ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1)

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Oh my!!! Wat a spectacular chapter.,really a roller coaster ride for us readers. First part was fun and light whereas second half was heart wrenching...didnt expect tat...Rebel's death! Me too cried vd Arshi...it seems real, means ur writing makes us feel so...thanx for d PM.

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raws

@raws

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

hey why u killed rebel...i used to love him...😭

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Just simply AWESOME, that's the only thing I hv to say
Brilliantly written, I must say
I was so hooked up with this chapter till the last line
Thank for the pm

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jaden1369

@jaden1369

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Finally arnav trusts khushi.. awesome update..

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

rebel is dead.. felt very very bad about it.. he was best partner for arnav and he also loved khushi.. how he took apple from her.. arnav was envy of rebel.. God.. felt really bad.. this is biggest loss for arnav.. was happy to see that arnav and khushi have mended their ways and they both were happy as arnav finally understood khushi and supported her in a cause... but the end was sheer torture.. loved the update.. it was amazing part..

thanks for pm 😊

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sana48

@sana48

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Thats is superb update... 😊

poor rebel is dead... 😭

the last part was so sad ... 😔

love the confused and bounded love between arshi ... 😳

over all love it... ❤️

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

That was terrible.

Rebel was killed.

Not only has Arnav lost his friend but also his means of transport.

Don't know what will happen now.

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mbibi

@mbibi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Ohh that was so bittersweet...butter obviously because if rebel :( but sweet because arnav no longer has any doubts about Khushi...but damn, what will they do now? They have no supplies and no way of transport...they really only have one another!