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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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rads73937

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Nice part.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

nice update
zoya is too funny she asked asad the moment b4 her fren arrived
loved the kitchen romance
so riya is in love wit arjun but I thought sakshi was
asad floored seeing riya dimple
loved the convo between him and zoe
continue soon

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
res

Still waiting...😛

Originally posted by: benaz
Thanks for the PM. this was really a nice update. I liked the sexy moments between Asad and Zoya they were adorable. And on the other hand haha Asad seeing Riya's dimples was just so good😛 And as usual interaction between Rathore and Rawte is a treat😃Hope Riya meets up with him soon😊
Looking forward to the next update😊

Thank you! Lol, well I'm glad you liked them. It is indeed, isn't it? Keep an eye out on the horizon!

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Linnet

As usual the update

Was hilarious

Keep writing

Love it

Please update

Soon

Will be waiting

Love
Linnet
😛😛

Aww, thanks Linnet! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: pinkerbell
superb work dear.. awesomee
thanks for the pm

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE
I love every Asya scene u have ever written. Ohh poor Riya

Glad you liked it!

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: treasure11
THIS IS GETTING MORE INTERESTING AND AM VERY MUCH INTO RIYA AND ARJUN NOW 😉

Well that was the whole point so it seems like I'm doing well!

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
thnks for the pm dr...awesome update as usual!!!
asya are super adorable as always...but u manage to create this intrigue abt riya n arjun...which left me wanting to know more abt them...fabulous writing dr!👏
looking forward to the next update!

Thanks dear! Will update soon! Ah, I'm glad people are intrigued now.

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome update...😊

Just love it...😃

Glad you liked it love!

Originally posted by: -RM-
Hell intresting!
I m waiting for next update girl!

Aye, will update soon!

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187
Superb Update..Loved it..
What happened to Riya? She is not fine..
AsYa scene was AMAZING..Loved them..
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM...

-Mariam-

What happened to Riya? Well that will be disclosed in the later chapters.

Originally posted by: deziqt611
Great update! I can't wait for more!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
it was awesome and mind blowing update dear.
just loved it.
what happened to riya?
is she is not fine.
loved rr.
asya are adorable.
do continue soon.,
and thanls for the pm.

Thanks but you've been a follower of Arjun so I'm surprised you don't know what has happened to her 😕.

Will continue soon!

Originally posted by: GOLD.A
Its beautiful Raaz
Nicely written
loved zoya n riyas bonding
n asad tried to make zoya jealous 😆😆
Loved riya n zoya and asad convo
and samjun were as usual too good
Thanks For the PM
Continue soon 😊

Aww, thanks Goldie! They're sweet aren't they? I based them off of my own friendship with my best friend. Will continue soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: nilusoni
amazing
thanx for pm

Thanks!

Originally posted by: MayaB5
Thanks for the pm...lovely update

Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiAsya
Luvd it!!
Suspense nd romance!!
Upd soon!!

Thanks you!

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007
Rss 😆

Tanga forever🤣
unres

ok this part is THE BEST i had read till date. reason? it was as descriptive and triggered many anticipations😃

and my dear Riya entered the story, officially👏 yes yes yes yaaahooo😆 ok i am little confused mode but had little thought about her alleged dying in bacteria case and now living in delhi. is she under danger? some witness protection program? but why she came back after seeing that danish case? becoz of ETF, not zoya right? but why? coz danish related to sik? but how can she help if sik is coming back actually? how her team will react? and only sam know about it, and why she calling him bhai? just out of respect??? too many questions😆

the best part in this was Riya love Arjun, 2nd time Yaaahooo😆 ur love wont be unrequited anymore girl, coz Raz is here to set up u two😆 ok on a serious note good atlst one person realise her love, half work done. and i know earlier the girl in ETF whi bring Arjun's cutting chai and looked at him lovingly is not Riya, coz she was in Delhi, right?😉

now now...Zoya Asad romance. shooo shweet😳😳 and then poor zoya run away even before giving him proper kiss !!! haww such cruel Zoe😆 and Riya came to her house, awesome !!!!

you know what? what i want next? Arjun steal Rathore's phone, dial the last no in his phone and hear her voice.😳 it will be rocking to see his reaction, and you will describe it perfectly. thoda usko bhi tarapne do yaar, let him find her alive and then let the chaos broke. buhahahahah😆😉

please update soon. especially after such a awesome update i am greedy for more😛

With love

me😆

Der se hi sahi, at least you unressed 😆😆

Don't worry my dear, all your questions will be answered because all you need to do is trust me.

If I'm feeling in a good mood I'll set them up, otherwise...lol, jokes.

But yes, that girl who gave Arjun the cutting chai wasn't Riya, it was Sakshi. I have to include her in this FF otherwise how will we have some fire?

Hahaha, if it was that easy, Arjun would've stolen his phone ages ago but this FF isn't being run by 4Lions, it's being run by Raz Productions Ltd. Lol.

Will update soon, things are a bit busy lately.

But you're leaving me...hmm...katti.😆

Originally posted by: Ramlath
Lovely update...

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: SovaSana
wow great update
simply loved it
it seems to be getting more and more mysterious and exciting
plz continue soon this time
thanks for the pm😊

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it!

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Thanks for the pm n it was a lovely update. Love the way Asya romance in your story 😳.

Poor Riya, when will Arjun acept her. Please make it soon.

Zoya is so dumb😆😆...Mr.Khan calling her to his room, giving her hints for the same and she doesnt understand it 😡😡 Poor man... first the kiss was left incomplete, second am sure he had more to do after the kiss but this girl UFF 😡😡. Kich samajh nahi aata isko.

Please update soon n pm me for the next part too.

We'll see. It took a long time for Asad to accept Zoya so Arjun isn't going to be any less. Hey, it's Zoya. When she's in her own world she forgets everything around her even if the most obvious things jump in her face.

Hahaha, I loved this cute frustration towards Zoya, makes me feel accomplished as a writer.

Thanks dear and will update soon!

Originally posted by: rajnid68
finally...u updated..
kya yaar..i had to go back and start from the scratch..
riya and zoyas friendship ...awesome..
asad and zoyas in love..
sameer and rathore...kya gussa hai..
thanks for the pm...

Yeah updates are slow but I'm slowly slowly updating. But thanks anyway!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Thanks for the PM. this was really a nice update.
I liked the romantic moments between Asad and Zoya they were adorable.

Is there a link between Riya and Rathore? Sorry I'm asking but like I said before I don't watch the other serial...

Looking forward to the next update😊

Thank you for replying! What type of link are we talking about? Don't worry, things should clear up soon.

Originally posted by: life4me
Loved the update specially romantic Asad.
Continue soon.

Hahaha, I had fun writing it too.

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
totally a fabulous update...
luv it...
asya are so cute...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thanks dear! Glad you're liking it!

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
wonderful update !!
riya at khans!! good going ...
waiting for more...
continue soon

Thanks! Oh yeah, hells going to break loose now that Riya and Zoya are together.

Originally posted by: anushaandamul
thanks for the p.m😃 update was sooo awsomee and also it is soo romantic between asad and zoya would love to see more of their scenes ahead. update soon and dont at all forget to pm me . i woould be looking forward to it, update sooon.

Thanks! Ah well you know when you have two stories merging together you've got to be fair to both of them and so Asad and Zoya and Riya and Arjun will be getting equal screen space. Will update soon and forget to PM you? How is that even possible?

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Awsum update!!!
Ria is alive!!!!
Arjun knows dat Sameer is hiding something!!!
AsYa 's love sensed by ria!!!
Thanks 4 pm.
update soon!!!

Thanks! Yeah she is! Let's see what happens next.

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Raz,

The update was really nice & for a change it didn't have something scary. I mean I could smile all throughout looking at the interactions between Riya & Sameer, Zoe & Asad & even Arjun & Sameer.
They show or not but deep down all of them do care for each other deeply.

Continue soon,
Love..

It's always nice to read your comments. Well I'm glad I could make you smile. I hope the relationships are becoming a bit more clear now that you have a simple synopsis.

Originally posted by: ABBY92
So Riya has finally joined Zoya at the Khan mansion. I wonder what happened between her and Arjun. Anyways, I'm sure all their paths will cross soon enough with the case !!

Yup she has. Let's wait and see what happens next!

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: akaswan
Hi awesome update 👏👏

I loved it ❤️❤️

Continue soon please 🤗

Thanks! Glad you liked it and will continue soon!

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Nice one! 😃

Asad and Zoya were SO cute. Can't keep their hands off each other, huh? 😉😆 But Riya and Zoya were adorable too! 😳

Continue soon! ❤️

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Thanks Fari! You're a darling for the sweet comments!

Originally posted by: skavya
Superb update...
loved Asya...so cute they r..!!!

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

Thanks!

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
loving ri and sam love :)
waiting for arjun to discover abt ri

Thank you! Let's wait and see!

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007
unres pg 29

😆😆

Read and replied.

Originally posted by: Prashni
Pleasant read! 😃
Like your style of writing! 👏

Refreshingly unique FF! ⭐️

AsYa scenes

Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it! Me thinks a new reader? Welcome!

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 2...

puzzle little...

first asya understanding and asad lovely move...

next the waiting...

3rd the news... asad is more scared then zoya... the prison break
this people who escape... involve zainab murder...

Thank you my dear! I'm glad you're enjoying it and slowly catching up!

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 3...

look like all connected ... rawte vision have something to do with zoya's

JD and danish is very ruthless...

like the brave zoya...

Hmm things are connected...maybe maybe not, let's see!

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 4..

interesting...

Rani is zoya's best friend...
she is also involve in this case...

Nice romantic moment asya...

so sameer and arjun... use to be friends...

even riya can see the love that asya share...
and riya miss it... in her live...

zoya can sense... that riya is there for a reason...

Glad you liked it! Yeah they did and honestly AsYa love isn't that easy to hide 😆

Originally posted by: Linsie

😳😃

Originally posted by: Linsie
waiting for the update...

Will update soon 😆

Originally posted by: rads73937
Nice part.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

Thanks my love!

Originally posted by: Linsie

Hehe, getting there!

Originally posted by: anopama
nice update
zoya is too funny she asked asad the moment b4 her fren arrived
loved the kitchen romance
so riya is in love wit arjun but I thought sakshi was
asad floored seeing riya dimple
loved the convo between him and zoe
continue soon

Thank you! I'm happy that you are enjoying it!

Whoa whoa whoa! Let's see what happens, don't count you chickens before they hatch 😆

Who wouldn't be?

Will continue soon!