma ki eyes mein kuch chla gaya tha

Taani made him sat on her lap she caressed his hairs lovingly
Taani : aap toh so rahe the na
Aaryan : ha but mene aapko yaha bethe hue dekha toh mein bhi aapke paas aa gaya

Aaryan tell her in his childish tone

Taani : okay chalo ab hum sote hain..kaafi raat ho gayi haina

Aryaan : mumma aap roya mat karo mujhe accha nahi lagta...warna mein papa se shikayat karunga aapki ki agar aap fir se roye toh

Taani smiled at her son
Taani : theek hai mein nahi roungi but aap bhi papa se kuch nahi kahenge

Aryaan nooded in agreement

Taani pick him up in her arms and laid him on bed beside arushi who was fast asleep..soon..she too laid on one side of bed taking both the kids in her motherly embrace

Taani (herself) : krishnaji kalse mujhe unke saath unke office mein kaam karna hai..please sab kuch theek karna

Thinking about how will rey behave with her...she is still scared of his behaviour toward her...what if he treat her i same the way he treated her 4 years back..thinking about all this taani drifted into sleep.

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NEXT DAY

In morning before going to office rey come to meet his kids

Kids saw him and ran to him...rey too take them in his embrace...rey was looking here n there in house to get a glimpse of taani

Aaryan : papa aap kya dekh rahe ho
Little aaryan was confuse

Rey : champ..where is your mumma
Arushi : mumma toh office gayi

Arushi answered him in sad tone...rey was feel sad seeing his princess sad face

Rey : par aap itna sad kyun ho?
Aaryan : woh mumma office chali jaati hai toh humare saath khelne wala koi nahi hota na...neha di (their baby sitter) bhi thodi der baad chali jaati hai...hum akele acha nahi lagta

Both kids were upset and seeing them rey was feeling guilty

"its all because of me...itna bada parivaar hone ke baad bhi mere bacche akelapan mahsoos karte hai.. mujhe taani se iss baare mein baat karni hogi" rey thought to himself now he will give them the love they deserve

Rey kissed their forehead
Rey : ab aap akele nahi rahoge..aaj aapke papa pura din aapke saath rahenge aur hum khoob masti bhi karenge

Kids got excited and hug
Both : thank you papa..i love you

Hearing this his fatherly heart overwhelmed with joy..this is the first his babies tell him that they love him...his eyes gets teary

Trio get busy in their playing...these moments are best moment of his life but Still he is feeling incomplete and somewhere he knows that its because taani is not there with him to complete his family

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Here in office taani was shocked to know that rey missed his office to spend time with kids as their baby sitter herself told her

Taani : thank you krishna ji...mere baccho ko unke pita ka pyar mil raha hai...jis insaan ke liye uske kaam se badkar kuch nahi tha aaj unhone uss kaam se pahle apne baccho ko rakha...woh ek ache pati na sahi par ek ache pita jarur hai

She thanked her krishna ji

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Taarey_Manan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

res for now will edit tomorrow

unres chalo aaj hi comment kar dete hai

awesome update chalo atleast u gave a long update then chap 10 of dark ff

i love the way rey goes to meet his children and plays with him

i hope he will get taani back soon

amazing

update soon

n that too

long update

yayyy me first🥳

Edited by taashareyam - 11 years ago

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tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

sorry didnt read the update..
update was nice..
taani past was horrible with rey..
it will really take time for taani to trust rey as a husband..
love aaryaan and taani bond..
rey's and children scene was also cute and emotional..
over all love the update..
but it was too short..
next time lamba wala update that also soon..