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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#931

Lovely morning after. So natural. You are brilliant in writing these scenes just like any other scene.

Fantastic!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#932

thnks for the link dear...

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#933

Dear Sandhya

This is my comment for the last two chapters,

Beautifully written, it had so much love and warmth to it, made me blush, felt sizzling and hot like..WOW!

Wondering if she rems to take the emergency pill...later

Hope everything will well, not that the chopper arrived too...looking forward to the next!

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#934

Very nice.. Written beautifully.. I am still worried for khushi.

Coz if im not wrong, this is just the noon phase of their relatioanship. That means there's a dusk phase too. N im worried if something bad is gonna happen to end this phase..

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#935

how can khushi do that?
that's why Arnav is angry on her

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#936

Wow an amazing and superb update, I absolutely loved it.

A brilliant read from start to finish,

Wow the morning after was indeed very special and passionate between Arnav and Khushi,

I'm glad they discussed protection and that they have got other options, it was nice of Khushi to admit that she is as much to blame.

The discussion over breakfast was indeed very interesting as they discussed there past relations,

So Arnav was aware about the guy Khushi was with whilst studying, even though they did not date.

Wow the passionate encounter in the kitchen was so hot and amazing, written to perfection.

I can't believe Khushi decided to go for a walk when she knows the whether is bad,

I'm assuming Arnav has arranged the helicopter to take them back but probably panicked when Khushi was not there on his return,

His anger and rage is probably expected, poor Khushi.

The update was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM and the note at the end xx

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#937

I forgot to comment about Arnav wanting to make sure it was not Ana who took emergency pill..

I mean he is such a hypocryte, I cannot believe it, although it was initiated by Khushi 😲

So now what is he gonna do with Aman 😉

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#938

Awesome part... I really loved it... M curious to know about his reaction in the end... Eagerly waiting for the update

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#939

I will remember this piece of poetic writing forever. Absolutely stunning. You really know how to write a love scene. So ascetic and yet full of passion and sensuality. Just the perfect blend of physical and emotional.

The beautiful, sensual lovemaking scene evolving into a harmonious, tender, feel good and thrumming with love, spoken and unspoken, during the morning after scene and then the gorgeous scenery...all ending with the shades of danger, fear, anger and of course the cliff hanger... You covered so much ground in this one update.

I have this bad feeling about Arnav's rage and am experiencing a feeling of dread at What is next for them and how quickly the moment of bliss has been overtaken by something else?

I am also disturbed that Arnav and Khushi are not at the same place in this relationship. She has always been in love and has now proved that love by giving her all. He is holding back ...why?.

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#940

Amazing chp sandy..u hav wriiten drr love making so beautifully..drr feeling fr each oder is becoming more n more blissfull..n arnav my god he is damm hot yaaa..
N dat gf bf convo..freak i laughed so much..of all d topics dey used dis one too talk doring drr breakfast..
N d last line it confused me so much..y he angryly talked to khushi..had somethn happened during dat 2 hrs wen both them wer out..it was actuallu uneasy n weird!!
😊 😃

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