*Completed* Th# 1 ArHi SS: Revenge

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

When I saw the title of the story, I thought this story is something related to Arnav's revenge.However, as usual, you surprised me. You are always good at intense Arshi stories,be it Destroyed or Make me love , the intensity was remarkable.

When you narrated the Love Making scene ,I could sense the lack of love in Khushi. It was like Khushi was just doing it to fulfill her physical need.

No words for Intimate scenes , It was too hot..

You know how to make the readers wait eagerly until next updates.

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Very intense. Looking forward to reading this one. Well written.

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Wow thats such an amazing start.

I loved every bit of it...steamy start.

So wat exactly Arnav did to Khushi that she wants to revenge him.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

After reading the opening paragraph, I literally scrolled down to see if they were ArShi. I wasn't prepared to read the passionate love making, if it were anybody else, what with your latest generosity with PayAsh. Then I read ASR and KKGSR, heaved a relieved sigh and went back to the second para.

Okay, the lovemaking could not have been written more passionately. It was "if his wife could speak" and not "if his wife would have spoken". A mute Khushi ( I guess, a result of Arnav's dealing with her family). You have a way with characterization. A garrulous bold Payal, A shudh Hindi speaking NK.

A very impressive and intriguing start.

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

This time khushi will revenge ...looking forward for some action drama😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

This is awesome Zehra. :-)
I love such surprises.
This is truly new and unique with both loving each other (even if its for some moments) but still having a motive to destroy.
As of now we know it's Khushi who is on a mission to extract her revenge from him in a way which would completely destroy him. Her reasons are unclear but looks like it's for something he did in the past.
Today we have got Kash main tumse nafrat kar paati
I'm sure we'll get his version soon too with Kash main tumse mohabbat kar paata.
And this brings me to a question is he is on for the revenge mood too or will these words be because he knows that she is here to extract revenge from him and so he can't love her, not completely. The more curious part is what would have Khushi done for him to seek revenge if he like Khushi is with her for the revenge too?
This is interesting. I'm already loving it.

Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

That was so intense and interesting update.well i am so happy that you start a new story.
i was thinking this morning that in most of ffs arnav took revenge on khushi or his character is darky bad boy types.but i also want khushi in these type of personality.silly me i know 😆but i really want to read this type of story from a long time.
you fulfilled my wish so thank you so much dear.you really made my day with this story
now come to the update
i thought its arnav who will take revenge from poor khushi and broke her heart completely and so on.but no its khushi who is going to take revenge on arnav.poor arnav seems like totally love struck for khushi.
waiting for next one to know more.i am excited for it
once again thank you so much for fulfilling my wish dear.i got this story and bookmarking it.happy new year dear

Edited by -BROKEN_ANGEL- - 11 years ago