ABCD Drabble OS - Ash

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just For My Princess
[ Keywords : AZURE - YESTERDAY - REALM ]

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She was sitting by the river...
Her body glistening in the moonlight... Her hair flowing carelessly over her shoulders... He drank her image n moved upto her... The story about the injustices done to her dynasty in her YESTERDAY were filling his mind...
"Kria..."
She shivered as she heard his husky voice near her ears..
How she had been longing to hear it again... How she had been wanting him to come over to her again...
"Hmm..." She mumbled as she ran het fingers through his midnight black hair.
"Come with me..."
N he took her soft palm into his hand n stated walking in the direction of his castle. She was so lost in admiring his charm, that she didn't even bother to ask where they were going.

The guards bowed n welcomed him.
"Ye Majesty was waiting for thy arrival !"
He stopped in front of his father, who was seated on the throne.
"Father... I want to compensate for the injustice done to this innocent Princess..."
"What r u saying my son? What injustice..?"
"Her father's REALM was overthrown by u ! N she became a pitiable poor, homeless girl... She is Kria... Who was the princess of yesterday, n oughts to be the same of today !"
"So what do u want Prince Reyaansh ?" The king shot, a bit irritated.
"I want to make her the Princess of our AZURE dynasty... I want to marry her..."
"R u sure ?"
"Yes father... I love her... N she loves me !" He turned to her with hopeful eyes.
She was shocked beyond limits! Altough a night before when they met for the first time, he had told her that he would help her. But never did she expect this !!
She stood rooted... N all eyes were on her...
"Dear child, do u love my son ?" The king asked sternly.
She looked into his eyes, which were full of love n concern for her. Her eyes brimmed n she nodded a yes..
"Yes... Ur Majesty! I love ur son..."
"Then it is decided that my son-Prince Reyaansh will be tying knots with Princess Kria tomorrow.." The king announced n the whole court applauded.

She could hold back her happiness, n so she ran straight away out from the castle. He followed her n quite soon caught her by the arm...
"Why did u cry? Dont u love me Kria?"
"U fool ! I love u very very much..."
N she stepped forward n took his lips. He responded with the same intensity n meshed his lips with her rosy petals... Deepening the kiss, she smiled. He broke away n whispered, "Thank u Kria.. I love u !"
She chuckled a bit n resumed the kiss with more vigour..

***
It was hell difficult for me to keep it short !! :P
Well... Do tell how's it.. 😊

Lots of Love
-Aishwarya
Edited by Ash_KriYaansh - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
awesomeee oneešŸ‘
lovedd ittt😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
a really awsm one
it was very cute and nice
you wrote everything beautifully
the tag price suits the name 'reyaansh'
great work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ash!!
Loved d plot of the story..!
A gr8 fairytale..
a charming prince... A beautiful princess..
N princewale princessya le jayenge!!!
šŸ˜†
But seriously luvd the way u penned it down..
The feelings of rey and his hopefulness
The deep down hidden emotions of kria..
Were written by u really nicely..
Bravo..!
N i luvd the happy end n finally they confessed and now to be one..
Marvellous!!
Lovd it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
omg such a acute fairytale...
amazing one dear...
loved it...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
superb.. loved it...

very nycly u have described everything



with love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simple and sweet os
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Really loving this ABCD challenge series
it is really nice. quite different

now coming to the OS
well done. šŸ‘
the piece was really written well
and it definitely did justice to the challenge
the way rey was feelings his emotions and hopelessness šŸ‘šŸ‘
really well penned
thank you so much for the PM

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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Ash_KriYaansh

Just For My Princess
[ Keywords : AZURE - YESTERDAY - REALM ]

***

She was sitting by the river...
Her body glistening in the moonlight... Her hair flowing carelessly over her shoulders... He drank her image n moved upto her... The story about the injustices done to her dynasty in her YESTERDAY were filling his mind...
"Kria..."
She shivered as she heard his husky voice near her ears..
How she had been longing to hear it again... How she had been wanting him to come over to her again...
"Hmm..." She mumbled as she ran het fingers through his midnight black hair.
"Come with me..."
N he took her soft palm into his hand n stated walking in the direction of his castle. She was so lost in admiring his charm, that she didn't even bother to ask where they were going.

The guards bowed n welcomed him.
"Ye Majesty was waiting for thy arrival !"
He stopped in front of his father, who was seated on the throne.
"Father... I want to compensate for the injustice done to this innocent Princess..."
"What r u saying my son? What injustice..?"
"Her father's REALM was overthrown by u ! N she became a pitiable poor, homeless girl... She is Kria... Who was the princess of yesterday, n oughts to be the same of today !"
"So what do u want Prince Reyaansh ?" The king shot, a bit irritated.
"I want to make her the Princess of our AZURE dynasty... I want to marry her..."
"R u sure ?"
"Yes father... I love her... N she loves me !" He turned to her with hopeful eyes.
She was shocked beyond limits! Altough a night before when they met for the first time, he had told her that he would help her. But never did she expect this !!
She stood rooted... N all eyes were on her...
"Dear child, do u love my son ?" The king asked sternly.
She looked into his eyes, which were full of love n concern for her. Her eyes brimmed n she nodded a yes..
"Yes... Ur Majesty! I love ur son..."
"Then it is decided that my son-Prince Reyaansh will be tying knots with Princess Kria tomorrow.." The king announced n the whole court applauded.

She could hold back her happiness, n so she ran straight away out from the castle. He followed her n quite soon caught her by the arm...
"Why did u cry? Dont u love me Kria?"
"U fool ! I love u very very much..."
N she stepped forward n took his lips. He responded with the same intensity n meshed his lips with her rosy petals... Deepening the kiss, she smiled. He broke away n whispered, "Thank u Kria.. I love u !"
She chuckled a bit n resumed the kiss with more vigour..

***
It was hell difficult for me to keep it short !! :P
Well... Do tell how's it.. 😊

Lots of Love
-Aishwarya




Nyc written
Awosm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
it was a cute little piece of work..
it was a great time reading this..

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