An ArHi SS: Shaadi #2 *Completed, moved to open blog*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Loving this SS. I like this Arnav a lot. Looking forward to the next chapters

Quote

Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Haaye Menlo Park house is a dream complete with a stable and horse! My, he sure knows how to impress a lady! The house seems like one where a young couple may want to start a family and a new life of their own. Does he have dreams of such things happening for them? I still feel like he fell hook, line and sinker of her. It also feels like he is being her fairy godmother, making her dreams come true as she has sacrificed enough in her life. Or this could all be related to some business deal eh?

Was he a tad jealous about Aman Mathur? It was awesome to see her standing her ground mesmerized by him as he comes close to her for the fleeting kiss. I don't think it was creepy of him to sneak a kiss while she was sleeping. He is her husband after all. it was so cute how she was worried when he nearly fell off the horse and when he injured his hand. Tum theek ho in reverse character sounded awesome when she asked if he was alright. You know it sounds more like he is set to make her fall for him and this marriage when he reminded her that she has not taken any vows with him than trying to push her away which is the way she took it.

I love the writing in the first person. It sounds more personal. Have a great trip to India!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#293

Fab Chapter

Love the flirting, it is cute and innocent!!
The car ride with the whole your beautiful thing was really sweet, because he was honest not making it up and Khushi let slip that she finds him attractive which totally made his day

Although Khushi tried playing with fire and tried to throw him off so he stops it, he takes it in his stride and challenges himself that she will want him and more

The house sounded amazing, and Arnav keeps on surprising Khushi

HAHAHA she recognised his touch!!😲im actually shocked but aww Arnav admits to it all!! He is attracted to her and i think what fuels more to this attraction is that Khushi is different, she isn't interested in his wealth and status, she isn't a gold digger, she is intelligent enough to have a good conversation and he is liking that

Aww he hurt his hand and Khushi is feeling the wifey protective feel

Looking forward to the next chapter

Edited by ayshaomar - 11 years ago

Quote

Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

awesome update...

loved it...😊

Quote

adhu11

@adhu11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

beautiful update
both are fighting with der attraction and arnav is not leaving her😉

Quote

dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

loved the update beautifully done loved the new dimension of the charter and khushi is not comfortable around la and she does not understand why arnav seems to want to incorporate her in to his life and has a need to push her into being comfortable with her loved how he keeps teasing her and flirting with her and loved how he wants her input in their life and yet at the end him being hurt but refused her help reminding her about their contract awesome update thanks for the pm.

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

Quote

mbibi

@mbibi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#297

I get this feeling that Arnav is seeing and putting wayyy more into this "deal" than what we see on the surface and much more than Khushi expects...she truly just sees this as ending at the predetermined time but Arnav seems to be arranging things for the long haul...yeah, he says it's for her comfort and for everything she has given up BUT somewhere I feel he is going farther than he actually needs to but of course that's great because it means he sees something in her that makes him want to hold onto her...
But then at the end he is the one reminding her that they didn't take vows? That this is temporary? Now what is that about...aha and I honestly thought that Arnav did the whole getting injured thing to get a reaction out of Khushi, to see if she will take care of him but let's see how Khushi will handle this!

Quote

PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Well Lovely update. Juhi. I loved the way you have opened the thread with the characters Arnav and Khushi's thoughts. I agree with Khushi though. The comeback was awesome and I am here in this FF for Khushi, to see how she will tame the elusive Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada.

So finally both Arnav and Khushi are working out together in this marriage. Loved the way Arnav was concerned about Khushi's PhD and similarly Khushi was concerned about Arnav when he sprained his hand. Both are holding up their vows as husband and wife just that they are not acknowledging it to themselves or each other. But hey it is just one week into the marriage. Some more time and they would be falling head over heels in love with each other. Already the sexual attraction is explosive between these two.

And who is this mystery girl Sheetal? Where did she pop in from? Don't tell me she is a blast from past in Arnav's life. Looking forward to the mystery of Sheetal getting resolved in the future chapters.

PS:- I love the way you write about California. Do you by any chance leave nearby? I lived in California for 13 yrs and when you describe the SF bay or Palo Alto or the surrounding hills I really am very happy. I can exactly visualize what you are saying about. Nice job.

Edited by psarada - 11 years ago