-A day without you is like a year without Rain-KriYaansh OS!!

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Hola everyone!! We are here with a KriYaansh OS. Arey we mutlab Sara (fannism) and Soha (Sohad3fan). It is a different kind of OS, different in means of our writing style. We donot write in this way but this time we decided to do something different and plus this is our first joint work.

Sorry for the grammatical mistakes if any.😳

Hope you guys like it!!

A girl was sitting on her couch sleepily cuddling with her cushion. No one could say that the strong and bold Kriya ghai would even cry while cuddling with her cushion. Yes the girl was none other than Kriya and she was also crying.

"Hey Kri...Kri where are you?"

Kriya heard her friend Aasha calling her. She quickly wiped her face and called her back.

"Hi Ashu, I'm here in the lounge.. Come here".

"Chalo yaar tum yahan kahan bethi ho rehearsals start hone wali hain. Main tumhe pickup karne aayi hoon"

"Acha aarahi hoon"

She got up from her place on insistence by Aasha.

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Everyone was already annoyed by waiting for her in the dance academy hall and it was clear from their faces. She just murmured a Sorry and took her place.

It was their first rehearsal for the International Dance Camp.

He just gave a glance at her and then the rehearsal started.

Ooh ooh ooh
Ooh ooh ooh

They just swayed on their positions

Can you feel me

This line pinched her from inside and she glanced at him. She found him looking at her too and his eyes were asking the same question.

When I think about you?
With every breath I take
Every minute
No matter what I do

"Aaisa kiun hai k mujhe mehsoos hota hai humare darmayan abhi bhi kuch hai", she thought!

"Hamesha issi k bare mai sochta rehta hoon, kia abhi bhi kuch ho sakta hai?" he thought!

My world is an empty place
Like I've been wandering the desert
For a thousand days (oh)
Don't know if it's a mirage
But I always see your face, baby


She walked towards him on the beat and he picked her up gently. She opened her arms freely and moved them like a cage bird just freed from its cage while he swayed her around, then he brought his hand near her face and they look into each other's eyes and then he caressed her face with his hands.

"Rey what are you doing?" one of his friends called him and then he realised he was just daydreaming.

"Oh Mirage!" he said to himself and then resumed the dance with his team mates.

I'm missing you so much
Can't help it, I'm in love
A day without you is like a year without rain
I need you by my side
Don't know how I'll survive
A day without you is like a year without rain (oh, whoa)
Whoa, oh, whoa


"Yes I'm missing her and I still love her, it's clear but do I still have a chance to make it all up again what I have messed up with a lot".

"This life worth nothing without you and I can't handle it anymore, I can't survive without you anymore...But!!"

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"Okay guys good work, the rehearsals are over for today. See you all tomorrow 10 am", the team leader spoke.

Everyone bid bye to each other and left!

It was around 7 pm in the evening and it was already dark due to the season of Autumn.

The place outside the dance academy was an open ground and it was a wonderful site in the autumn evenings.

Rey and Kriya walked out from the hall quietly lost in each other's world. It had been 12 months since they broke up. They shared an intense bond not only as lovers but as true friends. In this journey of their love, some silly misunderstandings took place which was only by their own immature behaviours and extra expectations. All this mess ended up by their decision of breaking up which was just another silly decision in their life. They were determined on their decision but destiny was cruel on them. They were a part of the same dance group and had to stay there for their careers. Today it had been a full year of their break up and they were realising how much they are missing out in their lives without each other.

The stars are burning
I hear your voice in my mind (voice in my mind)
Can't you hear me calling?
My heart is yearning
Like the ocean that's running dry
Catch me, I'm falling


They both looked up at the starry sky and the falling leaves and then looked at each other. They were so incomplete like an addicted without its drug. They knew what they feel but are their minds again playing against their hearts?

It's like the ground is crumbling underneath my feet
Won't you save me?
There's gonna be a monsoon when you get back to me, oh, baby


The weather of their hearts was the same as outside, Cold and Dry! They really needed each other now. They needed the water of love and the hotness of emotions.

I'm missing you so much
Can't help it, I'm in love
A day without you is like a year without rain
I need you by my side
Don't know how I'll survive
A day without you is like a year without rain (oh, whoa)
Whoa, oh, whoa


They stood at their place and tried to clear their minds.

"It's me who did the mistake and I need to set up the things myself", Rey said to himself.

"I have to clear all the misunderstanding between us because I was the one at fault", Kriya thought.

So let this drought come to an end
And make this desert flower again
I need you here
I can't explain
But a day without you
Is like a year without rain


He started moving towards her with a determination of setting up all the wrong things and getting her LOVE back.

She knew that this time she had to make her Heart win so she also proceeded towards him.

They needed the rain of love now, the rain of each other's Love

It's a world of wonder with you in my life
So hurry, baby, don't waste no more time
I need you here, I can't explain
But a day without you is like a year without rain (oh, whoa)


He came close to her, held her by her waist and it started raining. Yes RAINING!!

The rain of both types, the natural rain which was for the cold and dry weather outside and the rain of their Love emotions.

Kriya smiled on Rey's action. She wrapped her hands around his neck and they shared an intense eye lock. Both of them were drenched in the rain by now and that make their feelings even intense.

He proceeded towards her wet lips and gave a little peck then he picked her up in his arms. She gave him an assuring look and he started walking towards the parking lot for his car.

----------The End----------

Hmmm so hows it?? It didn't turn out to be the way we wanted but still please do give your reviews.

Appreciation and Criticism welcome😊

Thanks,
**Sara and Soha**
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resss
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amazing OS dear...
beautifully written...
loved it...
Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Beautiful os..a heart touching one..
Well written.
Loved it
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beautiful os⭐️⭐️
jus lovvveedd ittt👏
amazingly penned down👍🏼
and i like d title of this os😳
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It was a beautiful OS...

Amazing...

Loved it to d core...

U both hve done a grt job...

Keep writing...
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that was a heart touch and wonderful and superb os... loved it
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Awww!!!!
That was chooo chweeettt!!
Guys u r amazinnn!!
That was looovvveeelllyyy !!
I luvd it :) :)
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Oyeee...!!!!
Ab mein kya kahoon...hai tou combined work...bt ziada effrts tum logon ki hain...and i lOved ot...a big wala huggie... 🤗
Or muaaahhh...for bring it out in a soo lOvely and rOmantic way...u are the best... 😳
lOve yOu...not more thn kunwar 😆 😉
hats offf 👏
Edited by fannism - 11 years ago
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Its wonderful girls..the song was beautiful...the way u described their emotions was extraordinary..their new determination 2 get each other back was pleasant..amazing
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Awesome os
Loved it so much and the sng added extra spark in that
Lovely update

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