ASYA(KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Chapter 41 to Chapter 46

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

Hi Swapno...

missed you so much darling..

how are you now??😳

you know, during the whole journey of this story, i as a reader have been through a lot of things along with you as a writer...

we waited every night for the update... me and Aish fought for the first place...we spammed your threads...😆

all those days were truly the golden days...😳

then you took a break of few days when the disaster happened.. and trust me, when you said that you are going to finish this story, sooner or later, i was more than elated!!😃

i really appreciate that you have successfully kept all your promises...😛

it was a great journey throughout!! 😊

coming to this update,

the changes that you have shown in their lives over the time looked SO real to me... it actually happens in between any couple...

they fight and then make up, coz they love each other...

i will be sooo eagerly waiting for the epilogue dear... 😃

love you loads 🤗

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Its superb
thanx for pm
hope to see epilouge soon

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Superb ending of Lovely story..

Loved each n every thing of this FF..

Zoya got justice for her parents..

Rashid got punishment..

AsYa going to be Parents..

Lovely..

Waiting for Epilogue..

-Mariam-

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Swappy after so many days i got ur update.

I am so happy that u are fine now.

Pls dont stop writing ASYA stories,

Its the only way to memmorise that sweet days 😭

I miss u so much

I miss my ASYA & Kabhi so so much

You know it hurts now also.

The update was mind blowing.👏

I love every bit of it.

Its so cute,romantic,emotional & thrilling update.👏

Pls do write more .

Its my request to u.😭

I hope u fulfill my request

All the best wishes to u dear

LOve u dear & Take care

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

Superb!! so finally asya are soon going to be parents...😛

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anura7281

@anura7281

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Hawww THE END

my fav ff came to an end

It was Rajadhani express updated one day two day three day one week one month leaps

One jealous update too

At last Zoya got justice Hmmm, and Dilshad realised how whimpid Rashid was

At the end of the day

Alls wells that ends well

Thank you for giving us a happy ending I hv to specially say this now

dont leave writing

continue with more stories

Luv Anuradha

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

thanks for the pm..

it was an awesome story..

though i dont drop comments frequently.. i have always left me like here...

beautiful end...

happy that this asya are living happily ever after...

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

res

unres...

The END...?? 😲 😲 😲 😭 😭 😭 🥺 🥺 🥺

I cannot believe that it ended so soon...!!!

But the update was truly fab...!!! Entire update was so superb...!!!

The way you described how she felt in the morning after their revelation...

And the Akdu yet romantic asad...!!

I'm gonna miss this badly...!!

I had started reading it again and i'll probably keep on doing so...!!!

You better not stop writing and keep writing more of these AWESOME stories...!!!

And the jelly yet gussa asad we got to see...!! A treat...! A double treat with a yummy cherry on the top!

Glad that Zoya realised how much Asad has done for her...! But love her more for making him jelly...

Asad giving an encouraging smile even when he was mad at her...!! AAwwnnn... how romantic can these to get...!! I'm all jelly and gooey...!!

Oops... Too many hugs from Riyaz...! Asad all mad but it hurts...!!

He had hurt himself...?! "Kyun dard hai itna, tere liye ishq mein, rabba ve"

This song seemed apt for this situation...!!

Zoya gifts him all that...??!! WOW... Its so touching to see the love b/w them...!! I'm going to miss this FF like hell...!!! 😭

How could Rashid just barge into their house like that...??!!! 😡 Feel like murdering him...!!!! 😡

But glad that he was punished...!!

Also happy that Dilshaad finally realised how blind love had made her 👏 and will pray rashid realizes how blind money had made him...!!!! 😡

I mean he tried to kill his own son...!!! 🤢 😡

He deserved all those slaps and also from Zoya and Asad...!!!

I was wondering if zoya would leave him and go...! But she is Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan and she'll stick to that forever...!!! 😳

The way asad begged her... that scene was just too cute...! 😛

And Zoya preggy...???!!!! Yayy...!!!

I want an epilogue soon...!!!! Like real soon...!!! And start planning for your next story since i'm not going to leave you...!! 😆

I'm going to miss this FF so so so so so much... i cant tell...!!! 😭 😭

Never stop writing... It's a request...!!!

Aashka

Edited by asyafreva - 11 years ago

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

awesome ending to such a beautiful story

i am going to miss it

hopefully u will give an epilogue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#930

OMG...The End.. I can't believe this swapno...thisz is 2nd FF which hooked me IF after ksg exit..I vl comment in detail later. sry. busy wth relatives..