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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Shubh007
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
WAITING EGARLY SO UPDATE SUPER SOON...😊

Updating in a while

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee
Shyam ko kiya laana zaroori tha? Anyways, aa gaya hai to kiya kar sakte hain. Par abhi bhi bahot sare sawal hain like- how she went to Delhi, how she managed alone all these 4 yrs, does she have any other fnd, & what wud REY do now? So dr, update soon.

you will get all ur answers in coming updates

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bista-anzana
Amazing start...
Felt nice wen got to noe dt Rey is happy afta noeing abt his chidlren..
But hope again he won't move into his rude tone...
Nd also i dunn want Taani forgiving him afta oll wot he hd dne wid taani..
He hv to pay for dis..plz make him pay nyhw...
Shyam why is he here..? Ws it necesaaray to b uff i hate him...
Wanna see rey's reaction afta seeing his children..
Nd plzz reveal hw did taani survive in delhi..? Was ny 1 dere ya she meet sum ppl who helped her ?

Thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05
Superb start,,
M happy that rey cares 4 his babies..
Khushi is sweet..
Update soon!!!

Thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi
awesum update ..👏
luvd taani n khushi's meet ..!👍🏼

khushi .. she's too sweet ...! 

rey .. thank god he cares 4 his babies ..!😃

luvly update ..👍🏼

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm ..😊

Thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: vi1772843271_nc
awesome update...
it was such a beautiful starting...
taani and khusi meet is amazing...
just loved each and every part..


loved khusi part and atleast rey cares for his babies..


what taani is shyam sis...OMG
jaldi se next part update karo...

thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: ziya_taarey
Hello..!!
Pehli baar u wrote such a big chapter..!!!
Awesome chapter tha... Khushi as always so bubbly and cute..!!!
Still cares so much for taani.. Awww..
Rey still cares for his kids.. He wants to meet them...
Taani ke mom dad jaise mom dad kisi ko naa mile...
Shiii yaar rk society ke status ke liye apne hi beti ko chodh diya..
I just hope rey taani se baccho ko na chheen le..
Please jaldi se taarey meet karado...!!!
Update soon..!!

thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: ziya_taarey
Oh ek aur cheez...
Shyaam ko taani ka bhai batana zaruri tha???
Shii i hate him..
Anyways update soon..!!

shayam is going to play a important role

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: ...pooja...
awesome update
khushi n everyone were so happy to know about taani n babies
rey was so much shocked to hear about taani
park scene was nice
then rey call taani n smile hearing his babies voice
loved the update
update next part soon

Thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

CHAPTER TWO

IN MORNING

Rey was getting ready for his office...he has very important meeting and wants to end this meeting so that he can go meet his babies and taani
He had already ordered his assistant (sameer) to find taanis address

Anjali entered in his room with his coffee

"good morning di" rey wished her
"Good morning rey...i wanted to talk to you something important" says anjali

"yeah di" rey said siping his coffee

"first you sit here" anjali make him sit on bed amd she sat beside him

"hum aapse taani aur baccho ke baare mein baat karna chahte hai...ab aap aage kya karenge rey" anjali asked him hoping for a positive answer

"i want my kids" rey simply said

"aur taani ??" she asked him
"pta nahi" that was his answer this angered anjali

"pta nahi...pta nahi ka kya matlab hai rey woh aapki biwi hai...aur ab aapke baccho ki ma bhi...hum chahte hai ki aap taani aur bachho ko iss ghar main lekar kar aae..." she ordered him

"what di aap uss ladki ko ghar main laana chahti hai jiske bhai ne aapke saath itna bada dhoka kiya" rey was irritated with his dis behaviour

"par usme taani ka koi dosh nahi tha...then why are you punishung her" her eyes start getting watery

"di u r not understanding...jaisa bhai vesi bahen...she also want money nothing else thats why she said yes to our marriage"says rey trying to make her understand

"chii rey...taani ko paiso se koi matlab nahi hai aur rahi baat shaadi ki...taani toh kabhi shaadi karna hi nahi chahti thi..woh toh apni studies par concentrate karna chahti thi...usse toh kisine shaadi ke liya haa ya na ke liye bhi nahi pucha tha...jab dad aapka rishta lekar gaye toh taani ke parents ne ha kar di bina uski permission ke" anjali told him the truth...anjali look at rey who was shock with this new information

"what??" comes out of his mouth

"ha rey yeh sach hai isilye hum tumse keh rahe hai shyamji ki galti ki sazza taani ko mat do...usse vapas le aao" anjali kept her hand on his shoulder

She want her brother to be happy in life...and also she is feeling guilty for what happen with taani somewhere she is responsible

"but kya woh vapas aayegi" rey asked her
"aap unhe lekar aayenge toh woh jarur aayengi" she answered him...still she knows that its going to be difficult for taani to forgot anything and come back

~~~

Rey was walking toward his confrence room when he bumped into someone...rey look at the person got shock

"m sorry i wasnt looking...m really sorry" she said while collecting her papers from floor...she didnt notice the person she bumped into...sge was wearing a simple saree with no makeup but still looking gorgeous...ret got lost in her

"Taani" rey said coming out of shock

Taani look up at the persons face...she stood up

"what are you doing here?? " Rey asked her

While taani was looking here n there not knowing how to face him

"woh deal final karne ke liye yha aai thi" taani says to him

Rey was about to ask her about kids when his pa came and tell him that meeting is about to start

Rey thought to ask her later after meeting...rey move in confrence room..be told her to wait for him after meeting he has to talk to her

Taani was nervously standing there thinking
"what if khushi bhabhi has told him about kids and he will snatch them from me...no i cant let this happen..i will not let him take my babies away from me" she thought to herself

Taani too move inside for meeting

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Deal has finalise between Reys company and maheta company (in which taani work)

Cilents are sitting with rey in his cabin
" mr.singhania from tommorrow our four people team will work here with you on this project " mr.maheta

"okay mr.maheta...give me the list n data of ur employee who will work on this project " rey says

Mr.maheta gives him list...rey check the list but didnt find the name which he was searching

"mr.maheta the one who gave presantation her name is not here" rey asked him...he wants taani to work with him...he was also impressed with her the way she gave presantation in meeting

"i think u r talikng about ms.shekhawat...she is not working here" he told rey

"ms.shekhawat why she didnt use my name now "rey thought but mr.mahetas voice brought him back

"but i want her to work with me in this project" rey said to him

"but" mr.mahta started to say but rey cut him in the middle

"mr.maheta i dont like to repeat things do as i say or this deal is cancel"rey said in his sharp business tone

Finally mr.maheta agreed and put taanis name in list

Mr.maheta left from there after signing deal papers

After he left rey call his recaptionist and tell her to send ms.shekhawat in his cabin

~~

Taani was standing infront of him...all the haunted memory of his beating her,tauning her etc. was coming infront of her eyes.
Her chain of thoughts broke with his stern voice

"i want to meet my kids" he told her

Taani look at him with fear in her eyes

"wh..why"

Rey can see the fear in her eyes...he didnt like the fear in her eyes

"dont worry m not going to take them away from u m just want see them" he said to her making her relaxed

Taani look at him..still scared for his behaviour toward her babies...rey look at her he can see the hesitation in her expressions

"common lets go " he grab her hand and took her to his car

Tanai sat in car quietly...taani gives him address of her house and rey drove away to her house

PRECAP : REY MEETS KIDS

I KNOW YOU ALL ARE UPSET WITH REYS BEHAVIOUR BUT I WANTED HIM TO SEE HOW BROKEN TAANI IS..THEN HE REPENT

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