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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

What is the fulfillment of your soul?


Bas iske aage main aur kya kahun? Damn Mahi. This was amazing, like seriously amazing. I wanted to say more but Medha's comment has said it all and all I can do is nod my head and agreement and be like yes, yes, YES!

I seriously can't wait to read more. I loved, loved the way you described Kriya's inner turmoil in the stages that you chose. It was a delight to read. And Rey, I love how shallow and seemingly happy-go-lucky he comes across as.

Seemingly because for him to clash with and be equal to the formidable force Kriya is in your fic, he needs to have a spine of steel, which I'm sure he's hiding underneath his Casanova mask. 😉

All and all, awesome awesome part! Please continue soon! I can't wait to read more.


Thank you so very much Kashishhh🤗❤️
I feel delighted to know that you liked Kria"s portrayal because you are gifted with the quality of decipher things to welll😃
Pheww , I was nervous when I this this part mainly because I wasnt sure whether Rey's character was apt according to the story😆 ... It is relief to know you liked it
I was thinking to make Rey a nerd but that would have looked so typical opposites attract stuff ..

I am super glad to know you liked it yaar , such comments is a treat for writers , it makes the hardwork worth it =D

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
GUYSSS check the page banner made by Aditi aka Nxt_rockstar !
It is uploaded on pg 1 and 7 as well ^____^



Damn isnt it just , just PERFECT ...I am squealing uncontrollably ever since I saw it😆

Kria's expressions define Kria's character in the story and Rey's intense gaze <3
The dark bg adds to the charm and the wise amount of use of the effects makes it more alluring <3...even the font used is alluring ...! <3
Thank you so much ADIII🤗
Edited by -Khwahish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

awsum dii

love it alot..
eepss m waiting to read it..
update soon

PS sorry for late comment
PPS sorry for choto comment m hell buzy..


Thank you so much baccha🤗
Glad u loved it
koi nai study acche se ..All the best 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
intresting begining.
luking 4ward to d story. update asap plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Thats.me.Guni

intresting begining.

luking 4ward to d story. update asap plz.



Thankkk u ^_____^
pakka se
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Nyce start...😃

Looks like... kriya have gone through harsh realities of life in a tender age...😭

First I thought its related to show... however its just a part... but rest is different...😊

So kriya n rey would meet ... they are totally strangers as of now...😛

W*F... hahaha... making her new classmate to adjust in new environment...😆

Ye kaunsa style h welcome karne ka... kriya ke sath aisa kiya toh 2-4 fatke padenge 🤣

Cassinova rey... he's got that charm... 😉

Its gonna be interesting...😎

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
the chapter one was great and amazing start... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: yogini64

Nyce start...😃

Looks like... kriya have gone through harsh realities of life in a tender age...😭

First I thought its related to show... however its just a part... but rest is different...😊

So kriya n rey would meet ... they are totally strangers as of now...😛

W*F... hahaha... making her new classmate to adjust in new environment...😆

Ye kaunsa style h welcome karne ka... kriya ke sath aisa kiya toh 2-4 fatke padenge 🤣

Cassinova rey... he's got that charm... 😉

Its gonna be interesting...😎


Thank you yogini🤗
yes she had been through a lot
Nahh show se different hoga ...bas college campus che😆
Hahhaha exactly 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

the chapter one was great and amazing start... do continue soon and pm me


Thank uu ^__^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow beautiful...I loved kria's part...tat was beautifully written ^_^
Rey's part was oso gud...awesum...do giv nxt prt soon...

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