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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

yippeee me first after sooo long time... 😛


thanks a lot dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Great...Good luck for your future...

thank u sooo much dear
Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update, nice reaction and very strong last line...leaves us wondering how aastha will react
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Posted: 11 years ago
nooo what a shock
he could purpose her for marriage yaar
why abortion????????????
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

nooo what a shock

he could purpose her for marriage yaar
why abortion????????????

no marriage thing from him because according to shlok he has little time left ...and he will definitely want her to lead a happy life after him...

My guess...
Rest jeenia dear can answer 😛
Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE
LOVED IT
SUPERB
VARUN TELLING SHE IS PREGNANT AND ANJALI TELLING AND SHLOK'S REACTION IS SUPERB

Astha is pregnant... Varun spoke looking at Shlok before he could ask anything...

What? Shlok was shocked and stammered, are you in your sense Varun? you know what are you saying?

Varun just nodded in yes...its true Shlok...she is carrying your baby...

While Anjali moved ahead holding him...

Yes beta, Varun is right... she did it for you...Anjali paused while Shlok was looking at her shockingly...

For me?

Yes, ...to give you bone marrow... She spoke in tears...

This means ... Aashka...he paused...

There was no Aashka, it was Astha only...always...she was always there for you...she was always there when you call it dream...Varun spoke...

(she knew, she knew about my blood cancer... he felt broken inside... she knew I am dying...but still she was there for me? Why Astha, why could not you go? I had freed you from my love...why couldn't you move ahead leaving me?

And Aashka? My doubt was right, whenever I touched her I felt it's you...you told me about your pregnancy, I could not guess even...

Why didn't I understand, when you were explaining your husband, it was just me, no one lese...when you were sitting holding my hand, caressing me...it was just my Astha, no one else...But how did she know?

And you all cheated me, you broke my promise? Shlok shouted...

No Shlok, no one broke your promise, she herself found out...she had doubt, she herself found about your cancer... Anjali stopped him...

But about pregnancy? (How can she be pregnant? We never had... we are close but I never crossed my limits..)

Through artificial insemination... ...Shlok...Varun spoke...



HE IS AFRAID OF HER FUTURE NOT HIS...


Sister had to leave from there too ...while Atsha lying on the bed with drip on her left hand was looking at his reaction...his angry face...his painful eyes...when he walked slowly to her and sat by her side...without looking at her face, he held her right hand in his hands...and whispered...you knew?

Astha just smiled and whispered...and you thought I left you? How could even you imagine Shlok...

You could talk to me directly...

Did you tell me? Why did you hide from me? How can you think, I will be so weak to handle the truth...even you know, I am stronger than you...she whispered caressing his face...

I should have told you Astha... i...I am sorry... but I was afraid...afraid of your breakdown...I can't handle your tears , you know...

But when you would be at my side, how can I be so weak Shlok... we can solve each and every hurdle on our way, if we are together... She pressed his hand... I love you Shlok...with my each and every breath...Love is not all about sharing happy moments... It's about sharing your pain too...she paused... if I would have known before, your pain would be half...

Listening Shlok slowly bent and laced a soft kiss son Astha's forehead... I Love you too jaan...

A smile appeared on her lips...you know I was dying to listen these words from you since last five months... She whispered...now everything will be fine...

Ya, now everything will be fine...actually I have decided we will be together now... No matter how many, hours, days or months, I am alive... Shlok smiled...but I will be with you...I want to cherish all the moments we have...

And I too Shlok...Astha smiled with tear in her eyes...now onward you are not going to hide anything from me...

Ok jaan...but you will also follow whatever I will say you...he caressed her face...

Ya, I will Shlok...till my last breath... Astha was very happy...finally I got my Shlok back...


THE WHOLE ASHLOK PART IS NICE

LOVED IT


BUT THE LAST PART IS SHOCKING

HE SAID IT😲😲


So, you are going to abort this child...now... Shlok declared...

Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

no marriage thing from him because according to shlok he has little time left ...and he will definitely want her to lead a happy life after him...

My guess...
Rest jeenia dear can answer 😛

ok no marriage but i am also not favor in abortion
it is her decision not him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

short but beautifully written sooo emotional and superb update...shlok' reaction was truly realistic one...he thought of abortion to save astha from suffering...and astha carrying her baby to save him...what a true love ...million huggies for u dear...muaaah...i know astha will handle this abortion thing well...and they will be together happily...their marriage track coming next week na?as they cann't live without each other...and astha will refuse for abortion and shlok will marry her to give their baby his name????...m I right in guessing...at least aik teaser tu banta hai dear itney long break ke liye 😳


did i say marriage track? no...😉
thanks a lot dear for liking update...do;t jump to marriage...first see her reaction...its about her baby...will she ever agree?
agar marriage hi karni hi then why abortion moreover to give baby his name is not a question here, neither he nor his family is denying the truth that the baby is his? did he doubt even once?
anyways wait for next update...

Let's see what next...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

nice update, nice reaction and very strong last line...leaves us wondering how aastha will react


thanks a lot dear... Astha's reaction? may be tomorrow or in new year...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

nooo what a shock

he could purpose her for marriage yaar
why abortion????????????


he said they will be together...marriage is second option but its about baby, about her life after him...

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