Arhi TS : Seashores and Seashells [ Completed ] - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Wow nice story!! Love.how you are writing it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awesome one!

Excited to read more of this!

Please do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Finally padhli šŸ˜Ž


Dii wat a awsm cncpt

Waisa y do i feel dat d proposal came for arnav was of khushi only 😳

Nd he ran away bfr seeing d pic .. Lolll i. guess i m assuming alot bt i wish i m ryt šŸ˜†

Lovd d strt

Poor arnav target of his family shadi karlo shadi karlo šŸ˜†

Love at first sight woh v kahan were he went for some peace

Lolll peace ka liye gya tha dil dekar ayega 🤣 🤣

I m eagerly waiting for d next part nw

Waisa wat will be khushi reactions wen she wil knw arnav is falling in love wid her 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Wow a new story, I'm so excited to read further.

However I'm not sure about it only being a 3 shot, the story seems far too amazing to be so short, lol.

I'm absolutely loving the concept of the storyline it seems very Interesting and intriguing,

The update was amazing and simply superb,

Arnav and Khushi alone on a island, I can already imagine the passionate and magical moments.

Wow Arnav already feeling jealous, also I get the feeling Khushi is the girl chosen by his Dadi.

I'm loving the fact they went snorkelling together and bless Arnav held her hand, so sweet.

Loved the update, it was a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Wishing you a Happy New Year xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Is it Seychelles season at IF? Everyone's talking about it! And its 2nd time i'm reading about it and i so wanna go there.. Literally!

The beauty and serienity and the aura the way you've described it, actually makes me wish.. If i were there! :)


2 indians, living in same city, meet in Seychelles! What a lovely coincidence!

Both are taken in by the other just by the first glance! The phsical attraction and an emotional connection.. All paving way to something deep!


While Arnav is running away from the prospect of marriage, Khushi is here for her last bachorellete trip! Reminds me of DDLj: Jaa Khushi jeele apni zindagi! ;)


he has his past haunting him at the back of his mind, and she is a ray of sunshine, A mermaid, and Happiness! :)


Mints di, *takes a bow* Romance and love story mein best ho!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Seychelles is my dream destination since a Bollywood movie was there which had a song "ghar se nikalte heee'..wonderful choice dear..loved the story..can't wait to read more

Happy new year
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
😊 Loving this new story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Mints, after reading the reading the first part, I already love this feel good story; I'm so excited to read further. But I can't believe there will only be 3 parts😭

Khushi and Arnav basically in the same situation, from the same city, and now meeting in the most unlikeliest of places...and sparks are flying from the first meeting - absolutely loving their chemistry after just one update!

And what a great backdrop to the story - have never been to the Seychelles but reading about it through this story is making me want to go there (hopefully one day!). Hope you get to go on vacation soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
fabulous ts..
looking forward to nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Hello :-D Long time...

See MM Arnav's room is too big, main bhi chali jaao uske saath room main? ;-)

Haaye you did a good thing by sending him at a place where his family cannot reach him. No disturbance now :-D (But you have told me where he is. Main pohuch jaaoogi :-P)


Both are escaping from proposals one because he doesn't believe in the institution and another one because probably she is looking for someone else instead of the one she will be tied down with!


MM you have written this part so descriptively. I am in Seychelles myself through your writing :-D Meri ticket ka paisa bacha :-D


But there is warm beauty to the whole set up, their interactions and meetings


I especially liked a blue green bikini clad Khushi under the water feeding fishes giving a perfect image for a mermaid like you said :-)


Can Arnav be her merman?


Was Arnav's proposal the one meant for Khushi and vice versa before they left for their vacations?


Milte hai agle part main :-D

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