Arshi FF: Zindagi of Arshi THREAD 2: FINAL EPILOGUE - Pg: 114 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: joe_arhi

Its the first anniversary of ZOA and u choose to seperate Arshi on this occasion 😭.

I'm so sorry dear. I never planned so. It just happened!😕


" Arnav strode fast to Kushi's door. But before he could ring the bell, Kushi opened it.From her red eyes Arnav knew she was crying even a minute ago."This starting itself shows their depth of love.

You said it. How well you understand them Joe. It often brings tears to my eyes to see you seeing them, the way I look at them❤️

Khushi's anger, Arnav's guilty feeling - my heart went out to them.

"By the time he finished his words Kushi was by his side and Arnav hugged her tummy and cried. Kushi held him in her arms and let him cry, her own tears flowing continuously".This shows the understanding and the love they have for each other. This is what missing in La's Arnav relationship. Though La loves Arnav i dont think Arnav could get this type of understanding and love from her. This what makes Arshi special. Khushi could see past Arnav's words and she could feel what her Arnav is going thro in his heart and mind.

BANG ON!!!!! You are RIGHT!😃 This link is what I see as 'love' or would like to define as 'love'. Each relationship is different. Neither can La have such a relation with Arnav, nor will Arnav allow her for that, because they don't connect on that level. It is not La or Arnav's fault. There is a scene in Dil To Pagal Hai. I don't know if I have mentioned this before. But in it there is a scene where SRK confronted Karishma when Karishma realizes that she can love Arnav to any length but she won't be the one for SRK. Because somehow SRK couldn't love her in that sense. When she asked him why you couldn't love me, he said he didn't know. What he could feel for Maya within days, he couldn't feel it for Karishma even after being with her for so many years!!!! He says it is God's will or fate. I had cried in that scene when Karishma had looked up at the sky and screamed at God. I feel sorry for Karishma there and La here. But this is a fact!

Yes Kushi could see past Arnav's words. She could even understand what he will get into if she leaves him. She could see that he is loathing himself. She knows he is being desparate in his selfish nature. When you love a person, you love him/her with all their flaws. Similarly Kushi knows his selfish nature. She knows how he won't be able to come close emotionally with his child, she knows that he is being selfish. And deep down he is regretting his actions and is feeling helpless.

Kushi has all right to be angry on him and close the door on his face saying he betrayed her. But she loves him and knows him. Yes she is hurt by his betrayal, because if not for this, they would have been together now. They had survived all hurdles together, but this one they can't! But she know that if she don't stand by him now, he will break. Kushi loves him and she did her farz!

She stood by him, made him understand what he should do. Made sure that he will abide it. Promised him that she will love him always and encouraged him saying they will survive this. She was suffering the same pain but she became the strong one for him.

I CAN NEVER EXPRESS THE EXTENT OF KUSHI'S PAIN, inside her now while doing all this!!!!!!!


Deep down both of them knew this was their end'. But one didn't want to believe it and the other wanted to vocalise it, but was facing difficulty. - Two souls facing the cruelty of fate.

Arshi lying in Khushi's bedroom with fingers entwined - this would be their last embrace until fate unites them. Though its not a happy scene it would be their last cherishing moment. Khushi was clear in her thoughts but Arnav was afraid of loosing Khushi his only happiness.

"Kushi(emotionally breaking) : It is no more about you and me Arnavji. Till now, no matter what my parents said, what society called me, I never felt I was doing wrong. Because we both loved each other. But now from this point if we go ahead, then it will be the worst mistake we both will be committing." - I loved this about Khushi atleast this would prove that Khushi isint selfish. Thro the convo she had with Arnav it was very clear that she had thought a lot about La and the unborn baby.

That blackmail from Khushi wasnt needed its just my opinion.

I don't know if I see it as a blackmail. But it was the last thing Kushi could do to make Arnav understand. Because nothing else can stop him. She knows he would prefer Kushi living and breathing somewhere in this world rather than seeing her vanish off.

It was just to make sure. Arnav needed that dose, I guess. Otherwise instead of following her car, even at that point, he would have overtaken and pulled Kushi out back again!

The convo btwn them was good. Khushi was speaking for La while Arnav was speaking for his love, his doubts. You answered via Khushi for all the qstns and discussions that were going about the trio.

The end where Arnav just waited for Khushi's parents to take her home and how he drove till the end of the city - My heart was heavy while reading it. He is so helpless. Im just angry that why life should be so complicated?? We fall in love with whom we cant live or we are forced to live with whom we cant love... Will take this as a temporary ending to our Arshi and hope that a good day would come where Arshi would get united.

My heart was heavy too. 🥺


U have hinted about La's change and i just hope she would understand the part which she dint think so far... Hope she understands that Arnav cant be happy with her and he is not as selfish as she thinks.. Also i like onething about Khushi she accepted that she too holds equal share in watever happened but whereas La still thinks that only Arnav is responsible for ruining her life..

Kushi entered this relationship knowing all that she will have to face. She will definitely own up her mistakes.

Waiting for the next update.. Thanks for the PM.

Forgot to mention this Why do this to us 😭 This was damn good but it just adds more sadness to the story - "Another dawn broke. 5 years ago on such a dawn, he had met Kushi in cemeteries. And five years later on this dawn, he found her going away just like she had entered his life. For Arnav, everything ended that day."


Hahahaha sorry dear. But that was needed for a perfect finishing line😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: rk2127

First of all...Congratulation of Anniversary 🥳

Thank you😃

Now about the update...

I didn't accept it but I knew Khushi will react in this way, only 😔. She doesn't want to take the parents away from an unborn baby. I believe their is another reason that she doesn't want to get her family hurt any more with the blame if she stayed with Arnav. (am I right?)

Well she knew she was hurting her parents all along. But she decided to face it for her love. But now mainly she did it for the baby. But then, maybe deep down she didn't want her parents to feel disappointed by her. Maybe, I don't know. We will have to ask Kushi😛

I don't want to think anymore about her pain *sigh*...waiting for you to write about how she cope up and how and why she decided to come back to movies that to paired against Arnav? 😲

😆 That was a good one. But that is again after 5 years from now.😉

Liked the way you made Arnav express his guilty for wronging Lavanya and Khushi, his fears of loosing Khushi, his pain of seeing Khushi this, his pain of loosing his love and the way you expressed of his following her and her vanishing by dawn along with his happiness for life. 👍🏼

May not be the best of your works - that is not true. They way you described their separation and their acceptance that they will love each other all their life and will be in their heart always. update does answers a lot of questions and doubts about Arnav - much needed one's

Thank you for these words dear. It makes me at ease😊

For La, like you mentioned last chapter was her last emotional breakdown and as Khushi expressed that Arnav has hurt her more before coming to Khushi. I think La will be back to be herself, her strong self, one who values her self respect. I don't think she should be depended on Arnav for his love, she may let him be part of their baby's life. The only question is they of staying with parents with loveless marriage as well as single parent after both experience divorced. I think they may call a truce and live together for baby and put an act for the same. I am guessing 😔

Let's wait and see

Will wait for next update...take your time it will be our Christmas present from you 😉

Sure dear😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: jduke

I still don't support Kushi. What is the point in bringing a child to world when both his / her parents are not in love and only one of them wants to work on it.


Why Kushi is making decision for him. -> Because she knows Arnav will never take a decision himself or rather will make the wrong one right now. He is helpless, angry, tortured, suffering. Nobody can think straight in this mentality. If Kushi just leaves him now without showing him the right direction ahead, he is going to destory himself and also his child's life. He might not love the child at all thinking it destoryed his happiness. But that is not right na? The child knows nothing! Or Arnav might just plunge in self-loathing and destroy his life. I don't want to make him next Devadas. And my Kushi is not going to be a Paru who want to take revenge on him and later pine over him. She is showing Arnav what he should do to rectify his mistakes and moving out of his life so that he can do his duties!


Why is she sacrificing and becoming a scape goat at the end of the day. Arnav and Lavanya can be or might be happy in future with Kushi's decision but what about her. I am not a saint and I don't like Kuhi's behavior. Why don't Kushi accept the way Arnav thought like divorce Lavanya but still bring up the child. Lavanya I don't think will agree for divorce at this juncture even I don't think Arnav will ask Lavanya for that. He might just stay quiet and go with the flow. End of the day Lavanya and Arnav happy after sometime and Kushi sad forever. I am kind of heartbroken after reading this.


All I can say is, Kushi won't be sad forever. There is something in store for her too. When the right time comes she will get it. Lavanya had been the scape goat for Arshi's love so far. Now Kushi and Arnav has to be the scape goats for the child to come. Life goes in a circle always!

Who can say if Lavanya and Arnav will have a happy future or not? If Kushi will be sad forever? Wait for some more chapters to see what happened to their lives before they reached the prologue part.


Have patience dear. I udnerstand your feelings. But don't worry for Kushi. She has done the right thing and she will get her due. Trust me😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Khushi only thinking about
La...but what about Arnav?
Awesome update


I have anwered many comments for this same question. So I am quoting the answers I gave them here for you😊

1) Kushi was showing him the right direction. We allow only our loved ones to point out our flaws. Kushi is the only loved one of his life and he knows she is saying it because after she leaves, she wants him to continue living on. She knows his relation with La will be strained forever from now on. But she don't want Arnav to hate his own child for denying him the only thing he wanted in life. Kushi is thinking for him, more than for La or the child. And it is natural. She feels for this man!

2) Kushi could see past Arnav's words. She could even understand what he will get into if she leaves him. She could see that he is loathing himself. She knows he is being desparate in his selfish nature. When you love a person, you love him/her with all their flaws. Similarly Kushi knows his selfish nature. She knows how he won't be able to come close emotionally with his child, she knows that he is being selfish. And deep down he is regretting his actions and is feeling helpless.

Kushi has all right to be angry on him and close the door on his face saying he betrayed her. But she loves him and knows him. Yes she is hurt by his betrayal, because if not for this, they would have been together now. They had survived all hurdles together, but this one they can't! But she know that if she don't stand by him now, he will break. Kushi loves him and she did her farz!

She stood by him, made him understand what he should do. Made sure that he will abide it. Promised him that she will love him always and encouraged him saying they will survive this. She was suffering the same pain but she became the strong one for him.

I CAN NEVER EXPRESS THE EXTENT OF KUSHI'S PAIN, inside her now while doing all this!!!!!!!


3) I don't know if I see it as a blackmail. But it was the last thing Kushi could do to make Arnav understand. Because nothing else can stop him. She knows he would prefer Kushi living and breathing somewhere in this world rather than seeing her vanish off.

It was just to make sure. Arnav needed that dose, I guess. Otherwise instead of following her car, even at that point, he would have overtaken and pulled Kushi out back again!


4) Why Kushi is making decision for him. -> Because she knows Arnav will never take a decision himself or rather will make the wrong one right now. He is helpless, angry, tortured, suffering. Nobody can think straight in this mentality. If Kushi just leaves him now without showing him the right direction ahead, he is going to destory himself and also his child's life. He might not love the child at all thinking it destoryed his happiness. But that is not right na? The child knows nothing! Or Arnav might just plunge in self-loathing and destroy his life. I don't want to make him next Devadas. And my Kushi is not going to be a Paru who want to take revenge on him and later pine over him. She is showing Arnav what he should do to rectify his mistakes and moving out of his life so that he can do his duties!


Hope yours doubts are clear now😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: daljeet


Kushi was showing him the right direction. We allow only our loved ones to point out our flaws.

Agreed!

Kushi is the only loved one of his life and he knows she is saying it because after she leaves, she wants him to continue living on. She knows his relation with La will be strained forever from now on. But she don't want Arnav to hate his own child for denying him the only thing he wanted in life. Kushi is thinking for him, more than for La or the child. And it is natural. She feels for this man!


Here I feel pathetic for Kushi...one shouldn't love like this...it's truly toxic...his kind of love is almost like poison

OMG! 😲Are you saying this???? Eniku inni chatha mathi, SATHYAM!🤣

I'm sooo happy that I could change your hatred for Kushi. I feel like I climbed mountains! I never thought this day would come. Because you were not rational but partial to La. So I thought even if I present Kushi deliberately in good light, you won't accept.😃


See, I am rational on the whole but at times, certain scenes, the unjustices done to the certain characters brings the emotional me out and then I cant guarantee..


Yup. Didn't Viren once said that if Arnav pursues her and something went wrong, it will destory her. This often happens in the case of 'the other women'. There are a lot many examples even in real life. But women of them who could come back and stand strong succeeded. Nayantara, I admire you for it. You are one of the inspiration for my Kushi in this scene. I don't know what happened in her life. But when she decided not to suicide, not to hide in some foreign countries but COME BACK into an industry where she will be mocked to no end, and do films and demand her stardom back, what shall I say, I SALUTE her for the courage she showed. She took the decision, she faced the consequences and she continued with her life. She didn't bow down to wagging tongues, to pressure or depression. But moved on. I love you for it Nayans. Thank you for helping me shape my Kushi here.⭐️

Yea. I too love Nayanthara for that..But for me Nayan here is La. Not Kushi...I am going to be partial again...he he..


After a long time, I cried while drafting for that scene. I do hate Arnav for using La and destroying Kushi's life like that. But, in that one scene, my heart went out to the man/boy in him who was helpless when fate took away the only thing he wanted. Because, that is a state where we all could be. Sometimes one mistake of ours can cost us the most important thing in our life. If that kid had not happened, then Arshi would have been together.

The worst thing that can happen to a human being is to get a glimpse of the happiness that he wants and then being denied it. I consider this to be Arnav's punishment.

Pakshe, my heart felt heavy and my throat got blocked here. He went behind her car till where he can. It shows the extent to which he loves and wants Kushi. He is a selfish man, no doubt. But I am one too. So somewhere I felt for him🥺

I dont feel pity for him though I want to when you wrote like this...but no...am strong on hating him...and I feel happy for his punishment...the day he started thinking about him more than Lavanya, he got kicked out from my good books.and I wont feel any pity..nanayi poyi...avan athu kittanum!!



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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Superb yaar
was vry nice
n ty 4 da pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Yeh toh hona hi tha...how could khushi have deprived a child of his father.
And i completely agree with her decision.
She could have fought with La for arnav but since a child is now involved its obvious that she needs to take a step back.

But what Arnav said is also right how can two people who are not in love give a happy secured environment to a little baby. Having said that i think Arnav has only himself to blame for the mess that his life has become.

I am wondering what La is going to do now? Is she going to be happy living with a man who has absolutely no love for her.

Looking forward to the next update now.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Nice update.
I hope lavanya's true intention will be out soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi thnx..
Wht i meant by the shitall track ws tht khushi's pain n hurt n circumstances are same when after all their harships arshi r together Arnav's past came knocking.
Bt here Khushi's even worse coz the child is arnav's and she's nt his wife.
Read the note. i really dnt understand iF Arnav and LA were nt husband wife in real sense why did they share a room plus they lost their elders whom were they tryin to please. On d show arnav broke off with La coz he dint feel for La even tho he dint realize yet tht he loves khushi or khushi loves him.
Thts wht I meant Arnav here irrespective of wht circumstances were shud hve broken off with La if he knew la loves him spl when he realized he loves Khushi whether khushi wnts him or nt.
I understand LA ws vulnerable after her dad's death.
Arnav ws drunk bt La ws nt. The scene ws nt rape if anythng La ws more responsible for it She cud have stopped knwin arnav does nt love her n I guess he ws thinkin of Khushi during it nt La when he said dnt leave me.
IF khushi were in her place she'd never let herself get lost in the moment.
So all those who think Arnav raped La or used her are wrong. I think if roles were reversed if La ws drunk n Arnav sober he wud b termed as taking advantage of d situation.
Besides La is a party goin girl she's nt so innocent to nt knw wht ws happening she's too clingy. If anythng she hd to make thngs clear b4 lettin herself carried away.

Also in these type of cases alwys the woman is blamed while the man is off te hook. mother's or wives use the term she trapped her son or husband. I mean seriously is the man such a baby tht someone shows a toffee and traps him.
I mean even on IPK Khushi got the tag of the other woman n the most disgusting thing I found on IPK ws the mighty ASR punished Khushi and blamed her character and upbringing status while the snake got away scott free nt once bt twice even after kidnappin ASR let him go jus like tht it ws criminal offence evidence or not if he wnted.
I mean why dint ASR nt blackmail or reined him in by finding his weakness while he tormented khushi using her family as her weakness. Again Khushi ws blamed when it all came out instead of tht creep. Did he really think the man who hd the guts to cheat the ASR's sis wud hve spared a middle class girl with no strong backing. He thought the man who cheated on his marriage wud respect khushi's marriage n nt pursue her or the same Khushi who's ok with a married man wud stick to marriage.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
very nice update just awesome

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