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Manali

@armaity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
cool update dear... sharon is sooo sweat nd bubbly girl nd little childish too.. swayam loved to irritate sharon, update soon n thanks 4 d pm

Thanks dear.Yes Sharon is a little childish but there's a reason behind it.Dnt wrry soon you will come to know about it.Glad you liking the story.Hope you will like the further parts too.

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

CAn u update soon ...

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reet_26

@reet_26

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Amazing update
sharon is so cute
update soon

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

😛I will be happy if u update sooon ,😃

Edited by Kunta_tanha - 11 years ago

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Manali

@armaity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Hey guys sorry for posting the update late.And to make it up,I'm back with 2 updates.Hope you will enjoy them.And keep commenting friends,I love to read your comments.They are really encouraging..I know I haven't yet replied to your comments for the last part and won't be able to right now...but I will within 2-3 days.Your comments mean a lot to me and also the fact that you guys make it a point to read and regularly comment.So for now enjoy this update and don't worry next time I will update soon.

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Manali

@armaity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Part 5

On reaching the doorway of their room,Swayam entered first and straightaway headed towards the washroom.Then Sharon entered and was just looking around at the room.The room was huge and quite classy and airy.She went towards the terrace attached to the room.It was so pretty.There was a beautiful terrace garden with flowers of different colours.Also there was a beautiful seating arrangement,an Indian Baithak under the shade.In the centre was a Japanese fountain.There was a mild sweet fragrance in the air.At one corner there was a swing.She went and sat on it and looked at the sky and started admiring the sky.She thought of taking a pic and immediately went inside to get the camera.Here Swayam was out of the washroom and saw her busy searching something in her suitcase.She was looking so cute which made him feel bad that he did something wrong by marrying her as he's thinking he cannot fall for anyone anymore.Somewhere he felt a guilt that a girl who has left her world and come to spend her life with him will get nothing back in return.But then he brushed it off thinking that whatever has happened is because of her own will.He thought, "She herself agreed to the marriage and she had an idea about everything so I need not feel guilty about it.Also had she not agreed then I would have not got married ever,as no other girl or their families' would agree on such conditions.So whatever has happened she is to be blamed for and not me."That reminded him , "Why was there no one with her during their marriage.And she too didn't seem to wait for anyone.What is it with this girl?Everything about her is different.Why is she so weird?No maybe I'm thinking too much and anyways what have I gotta do with all this?"At that moment only,she found her camera and ran to the terrace.Swayam was standing there confused.He too followed her to the terrace and found her busy taking pics.He nodded his head and confirmed to himself that indeed she was a 'weirdo'.This unknowingly got a smile on his face.At that moment only Sharon turned around and saw him smiling.She too smiled at him but seeing her return the smile he stopped smiling immediately.She found it weird and she too conferred the title of 'weirdo' on him in her mind and went back to her work.Swayam went inside and changed his clothes, then had his dinner which his Mom had sent in the room itself and slept.While Sharon after clicking the pics that is after a long time came in the room.She saw him sleeping peacefully.He was hugging a pillow tightly and had a smile on his face.Sharon too smiled.Then she had her dinner and went to sleep on the bed.She just threw herself on the bed.This impact was so much that Swayam woke up in shock and looked at her.She realized her mistake and smiled meekily.He rolled his eyes,shook his head,turned on the other side and went to sleep by keeping a pillow covering his ears.She looked at him guiltily but then his this response annoyed her and she too turned her back and slept.Both of them slept a peaceful sleep a first since a long time,but both unaware of the real reason behind it.Two complete strangers sleeping in the same room on the same bed both with opposite personalities yet having something in common; at present unbothered by each other's presence and completely unaware of what their future holds for them; have started their journey of life together.The journey which would soon make them each other's better half in the true sense.

Edited by armaity - 11 years ago

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Manali

@armaity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Part 6

The pleasant morning sun peeped in through the french windows brightening up the entire room.The rays fell on Sharon's eyes as she was sleeping facing the window and she turned back in her sleep.A small smile and a feeling of satisfaction was on her face something which even she had no idea of.After a while she opened her eyes and seeing Swayam sleeping peacefully her smile widened.But then seeing that very soon he will end up coming closer to her in his sleep she woke up with a jerk and went towards the window.The nature outside looked beautiful...the greenery,the fruity fragrance in the air,the chirping of the birds everything.She decided to go to the balcony and with the sight in front of her she was entranced.It was a beautiful waterfall right in the centre of the estate.It was an artificially built one but beautiful with ducks and swans swimming gracefully in the pond formed.Also butterflies and bees were fluttering on the terrace.She came inside to get the camera.At that time her eyes fell on Swayam.He had taken off his tee and was on his boxers only.Sharon found herself gawking at him for a long time.Then when he stirred in his sleep did she come back to her senses.She mentally slapped herself for thinking like a pervert and was wondering how come this guy has started affecting her so much so soon.Then she shook her head and took the camera and went back to her work.After some time,Swayam woke up and saw the terrace door open.So he just peeped in and saw Sharon still busy admiring nature and taking pics.Seeing her the first thing in the morning unknowingly brought a smile on his face and something in him told him that today his day was going to be good.He stood there for quite sometime and then came back to his senses and went back to his work.

Both of them got fresh and left for their respective jobs leaving their room in total mess...both thinking the other person would do it.When Swayam's Mom entered the room she was shocked to see the state of the room and spoke to herself, "Oh God,look at this.These two I tell you are perfect for each other-lazy lumps.Both of them and their super-sized egos...both of them expecting the other to do the work and not ready to bow down even for once.Just keep your blessings on my fools always."Then she got the room done with Ramu kaka's help.

At work Swayam was thinking about Sharon her beauty,her innocence,her smile.He was wondering where did she leave on the first day itself.He didn't even know what work she does and where.Also he was thinking how can she leave on the first day itself afterall she's the newly wed Bahu of Shikhawat family.At this point itself a light blush crept up his lips and then on realizing it he mentally slapped himself for thinking in this way and got involved in his work.

There Sharon too was thinking about him only.His attitude,his arrogance and then his smile and his innocence reflecting his true self which seems to have lost or maybe he's faking it to the world.She promised herself to work to set him free from all the barriers he has put himself in and make him live his life fully again.She had heard from his parents that he has always been a fun loving and a social person who enjoyed every bit of life.She ought to get this guy back.She didn't know why but somewhere seeing him in this state hurt her and she didn't know why.She brushed it off thinking it was out of humanity...but was it really?

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Thanks for 🤗 update n Pm . Great n happy that u post two parts ... U have so control in ur writing ...awesome write up dear . Thanks still there is someone who write on Tanha/Swaron ...

Coming to update

Both part is excellent ...cute but still found small , may be me greedy , greedy for reading for work...well they are married but still no connection between eachother even they dont talk to eachother. I think u r nature lover ...u describe nature so well ...I like sharon's childish behaviour she loves to click picture 😛, that is unique her character still we are clueness about sharon... happy they can fell something between eachother...Swayum start smile because of sharon , may be he know the reason soon ...both part is awesome ...

Weired both went for work day after marriage...😲

Update soon

Edited by Kunta_tanha - 11 years ago

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

aswom chap di..

but they are very small

plzz give big updates

updates are asom d way u describe nature nd sharon love 4 it is aswom...
swaym bechara sharon se ke bare me soch rha ha wiredo hehaha

ur aswom writer...

plzz update soon

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: armaity

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<div>Thanks dear.Yes Sharon is a little childish but there's a reason behind it.Dnt wrry soon you will come to know about it.Glad you liking the story.Hope you will like the further parts too.

ofcourse I will like them..

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